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@Sir Hawke Looks pretty good! Does Lera still live in Germany, or did she move back to the Ukraine? What language does she principally speak? Finally, if she didn't know that she was Fragmented or even what that means, why did she agree to answer the letter and come on this trip? Did someone she know encourage her perhaps?
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Oh wow this blew up while I was working xD
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@blubirb Oooh, very nice! I assume he just finished his first year of his master's study? Also, what's the name of his parents' fashion brand? Finally, what does he think of the letter and the trip? What's the thing that pushed him to pursue his soulmate despite resenting being Fragmented?

I don't really have much else to say XD Well done! I really like him!


Yep, that’s correct! Sung-il will soon be in his second year of grad school.

I have to admit, I’m not the best at creating brand names hence why I left it pretty vague :’), but now that you’ve asked, I think I’ll call it “C.M.E. by Ji & Woo”, which stands for 처음 만났어요 (cheoeum mannass-eoyo) meaning, “I met you for the first time”, as a sort of nod to his parents’ first memories of meeting each other and falling in love since they’re sappy like that. Also, as a disclaimer, I used google translate so the translation might be off, but that’s the general gist of what I wanted it to mean haha!

The resentment mainly stems from feelings of helplessness and vulnerability. Like his parents, Sung-il’s a romantic and hopes that he can someday also have the sort of unbreakable bond that they have, but the idea of being unable to live both mentally and physically without his soulmate frightens him so terribly to the point where he’d rather he didn’t have the mark at all. Basically, he does want to find his soulmate, but feels pressured by the fact that he has no choice and HAS to find his other half or he’ll suffer a lonely existence as someone Lost. He was surprised to receive the letter at first and while he knows he shouldn’t get his hopes up, he can’t help feeling excited for the trip, knowing that this could be the opportunity he’s been waiting for to meet his soulmate.

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@blubirb What a cute name for a company! I'm not worried about Google translate lol, we'll all just pretend it's perfect ^_^ Thank you for the explanations!
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I find it a bit amusing that we only have one straight character submitted so far. Makes me chuckle to think of the IC reasons for it. FRX, all the reasons I can think of for the twins to make it so on purpose are funny.
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@SmokeDragon Whoops, you caught me, there is no plot, it's just one big gay party XD

Speaking of one big gay party, everyone should make sure they come join the Discord!
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Hey guys, it was brought to my attention that I never wrote up the actual letter you all received!


The letter was written on quality stationery in impeccable cursive, and below the twins' names it bore each of their signatures; Isaac's in blue, very proper and loopy, and Raphael's in pink, more hastily written and angular. The [Name] part was replaced with your character's first name, of course.

When you sent your acceptance, you received plane tickets and instructions on how to go about getting to the estate, called "The Winds". The gist is that you'll fly to a town near the mountains and either be shuttled up to the estate along a narrow mountain road or flown in via helicopter, which would pick you up after you got off your flight. You can choose your method of transportation, but for simplicity's sake I'd say none of you happened to share a shuttle/helicopter with your soulmate. This way you don't Reunite before you've had the chance to talk to anyone!
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Milo Thatch


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Name: Milo Thatch
Aliases: Miles, Tails
Age: 21
Gender: Male

Appearance


Height: 6'
Weight: 170lbs
Build: Slim
Eyes: Forest Green
Hair: Ginger
Skin Tone: Caucasian
Tattoos/Scars/Piercings: None
Personal Style: Milo tends to lead towards the more comfortable aspect of style. Opting to wear plain white shirts, fitted khaki pants with the pant cuff rolled up high enough to see miss matched colored socks, as well as a pair of leather boots. He almost always has a leather messenger bag with him along with his Ipad, Apple Pencil, and Keyboard Cover. Milo tends to wear 5 to 6 leather and corded bracelets to cover up his black band, part ways for the stylistic look it gives him as well as to avoid any more of those capitalistic hacks who try to pawn off love to him on a daily basis.

Sexuality/Personality



Sexuality: Homosexual
Personality: Milo is a bit of a skeptic. Though he knows The Fragmented exist, and that he is in fact one of them, he views the whole notion of it as just some new capatilistic gain. Thinking that corporations and movie makers played up the idea too much when the chances of even meeting another Fragmented was slim enough, and believing they take advantage of this sliver of hope to cash in on the most life threatening opportunity one could have. Aside from all that, Milo is a fun loving guy, always happy to help those who need it even though he’s endlessly tired from his job as a Barista where he almost always hears some guest say to him “Hey baby, are you fragmented? Cuz I’ve got that missing piece ;)”


Biography


General History: Milo was born and raised in Orlando, Florida. He’s traveled to a few other states every now and then, but is mainly just stuck in Orlando with work and friends. He is the son of two well off parents who constantly offer to aid him in his endeavors, but he insists that the make it on his own. Growing up Milo was a fairly carefree child, paying little to no mind as to the world around him, save for what he cared to look into. He watched many shows where love triumphs all, or the guy always gets the girl, and grew up seeing the same plot and hook repeated until he realized that it would only ever manifest that way if it was scripted.

His parents gave him everything he’d ever wanted, and they help him out as much as he allows, but for the most part Milo spends his time at work in a coffee shop listening to horrible pick up lines and watching countless dates play in front of him. Perhaps it was this notion of seeing all of those around him so maddeningly “in love”, while he could scarcely get a decent guy to look his way, that caused him to have such a bitter outlook on life in regards to romance. He see’s the band etched into his skin everyday and swears that his soulmate must either be one of antagonism or platonic love, two pieces that many a script tend to leave out unless it inevitably ends up being love at the end.

Milo currently lives in a two bedroom apartment, and has his friend Ana who spends almost all her time there. They’re as close as can be, and if it wasnt for the fact that she’s not fragmented, theyd of sworn that they had a platonic soulbond with one another. He has a pet cat, an orange tabby named Goose, who is a fierce cuddle monster and avid sleeper. Whenever Milo is too busy at work or working late, Ana is always there with a spare key to help take care of Goose when needed.


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Habits: Leg shaking, Nail biting
Careers: Barista & YouTube Content Creator
Fears:
    ★ Heights
    ★ Dark

Likes:
    ★ Pocky
    ★ Coffee
    ★ Tea
    ★ Rainy Weather
    ★ Pub Subs
    ★ Gaming

Dislikes:
    ★ Romance Movies (Satirical Rom-Coms are ok)
    ★ Hot Weather
    ★ Black Coffee
    ★ Mushrooms
    ★ The "Idea" of Romance
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@Trainerblue192 Can Milo be my pick-up line ghostwriter? xD

He looks great! All I want to know is, what made him accept the offer in the letter?
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@Obscene Symphony lol, you'll all see once it starts but tech he didnt
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Hey everyone, I've added the letter information to the OOC OP, and if you take a look at the 0th post in the CHAR section, there's some new information on your lovely hosts!
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@Ejected @Days @Hedgehawk and anyone else who's interested in submitting a character, there is now a character sheet deadline! Please have your sheets submitted by this coming Tuesday (July 30)!

(And if any of you have withdrawn your interest, please let me know!)

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@Ejected I am so glad Tommy is already in a relationship. I was hoping we'd get some people who were already attached!

I really only have a few trivial questions. What sort of build does Tommy have? I only ask because the height and weight don't seem to quite match up with the image you have for her, so some clarification would be great. As well, she would have just graduated, right? She took music production; does she play an instrument? Think Tommy will be miffed about the smoke-free environment at the estate?

Was Tommy worried at all about becoming Lost? Or was that not something she really thought about?

Otherwise, if you could brighten her text colour up a little bit, I'd appreciate it. Blame my eyes, they've been my downfall on this site for years XD As well, I don't mind the coloured body text in the sheet, but if you could use the default white when we get to the IC, that'd be fantastic.
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Oh Hell, I see what you mean. In my defense, I was half-asleep when I was typing some of this lol. Sorry!

I have moved her weight down to around 150 instead of 180 and added a bit more about her overall build in the appearance section. She graduated a year ago at 21, and has picked up some keyboard & singing skills throughout her few years of producing. However, she mainly uses beat making software to create her music.

She'll definitely be bummed that she can't smoke when she wants, but she'll get over it pretty quickly.

Tommy hasn't thought much about becoming lost; She always figured that she'd run into her other half at random.
She's also afraid of what will happen after she does find this person, so she never really put as much effort into searching for them as others do. And no problem, I'll brighten the color! Let me know if what I have now is okay!
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@Ejected Everything looks great, thank you!
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Hope you don't mind me tossing my hat in the ring.

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@hagroden Thank you for your character submission! First off, I really like how you incorporated the side effects of being Fragmented into Breck's social difficulties. It's a great example of how being Fragmented can impact you even before you become Reunited or Lost, and I'm glad you took advantage of it.

Small detail, but important: Fragmented marks only appear on the right wrist. So if Breck lost his right arm, his Fragmented mark is just gone, won't reappear on his left wrist or anything like that. His Reunited mark, however, will appear somewhere on his existing body when he finds his soulmate. Along that same vein, it's not quite plausible for Breck's family not to have considered him being Fragmented; while it is very rare, doctors all over the world are aware of it, and would see the signs and explain the situation to the parent(s) when a Fragmented child is born. It also would be noted on his birth certificate, medical records and any other official identification, such as his passport and driver's licence/state ID (or whatever Americans have in place of a driver's licence for ID when people can't drive).

While I like the character concept, I have to admit that his education and business, well, you're squeezing a lot into 25 years. I'm also a bit concerned about his company specifically, since it does clash with some existing world lore. I'd love to talk to you over discord if you would, so we can discuss more easily ^_^
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@Hero Looks good! Can you elaborate a bit on what Shiori thinks of the letter and the trip? mostly cause i'm nosy
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