Sorry to note I have to rewrite my response since I had something cued up but @LuckyBlackCat posted twice. I'll have a short response up when I get the opportunity. I'd have more but there's little to add since the scene progressed in absence of Sophia's input.
@A Lowly Wretch Ehh, sorry about that, it's just I figured it'd make sense that the wolf would notice the newcomer. I hope you still have enough to work with ^^;
@VitaVitaAR Hmm, what would Noriko and her Archetype be likely to pick up on about the true nature of this person? They wouldn't figure everything out, but what general idea would they get?
@LuckyBlackCat: Hmm... they'd probably be able to pick on a weird, sterile feeling from them? The idea of something not being quite right.
Also, to everyone, would like to announce that @Raineh Daze is going to be helping me GM, starting with taking up some NPCs so I don't overwhelm myself. ^^;