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@FalloutJack okay, so I have to reject the CS for a few reasons. They are as follows:

1) That superpower is very OP for the setting. Yeah he has only a little control over it, but supposedly something that can destroy everything around him was able to be restrained by him in a few days, so I wouldn't expect that to last. This guy sounds like he could take out someone like Thundercloud instantly and this is meant to be a story about rookie heroes with weaker powers who are growing. E.g. someone with super speed still got severely injured in her first fight.
2) Also, the mental conjuring of explosions seems too close to Kestrel's (@threetoads' character) power in any case.
3) The biography strikes me as over the top. This is probably more subjective and I'm not trying to be insulting, but the impression I got from it was "wow I'm so special look at me."
4) The meteor was a big local event, but it wasn't one outside of Lafayette City.

I suspect that this might not be the right RP for you. Again, I'm not trying to be mean, but just based on the general tone of the ideas you've had thus far (this CS and the time manipulator) that you'd have more fun in a RP where the PCs are more powerful. We had someone else in this RP who didn't enjoy having to deviate from the idea he had for his CS and in the end it wasn't a fun experience for him, so I'd like to avoid that sort of bad experience for you if at all possible. If I'm wrong, let me know, but if not I'm not offended and I wish you the best in your future RP endeavors.
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It's alright, man. I didn't have the particular type of character you wanted on standby because I was essentially trying to scratch a very particular itch that doesn't quite fit in here. Sometimes, you feel the need to give certain ideas, themes, or characters exercise if you haven't used 'em lately, and that's basically what I was feeling. It has little to do with trying to outshine anyone because I was just trying to plug in characters I'd already designed and see if they worked or not. For reasons that are valid for your RP, though, they do not, and that's fine. You guys have fun.
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@FalloutJack that's fine, thanks for letting me know. Good luck!
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Hello. I was wondering if you all were wanting new people to hop in. Mintz has given me some rundown of the place, and I have looked through the intro section, but I figured it would be better to ask. Plus, if you aren't as active as many of the other things I've been in, its a plus. Currently going through a few number of hoops right now, but figured this would be a nice fun way to relax. Doesn't help that some reading on some characters, mostly the powers... I can easily say some of my more wacky ideas may fit in.

I'm still new to this site, so I apologize if I take a bit to get everything perfect.

I guess the only thing I can really ask: How out there can I go with a power? Like I know currently we have super suggestion with puns and rainbow shooting edgelords I love both of their designs and powers btw, but I figured it would be best to ask before I randomly just send someone with a power named Fart Rocket.
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@Exodia Relent yeah, we're still open. I guess it's a good thing we've been slow with posts lately :P As long as you don't mind that, then that's cool!

As for how out there to go? It's subjective, but I guess "interesting and creative, not stupid and/or random for its own sake" is the criteria. E.g. pun control is unique and original, while Fart Rocket is immature and has been done already. Not to say you can't use a more straightforward super power like flight in an interesting way, I'm talking more specifically about "different" super powers.

If you have any other questions, let me know. I appreciate the interest in our RP!
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Honestly, I do not mind in the slightest.

Alright then on the power thing. Luckily that is not much of an issue as I can get some more unique ideas at times, and the Fart Rocket idea I have fits into that without the immature portions of it. That is if I so choose to continue with that.

But alright. I'll let you all know if I have any questions. Now to just come up with a character.
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@Exodia Relent that's cool!

Well, removing the immature portion of it means it isn't Fart Rocket.

In any case, I suspect you'll be able to think of something. Inspiration is funny though, you never know where it'll come from. Good luck to you!
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Unfortunately, I have to pause this RP until further notice. Details are in the Discord server. Thanks to everyone who contributed to the writing here!
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