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Anyone got suggestions for powers for an Eidolon that is....well....and adorably small, yet horrific looking mini-wendigo? Isn't actually a wendigo, cause alien beings, but resembles one.

All I have so far are Ice Manipulation and being able to speak human tongues. Eerie, but useful.


I got you.
Something assembled from a mish-mash of thrown out "meats"-- a tentacle there, craab claw here, "alien" pig nose here, etc.
It could be like some type of mushroom parasite that reanimates dead alien matter-- the mushrooms keep the parts cold to stave off rot.
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Well, here is a character + Eidolon app! I hope it isn't too odd or out of place, at least. If it is too out of place I can dip out, or edit if it isn't too much, but figured I'd toss in my lot and see how it went at least. XD



EDIT 8/19 - Corrected some typos.
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Just reminding everyone that there is only a couple days left before the deadline.
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@EllipsesDo we know if any of the CS's are accepted or do we find out after the deadline?
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@LetMeDoStuff I'll be reviewing sheets on the deadline and then giving a grace period of a few days to fix/add things before making my decision on, say, Wednesday.
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@EllipsesAre you going to throw in a character of your own too? : D
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@EllipsesAre you going to throw in a character of your own too? : D


Yes. I'll have a sheet up in a few days.

As for everyone else, the cut off date is finally here. I'll be reviewing applications soon.
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I'll be giving people until Thursday or so to address changes and concerns before deciding so the RP can start this upcoming weekend.

@Utrax

I like the character, but I do have some minor issues and questions for you.

1) In the appearance section, you speak of gold-plated canine teeth. What is this tradition for, and why does his people do it?
2) Is his coastal village located on the islands or elsewhere?
3) Why can he not return to his home? His mother made it clear to De'yaego, but it isn't exactly clear as to why in the sheet.

@vietmyke

The only issue I have is that I would like to know more about his tattoos. Do they have some kind of meaning, or did he just get them as part of his rebel childhood?

@Cyrania

My main concern is that this sheet is incredibly bare-bones. I like the character idea, but the sheet does need more content for me to considering accepting it. I'd suggest looking at the other sheets to see where you can expand on.

@LetMeDoStuff

No problems on my end! Though, I should note that most Eidolons can't exactly communicate with humans outside of growls, chirps, and so on.

@Crusader Lord

Leyann seems like a fine character, but I'm not 100% sold on Scrape. While it could work as an Eidolon, he seems a little too extreme and unusal, particularly because of his reanimation ability that I'm not totally sure about accepting.

@Apoalo

No issues here since we've already talked about some concerns.

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@EllipsesThanks for the info! I didn't plan on having them communicate except from the animalistic behaviour you'd expect from a pet!

Do you want me to specify it in the sheet?
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@EllipsesThanks for the info! I didn't plan on having them communicate except from the animalistic behaviour you'd expect from a pet!

Do you want me to specify it in the sheet?


No, it's fine. I just wanted to be sure if you were aware.
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No, it's fine. I just wanted to be sure if you were aware.


Awesome! Good that I understood the Eidolon's good enough!

By the way, if there's a few more people working on CS's before Thursday are they still eligible? I just like looking at other's characters lol
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Awesome! Good that I understood the Eidolon's good enough!

By the way, if there's a few more people working on CS's before Thursday are they still eligible? I just like looking at other's characters lol


Sadly, no. The cut off date was the 16th for sheets to be in.
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@Ellipses Hmm...any suggestion for changes to Scrape? Different appearance? Remove the reanimation thing? Etc.

EDIT: Will get some edits in tonmorrow anyways, though, just to be safe.
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@Ellipses Slapped in the additions to the sheet to answer the questions--

1) The "Golden Fanged" warrior is De'yaego's distant ancestor. People in his village pay tribute to their ancestors by emulating them in appearance too.

2) A coastal village to the ***North of the islands. Nameless and kinda crappy.

3) Elaborated on a tradition of exile determined by a "reading" at birth.
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@Ellipses I couldn't really find a place in the backstory to fit it without it feeling kinda out of place, overly specific or self aggrandizing- and it didn't seem like detail that deserved an entire paragraph on its own. The tattoo would be something I would've expanded on during a post or something, but Joe'shwa got his main tattoo on his arm sometime shortly after he bonded with his Eidolon. The tattoo itself is of a dangerous mythical creature, but is supposed to both protect him and guide his aim- kind of symbolizing how Eidolons, while similar to the dangerous monsters that roam the world are essentially like protective spirits for those they bond to.

I also like to think that Raijลซ sits on Joe'shwa's shoulder around where the tail of the serpent is, and the electricity he channels runs through the length of the tattoo before culminating at the arrow.
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@Ellipses Ok! Made a new Eidolon to replace Scrape. Sad he doesn't seem to much work, but i hope this other idea is more acceptable! Or at least more edit-able and such. XD
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Right. The following people are accepted:

@Utrax
@vietmyke
@LetMeDoStuff
@Crusader Lord
@Apoalo

You five may post your character sheets in the CS tab.
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Excitement intensifies.
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I'm cooking right now, but expect the opening post to be up in a few hours.
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