[OOC] My Hero Academia: Another Story

[Krytavius]

Seth

[Heartfillia]

@SimpleWriteris there a smoll possibility of a chance of an opening in this?

*pokes*@Riegal

Edit: Helps to read the last page of the ooc huh. *whoops*

Edit Edit: There are a ton of girls in this one! lol I kinda wanted to make one but I dont knoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow would you prefer a boy or girl?

Also

If you have a discord that would be even better to comunicate, i'm sure I have a ton of questions

[TheWendil]

@Krytavius, @Heartfillia

We will only be accepting one more character before closing applications. Make your CS @Heartfillia, and then we will decide who among you two we will accept as the last character slot.

[Flood]

Hey, I'm gonna be throwing my hat in the ring too, should have a CS up within the next few hours.

[TheWendil]

@floodtalon

You will also be grouped with @Heartfillia and @Krytavius. We will decide among you three who will get the last slot.

[Heartfillia]

@TheWindel

o-ok!

[Krytavius]

Alright understood.

[Heartfillia]

@TheWindel would you prefer a boy or a girl?

-nvm I decided finally ;P

[Mixtape Ghost N]

@floodtalon

You will also be grouped with @Heartfillia and @Krytavius. We will decide among you three who will get the last slot.

@TheWindel

A fight to the death is neccessary

[Heartfillia]

Renard Sparks

Theme

Hero Appearance



Renard stands at around 5'9" and is exceptionally strong and more mature looking for his age. It's not uncommon for him to be mistaken for someone in their 20's. His muscles are not massively bulky but he has good muscle mass and tone. He is shockingly quite agile for his size. He normally wears a fitted black shirt and Jeans all the time when he's not at school.

The hero costume is the same as his fathers, *who is pictured in the suit* Except for the face mask, only his father wears that.

Name:
Renard Sparks (Real last name : Beaumont)

Age:
17

Gender:
Male

Hero Name:
Bolt

Quirk Name:
Electro Kinetic

Quirk Type:
Accumulation

Quirk Description:

Renard can generate electricity within his own body by simply moving around. If he stops the charge can hold for a few minutes before it starts to ebb away. Depending on the activity he’s doing depends on how quickly it charges. If he is simply walking around or writing, something that doesn’t take much effort and he touches someone, it’s as strong as a static shock. But running around he can charge up a couple thousand volts, enough to knock out people out (or defibrillate someone).

He is able to control the voltage of it so he’s just not going around killing people with each attack. At the moment he can't 'arc' or shoot out bolts of lighting. So the only way for him to actually hit his target is to touch them. *This can be maneuvered around if he’s touching a conductive material that is touching his target as well.

Because of his body handling a large amount a volts, it makes him highly resistant to burning and makes him a lot warmer than most people on average.

Water causes him to involuntary discharge his electricity.
He needs to build up his energy to use his stronger moves. which is usually by moving around. This is why he's in excellent shape because he is constantly moving.
He can accidentally shock his allies if he's charged up and they touch him with out him knowing they are going to.
He'll lose static energy if he isn't moving around and doing something for too long.
Using his stronger moves eats away at his electricity and/or causes muscles seizures, the severity depending on how much he used at one time.

Inventory & Possessions:
- He carries a phone (with a special faraday cage like case around it so he doesn’t randomly fry it.) along with wallet, keys etc.
- He normally wears leather gloves all the time so he doesn't have to worry about shocking people. He can touch people while charged and not shock them, but its easier to wear the gloves so he doesn't have to worry about it all the time.
-He doesn’t have much possessions, his father constantly has to move around a lot and quite quickly at times so he and his sister have gotten used to living with the bare essentials. He can fit all his possessions in a duffel bag. Only thing noteworthy of mentioning are pictures of his mother.

Sample Post:

Renard sat on the couch in his ‘home.’ If you could call it that. Looking around the place it was clear that there was no womans touch anywhere. Basic couches, coffee table, and a tiny table for two in the kitchen. Spartan was the word for it, well mostly, there was a shelf on one wall in the main room that had a bunch of pictures of a woman on there. Mostly of her, one of them of just his parents on their wedding day and a lot more with both his parents and his kid sister. It was a shrine to his mother who was murdered when he was only 10 or so.

He was currently watching the news as a special report came on about a famous or Vigilante name Defiance. The man was known throughout the United States for suddenly appearing in random cities, as well as even other countries. Always taking out some of the more dangerous villains or criminal groups before escaping from pro heros who arrived on scene and tried to arrest him because of his ‘criminal’ activity of using his quirk without a hero licence. Despite authorities deeming him a criminal, he won the hearts of the citizens of the nation. As he did in all accounts acted like a true hero. He was certainly Renards hero, he wanted to become like him, except that he didn’t want to be running from the authorities like Defiance did at the same time.

The news report was a special live one, where a reporter happened to be in the area of the fight that broke out. Renard smiled as he leaned forward, watching his Hero in action. Defiance was known for his super strength and his ability to control electricity with ease. No one really understood what the quirk exactly was, as he never went out to explain it. The fight was quick as it normally, a few cars crushed and walls smashed through, He wasn't the most elegant of 'heros' but he always got the job done. mostly before the pro hero's came onto scene. and tried to arrest him, sometimes finishing it while fighting off the very hero's that were supposed to be doing what he did.

He sighed and picked up his empty dish to the sink to wash it and said out loud “Welp… I guess dad is going to be late coming home again tonight…”

What!? he heard from one of the bedrooms. His little sister running out in her pajamas and looking at the TV with wide eyes. "Dad said he was going to be home early and help me with my homework!" She said with a whine in her voice.

Renard laughed. "Help with homework?! We're talking about the same dad right? The one who stares at a math book like its a text book on philosophy? You know he's busy trying to finish what he started so we don't have to be in hiding anymore."

"I know... she said while trailing off.

"Also, whats wrong with my help? I help you all the time on your studies!"

She laughed, "Yeah only for a few minutes, Then your phone blows up with calls and you suddenly get busy.

Putting up his hands with a defensive look he was about to argue that point when his phone dinged... His hands falling to his side in defeat while his sister only raised her eyebrow with a look that said 'told you'. He sighed and a goofy grin appeared on his face. "I can't help it that I'm popular with the ladies."

His sister scoffed and walked back to her room.

Drying his hands he called out, "ALRIGHT ALRIGHT I PROMISE I WONT ANSWER ANY TEXTS YOU TWERP!" *Ding* He pulled his phone out seeing who it was. "Riiiiight after this one..."

Photo op!

[Flood]

Vulcan

Jane Vitaz

Vulcan

Hero Outfit

Appearance: Everything about Jane stands out, from her height of 6'0, her curvy build and revealing clothes, she has cultivated her appearance to be as eye catching as possible. This extends to the way she dresses as well, being reminiscent of the punk scene with a dash of rave culture thrown in as she decorates herself with various electronics.

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Quirk Name: Eruption

Quirk Type: Emitter

Quirk Description: Jane is capable of producing super heated ash from her body, burning at such high temperatures that the color changes to a light blue. She is also capable of manipulating this ash within a limited distance, using it for defensive or offensive purposes. This ash is produced from dead skin cells and other such byproducts of her body, meaning that she can only produce so much at a time. Also worth nothing is that this ash must be 'ignited' so while it cannot be utilized as effectively underwater, this ensures that Jane doesn't constantly burn through her clothes due to her Quirk's high temperatures.

Inventory & Possessions:
-Her costume and clothes, highly resistant to high temperatures (her clothes being less so of course)
-Wireless headphones, a smartphone of recent make, a backpack to carry around her stuff
-Two small plastic bags filled with her ash, ready to be ignited at any moment should the need arise
-Her costume also contains ash that she has saved up, that way she is not liable to run out in the middle of a fight.

Sample Post:

Rising Temperature

She looked over her room with pride in her eyes, finally having gotten everything packed for the big move. It was a herculean task to say the least, choosing the most important stuff to take with her. Her headphones were the first thing she had packed, a no brainer to say the least. Next was her wireless speakers, that way she could rock out in her room. A few posters of her favorite bands, clothes she would be wearing regularly. After that things started getting hard, should she bring the signed CD from DAFTROCK, or should she bring the handheld game system she never returned to her ex-boyfriend? Should she bring her pillow, or should she bring that cool stuffed animal she also never returned to her ex-boyfriend? She really stole a lot of stuff from him, probably should return that at some point.

Then again he was kind of a dick.

Regardless, after an entire day of packing she had finally gotten everything together and was ready for the drive to U.J Academy. And that drive was... 3 days away still. "Ahhhhh, why can't I go there now! Why do I have to wait for everyone set up the dorms, why do I have to wait for school to officially start, damnit this is the one time I'm actually excited for school and it won't start already! AHHHHHHHHHH!" Her muffled yelling was audible from the kitchen, her mother shaking her head as she chopped up carrots for tonight's dinner. "Jane, did you remember to pack your clothes last? You still need something to wear for the next few days you know!" Another muffled scream tore through the walls, followed by several thumps as Jane tore her clothes out her traveling bag. Just another day in the Vitaz house.

[Flood]

@TheWindel@SimpleWriter@KoL

Finished my CS. Feel free to peruse at your leisure.

[Krytavius]

Will we be finding out sometime tonight?
Not rushing judgement just wondering.

[TheWendil]

@Heartfillia

Wouldn't it make more sense to say he learns to arc his electricity in school and part of his training as opposed to starting off with it?

[TheWendil]

@Krytavius

A Quirk like this would have to rely on the player affected by it to give some permission lest it be godmodding. That, and mental Quirks are usually tricky to balance and handle. I'm not sure about accepting it on my end.

@floodtalon

To ignite her ash, it works through an internal system of her body, yes? By her Quirk?

[Heartfillia]

@TheWindelI could do that! I just threw it in there cause it sounded good. But totally down for him learning it while at school.

[Krytavius]

@TheWindel

I was going to make him rely on his hand to hand the most as he hates using his quirk because it affects him also.

I also tried to make sure he had his limits. It only lasting five minutes, only being able to use it twice a day, and it affecting him fifty percent of the time. (Meaning he would not be able to fight just as well and needing to rely on his classmates)

Would it help if I changed to him only being able to do it once a day, only use it on one person, and affect him hundred percent of the time?

[KoL]

@Krytavius
I too find that quirk impractical because mind control abilities are too power game-y for my tastes most of the time, regardless of restrictions in their use.

Also, I find the overall presentation of the CS a little below the others, most noticeably where it concerns text structure.

@Heartfillia
I think he's mostly ok. Just reducing his degree of control over his quirk, like @TheWindel said should be enough to make he a more student-y character.

@floodtalon
Supposing that your reply to @TheWindel's question ends up being satisfactory, you are alright with me as well.

[Heartfillia]

@KoL sounds good! ill edit that out then.

[Flood]

@Krytavius

A Quirk like this would have to rely on the player affected by it to give some permission lest it be godmodding. That, and mental Quirks are usually tricky to balance and handle. I'm not sure about accepting it on my end.

@floodtalon

To ignite her ash, it works through an internal system of her body, yes? By her Quirk?

@TheWindel

That is correct yes.