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Any room for an assassin?
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We have a lot of overlaps with assassin, but no dedicated mage.

Honestly no one's going to be forming permanent parties to roll with the entire RP other than small duos here and there, and I will fill in some parties with NPCs to balance out compositions in certain segments.

Go with what you feel you want.
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I thought the songstress was a dedicated mage. A white mage but a mage none the less
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Offensive mage then. Still I digress, composition isn't actually important now, but for the sake of not overlapping character traits, maybe it is a good idea to keep that in mind.
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I'm going with a Red Mage, change my mind on some things.
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Aight.

I'll probably look to start this weekend actually, considering it's a little slower than expected getting some stragglers in, but we already have a good number to roll with.
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@Seirei No Hai I like her. I don't have any problems with her backstory and such.

Although abilities... Well let's see.

Combat Amateur might need to be changed, since crits are normally tied to builds and abilities instead, and that there is no weapon durability. This honestly seems more like an Opportunity skill instead. You can start with 3 like everyone else, as Valdr's opportunity skill are tied to story progression.

So you may need to rethink that skill. I think you should change it out for Dualcast or Tricast (with a specification).

Ifrit's Essence though will do something else. All fire magic up to Firaga can be used without the drawbacks of using a spell stronger than your stats, but only while you have the amulet. Even with that drawback of needing the item, this is still really powerful, so remove the tricast from it and move it someplace else.

Furthermore, Limit Break has changed in how it works, you may want to review that. Your spells are such are fine, but tier 1 spells like Fire, Blizzard, etc. would actually be valued at 3.
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Well I've pretty much edited what I can based on your suggestions. I have some questions though.

Furthermore, Limit Break has changed in how it works, you may want to review that. Your spells are such are fine, but tier 1 spells like Fire, Blizzard, etc. would actually be valued at 3.


What changed in the Limit Break in system? It's not a special attack anymore?
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@ItMeGritty Looking good, although you may want to read over the rules regarding status effects. They should be on the first page. I will probably look again once that's been settled with you.

Anyways, your first Opportunity Skill... Does this mean your dances cost Limit Points? I mean they shouldn't. So that no cost kind of doesn't work here. The double dance is also a bit too strong too. I suggest something like a boost to stats instead, maybe speed or something.

@Seirei No Hai I think even if she's a prodigy, Tricast as a raw skill is a bit powerful, although the triple is limited to just offensive spells... Well that is actually still quite powerful. Like, you could burst some things down pretty quickly with it. How about she can Dualcast normally (white and black magic equally), but if she wishes to Tricast, she would require to use up 1 Limit point (because honestly, Tricast is a Limit Break for some Red Mages anyway) and it would be limited to her offensive elements.
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Made some edits
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@ItMeGritty Okay, that's looking better. I don't see anything that may be a little confusing, so I think that's good to go.

As for @Seirei No Hai, I sent you a bit on the discord.

Anyways, I think I'll start the RP quite soon. It's a bit delayed than planned, but we just about ready.
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@Archangel89 Before I go through the skills and such, I'd like to point out that Songdae is Korean in aesthetic. I mean it's possible for there to be a lineage of Raelin heritage to be in Songdae, but not as a prestigious house. It is also possible to be adopted. Please adjust to how you would prefer.

Anyways...

Mercy will only target one ally of your choice, be sure to specify. If not specified, then it will not take effect. If you change the target, also specify, otherwise your previous target is affected. Maximum range will be 15 feet.

Justice will if you absorb the attack, buff your next attack instead. If it's a ranged magic attack and you attempt to shield bash it, you can send it flying directly at the caster if the value of their spell is lower than your Strength. Although the latter will only work if the spell is like a fireball, so you won't be able to do that to a laser.

Charity's effect is only within around 10 feet, and is stronger the closer they are to him. The target of his Mercy though will gain the full benefit.

Protect and Shell will simply cause weak attacks to bounce off, or strong attacks to be less effective by about 25%. If you are hit by something powerful though, the spell breaks instead, and you'll have to reapply it. Otherwise it lasts 3 of the target's posts.

Might's buff is about 20% and for 2 of the target's posts. It does stack, but not with itself.

Shield Rush's Might buff will not occur if he is already buffed with it, and nor will it reset it's timer.

Consecrate is... Well just lower it's range to about 15.

Lion's Challenge and Bastion are both pretty powerful, powerful enough to be Limit Skills all on their own. Do not underestimate buffs and utility. You may want to rethink these two. Also do note, buffs of the same name don't stack.

Anyways I'll leave you to that.
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