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@DarkRecon if you need any help with character creation and the like, feel free to reach out to me! Always happy to have a convo about world-building

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Hi all. It's been awhile since I last posted anything but I have been talking to Hitman about character designs. While I had one, I figured I post here what I have so far. It still needs "face claims" and some color but the info is all there so I figured I show it to you all. Though I had made a second character too so Hitman, here's the other I made when I had some weekend downtime though the character itself isn't original and piggybacks off of another approved character. At any rate, here's the two:

Name
Unknown

Hero Name
"Alpha" and "K Nine"

Gender
Male

Age
22

Date of Birth
July 14

Physique
**General description of your character's appearance. Please include hair color, eye color et cetera if unclear**

Blood Type
A+

Occupation
Government trained now turned Hero.

Side
Hero

Affiliation
H.E.R.O.

Tier
C

Personality
Because of his experiences, Alpha is the quiet type. While he tends to keep to himself, his work and anything he's does during his downtime, he does speak when addressed by superiors and those who outrank him. The only time he actually communicates a lot is during jobs, missions and similar physical activities.

While he does avoid socializing, it's said that he knows how to hold a normal conversation.

Backstory
Much is classified of the government trained hero named Alpha or K Nine in law enforcement circles. Why a super such as him was placed in a government trained program over, say, Hero One, is also a mystery in itself. It's said, though, that Alpha had come from a normal mother and father but both had jobs with the military. The father being a soldier and the mother a medic.

But for those who dig a bit into it, they would discover these general details.

Back in the day, the drug called "isolene" was starting to make it's rounds in some of the major cities. Quite obviously, a drug that temporarily disables superpowers was like gold to every criminal to supervillian at the time. Alpha's father was helping lead a squad at the time and they had tracked a shipment of the stuff to an abandoned building somewhere in New York. His team raided the place and secured both the Isolene as well as the criminals guarding it. But what they didn't know about was that said criminals were being led by a secret supervillian behind the scene's.

And said supervillian wasn't happy.

The supervillian soon got information about Alpha's dad which led him to the home...at the time the suervillian showed, a young Alpha was with a babysitter. And when the supervillian was about to send a deadly message at his expense...he awakened to his powers. It's said that Alpha had launched an explosive wave of energy that did little structural damage to the home but badly injured the babysitter.

But it killed the supervillian. Records aren't clear but it's rumored that Alpha was only six years old at the time of that event and it traumatized him for life.

Afterwards, it's said that Alpha's parents did their best to help their son recover using their military connections. Soon, it led to him being transfered to private schools. It was sometime later that Alpha began training to control his powers at private military facilities. It's not clear what specifically happened during his time training and growing up but because of the incident, his parents made sure nothing about Alpha's personal history was revealed for fear of "vendetta's" from those wishing to do harm to either him or his family.

Then, years later, word quickly spreard about a government trained hero who took the time to help normal police officers and related law enforcement agencies across the USA from investigations to raids on suspect locations. It was because of this that he was then transfered and accepted into the H.E.R.O. program at Hero One by special recommendation.

Power
"Ki Control" - A rather bland superpower, Alpha has the ability to "weaponize" or "manipulate" his own bodies energy like you may see in cartoons and anime. He's still currently learning on the various ways he can use it but at the moment, he can use it to generally power himself up slightly with an aura around his body to "super soldier" like levels. He can also use it for defense to help block attacks. Even bullets bounce off him if he prepares for it. He can also heighten his senses: his vision, hearing and smell can be enhanced. Plus, he learned how to heal himself with his power. He's also been training to heal others with his power but he hasn't perfected that technique yet. And while some say he could even do an actual "fireball" attack from video games, Alpha had said that it was "a waste of energy compared to firearms". He's still learning so other abilities may present itself along the way.

OTHER- Despite most of the info being classified, vague or lacking many details, it's rumored that Hugo Powers and Christina are fully aware of Alpha's history and might even know his parents. It's said that Alpha was transfered to Hero One to learn how to be a more "normal" person when not on duty.

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Name
Terra Armstrong (Doesn't know her real name if any.)

Hero Name
Alien Angel

Gender
Female

Age
18 (Or so she guesses.)

Date of Birth
Doesn't know.

Physique

Blood Type
Doesn't know.

Occupation
Vigilante

Side
Hero

Affiliation
None (Currently)

Tier
C

Personality
Once a shy individual, Terra is now quite outspoken. She's not afraid to speak her mind which has caused her to get into trouble in certain cases. Sometimes in the heat of combat, she also shows signs of anger due to her upbringing and horrible experiences which are explained below.

Needless to say, Terra won't mince words. If something seems wrong, she'd be the first to tell you about it no matter how absurd it sounds or if it's deemed inappropriate. Assuming she's around people she trusts. Due to her being a vigilante, she can also be a bit of a loner.

Backstory
For Terra, life was the ultimate joke. At least, that's how she saw it since even she can't recall much before being stuck in a random lab being experimented on.

Similar to perhaps another H.E.R.O., Terra was one of perhaps many test subjects done to splice "Leftovers" with human DNA to create a new lifeform. Terra was, sadly, one of those test subjects. The pain...the experimentation...it was so much that her mind was shattered until accepting the fact that she was no longer normal even when compared to others with superpowers.

Even if she still "looked" human.

There, in that hidden lab, she was subject to countless routines. Running till absolute exaustion. Training against detained Leftovers that the scientists there somehow caught and preserved for combat tests. All of which she was brutalized but still lived despite the injuries taken. She had wished it had all ended at many points. That her life would just end.

But for some reason, it was replaced with anger...a "silent" anger.

Eventually, she had kept her wits about her. For one, she had heard a scientist say that she was a "successful" experiment but weren't sure in what way. Other than perhaps a minor healing factor, no other powers or physical changes in apperance were present. But that her blood and the other "Leftover" one had mergered perfectly. Hence why she didn't need to be on constant life support like others have. Still, they continued their routines with her. Hoping for perhaps some sort of breakthrough.

And they sure as hell got one.

One day, she was drugged up with Isolene and put on many restrains. One of which was a straight jacket and handcuffs of all things on both her hands and feet. Pretending to be doped up from the amount of Isolene used, she heard them saying that they were abandoning the lab, stating that the "main lab" had been compromised and they were moving all "vital" test subjects to new locations till further notice. Terra was mostly isolated so she didn't know how many other "vitals" there were. But now, it seemed things were falling apart for her captors. Sad as it was, she had to worry about herself.

Then, during one night many years ago in New York, many reports were being called in to 911 operators that citizens had heard an inhuman scream and something flying through the air in the night sky of New York. Some time later, a random group of Hero's had found an unmarked dark van completely knocked over on it's side. Around it were injured and armed criminals with fracture injuries and two badly injured scientists that were suspects in illegal experimentations. All of them scared out of their minds. There was also a torn up straight jacket along with pairs of broken handcuffs.

Then, stories were being told around New York about a pink monster that preyed on anyone who saw it. But at the same time, how majestic it looked. Due to the sheer number of sights and cases that came forward involving it, both criminals and even law enforcement gave it a name.

"Alien Angel" was born.

Powers
Transformation - It took some time but Terra has learned to control her apparance between her human self and her "Leftover" self. Though when in human form, she still retains her minor healing factor as well as increased resistances to harmful drugs and diseases.

But when she transforms, she gains the ability of flight and becomes slightly stronger and tougher than a normal human. However, she becomes incredibly quick. Both her running and flight speed have her going around 80 mph. Her senses of smell, sight and hearing go up as well along with gaining sharp claws on both her hand and feet.

Other - Terra is a drifter but she goes to places where there's trouble. She does any odd jobs to maintain any financial stability but tries to keep it "legal". Once in awhile, she secretly meets with "normal" random law enforcements and, for some cash and assuming they don't try to shoot her first, helps them catch any petty criminals they have trouble dealing with behind the scene's. She tells no one but her personal goal is to find any other labs and shut them down since she figures the experiments didn't stop. She even heard a rumor about an organization called "Zero" that had invested in such experiments but after some research, assumed it was just a boogyman story...
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Thanks for the feedback Hitman ^_^. Here's an update with some color and a few tweaks to certain pieces of info on both characters. I also apologize if you see any bbccode showing. I was trying to work on making it more colorful but wasn't sure if I used them correctly. I'll be editing this post if anything looks off. Anyways, here's attempt two.



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Thanks for the feedback Hitman ^_^. Here's an update with some color and a few tweaks to certain pieces of info on both characters. I also apologize if you see any bbccode showing. I was trying to work on making it more colorful but wasn't sure if I used them correctly. I'll be editing this post if anything looks off. Anyways, here's attempt two.



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Alright, so I'll get to a review of the other character in a moment but as for Alpha-

  • The format is soooooo much better. Thanks a lot.
  • Right now my biggest concern is still with your backstory in that it feels more vague than not. The backstory here shouldn't be describing what's on file, but more like a third-person, omniscient history of your character. Right now the way that it's written feels more like "what we know" rather than "what is."
  • I feel like your personality section is still just a little short. If you could add just a bit more to fill it up that would be great
  • Power looks good!
  • A couple typos in there, just make sure to fix those up rq :)


Just knock those off and Alpha should be good!
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Hello yet again. I Updated Alpha's profile but sorry for this double post.



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Hello yet again. I Updated Alpha's profile but sorry for this double post.



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I like how Alpha came out! My one recommendation is that you read through the bio again, there were a couple small redundancies in there, but outside of that Alpha looks good to go! I'll read through Terra's after the arc gets started- still need to finish that intro post, haha.
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Hello yet again. I Updated Alpha's profile but sorry for this double post.



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Alright, review number two for Terra.

  • I'm gonna need all the info that you have listed as "don't know." You can specify that she doesn't know, but she has to have all the things mentioned there, even if it's beyond her knowledge.
  • Especially considering she came out of a lab as an experiment, I'd like to see a little bit about her social interactions in her personality. From what it seems, until fairly recently, she's been drugged up in a lab locked away from society, so one would think that her social skills have had some type of impact, or no? I'd like to see that explored a little more in personality.
  • Her backstory is a little hard to follow in its current state. Right now, I have it that she was produced in a lab from birth as an experiment, but after that it's a bit foggy. What was the consequence when they drugged her with isolene? What did they get? What was the result? If you could do some clarification on that that would be much appreciated.
  • I try not to be too much of a grammar stickler, but in its current state, especially in the backstory, some of the errors there make the section a bit difficult to read and are distracting. If you could fix that up!

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Hey there, I saw the recruitment drive that saw you were looking for new players, and this RP caught my eye! It looks pretty cool and I was thinking about trying to join.

I have an idea for villainess that I think could be cool, but would it be better if i made a HERO? If I do make a villainess I want to make it clear that my end goal would be for her to be defeated, it could even happen pretty quickly after her introduction. You know to make interaction happen, I love interaction and collaborative PvP.
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Hey there, I saw the recruitment drive that saw you were looking for new players, and this RP caught my eye! It looks pretty cool and I was thinking about trying to join.

I have an idea for villainess that I think could be cool, but would it be better if i made a HERO? If I do make a villainess I want to make it clear that my end goal would be for her to be defeated, it could even happen pretty quickly after her introduction. You know to make interaction happen, I love interaction and collaborative PvP.


Hi! Welcome aboard.

First your question, I would recommend personally to at the very least make one hero character, because heroes are the focal point of the RP and all the action will be revolving around them. If you'd like to make a villainess as well as a sort of side character to do some evil and eventually intersect with the rest of the gang, that would be more than acceptable!
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@Hitman Alright, cool

I'll get back to you soon with some character sheets then! I'll also try to read some of the IC stuff at least. This would be the second time I joined an RP that was already going but since it went so well the first time I figured I'd give it another shot. I like it when RP's live for a long time
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@Hitman Alright, cool

I'll get back to you soon with some character sheets then! I'll also try to read some of the IC stuff at least. This would be the second time I joined an RP that was already going but since it went so well the first time I figured I'd give it another shot. I like it when RP's live for a long time


Alright, sounds cool! Feel free to join the discord, that's where 99% of our discussion goes down.
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Hey there, I'm also interested if there is still room!

Edit: Just saw that you guys closed up - guess I was a little too slow lol! I'll keep an eye out if you guys open up again.
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Hey there, I'm also interested if there is still room!

Edit: Just saw that you guys closed up - guess I was a little too slow lol! I'll keep an eye out if you guys open up again.


With some consideration on my part, I'll be willing to accept one more character to the fray! Feel free to join.
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@Duoya If you could join the Discord so we could torture get to know you and possibly help with character concepts and the like that would be great! There's a link in the 2nd post of the OOC as well as the recruitment drive.
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