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Stumped on weaknesses. But once I'm done that, I'm pretty much done. Minus Inventory.
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Got it, I'll start in Dirtmouth having just wandered in. Perhaps fighting a bandit would attract enough attention that one of your characters sees me?


Sure, he could have come over the mountains or through the entrance canyon, perhaps from Brightvale. He could encounter a couple of thugs that wheedle him for some sort of entry tax. Barring that, you could always have him encounter and accidentally set off something like a Ruin Guard, which being made of metal would be so resistant to both cutting and weak crossbow bolts that Galeem's influence would lock him into a long and unpleasant fight, obliging one of the other PCs to give him a hand.
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@Lugubrious know what's also awesome, imgur links actually work for me now I'm on Ps4 and I can copy and paste. I'm super happy I won't be posting half-finished stuff anymore. Other than last night ofc, I stayed up late to get the personality and background to my liking, used the wiki and added a bit to what it said. I can't wait to play, I resonate with Benedict's character like I did with Glenn. Plus I wanted to play a less selfish character.
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@Lugubrious know what's also awesome, imgur links actually work for me now I'm on Ps4 and I can copy and paste. I'm super happy I won't be posting half-finished stuff anymore. Other than last night ofc, I stayed up late to get the personality and background to my liking, used the wiki and added a bit to what it said. I can't wait to play, I resonate with Benedict's character like I did with Glenn. Plus I wanted to play a less selfish character.


Sounds great!
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@Lugubrious just gonna do a few chores and I'll likely be done my sheet soon after.
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Sure, he could have come over the mountains or through the entrance canyon, perhaps from Brightvale. He could encounter a couple of thugs that wheedle him for some sort of entry tax. Barring that, you could always have him encounter and accidentally set off something like a Ruin Guard, which being made of metal would be so resistant to both cutting and weak crossbow bolts that Galeem's influence would lock him into a long and unpleasant fight, obliging one of the other PCs to give him a hand.


Sounds cool. I'm probably going to go with thugs though so I don't super die
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Sheets done
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@Lugubrious Didn't have any Kindred Spirits in mind rn so left it N/A for now. But everything is done and finished for your review. Hope it's up to spec, :D
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@Lugubrious Didn't have any Kindred Spirits in mind rn so left it N/A for now. But everything is done and finished for your review. Hope it's up to spec, :D


Overall the sheet looks quite good! I can certainly appreciate the variety that a supportive tactician brings to the table. The only thing I can say is that the weakness section contains things more suited for the personality section. Weaknesses are something that's an express detriment. So you could say something like Out of Service, which means that his reflexes and stamina have decreased since he retired from the battlefield after the Saltiron War. Or One Note, which indicates that because he's a physical fighter who fights with a sword, he's stuck as a short-range fighter with only his practical skills to spice things up instead of magic, acrobatics, or other such abilities.
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@Lugubrious The one note thing sounds good. I just have those weaknesses there as more of a rp weakness than a mechanical weakness as they just expand upon his personality. I left them in and added the one-note thing.
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@Lugubrious I can remove the Mirthless & Sober for Out-of-Service, if that's a bit better?
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Yeah, that's everything. Go ahead and put him in the Characters tab then.

You're in much the same boat as Squash, have you considered where of the three options you'd like to have Benedict start?
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@Lugubrious one last thing, may I start with a small amount of coin?

Can you repeat the three options? Or are they on the last page?
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@Lugubrious one last thing, may I start with a small amount of coin?

Can you repeat the three options? Or are they on the last page?


You can start with a couple hundred max. The three options are definitely visible in my latest post/s, but to simplify, they are the school town Gutsford in the Dystopiascape (not far from the metropolis Midgar), the fading town Dirtmouth (above the yawning Chasm), and the icebound Edinburgh MagicaPolis.
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@Lugubrious thank you, I will add that to my sheet. And I shall choose momentarily. :D
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I'd say Dirtmouth, Gutsford & Edinburgh feels too modern. So ye Dirtmouth. Possibly doing reconnaissance on Bandit activity? Any suggestions?
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Here's a thought what if for a time Benedict had been operating in Enbarr for a time? Would that be a stretch or may he too have been working in Brightvale? Enbarr seems close enough to Brightvale.

@Lugubrious Actually now that I think about it Gutsford will be my choice, Benedict will have arrived there from Midgar possibly. Or can I start in Twilight Town where Midna and the Koopa Troop were?
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Pardon me, but am I just going to have to make an entrance post, or will this be discussed in PMs?
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Pardon me, but am I just going to have to make an entrance post, or will this be discussed in PMs?


Oh, sorry, since we ended up talking about your situation and everything related to your start on the OOC, I didn't think there was any need for PMs. Was there more information you wanted or needed?
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Oh, sorry, since we ended up talking about your situation and everything related to your start on the OOC, I didn't think there was any need for PMs. Was there more information you wanted or needed?


My bad! I misunderstood.
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