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Name: FavnirAge: 200 years old, still considered youngRace: DragonGender: malePersonality: One word that could describe Favnir is stubborn. If he does not want to do something. It will not be done. And good luck trying to get the 20ft tall dragon to do something. He has a dislike of most humans, even of the war was nearly 1000 years ago, he still dislikes them. He can and will get very angry. And you best hope you have a way to protect yourself from him or your toast. Literally. Magic: fire and other dragon related magical abilitiesSkills: typical dragon skills.. Climbing.. Flying... Hunting... Etc.Gear: He's a dragon. What gear does he need?Bio: Favnir had an okay life. He was taught when he was young how to fend for himself, as well as the history of what has happened. Once he was old enough to be on his own, he left his parents, and searched for a place to stay. And he found it, a mountain riddled with caves, it was perfect, and with the forest fearing right outside the door it was the perfect hunting ground. He soon found a small colony of elves( any type ) and began to talk to them, but spent most of his time doing various dragon things.Misc: He can speak English, and elvish( or whatever the elves speak ).Didnt really know what to put for the bio so I hope that's ok.


I like it. So I'm going to thrown my own hat into this. You didn't find a colony of elves, you found a refugee group of elves, a resistance group against the Alderian Alliance within the Seven Thrones Forest. Even by not speaking of their location, you are officially a criminal throughout Alderia, however, the elves have decided to trust you with the secret, despite the danger, many of them hoping that you would be moved to join their cause. A dragon could easily shift the balance of power, and be an invaluable asset to the resistance.. Sound interesting?

Also, the main language in this fantasy world is Corinthian, a language that was first created when Lord Corinth combined the languages of the many city-states that had combined into the Alderian Alliance shortly after it's founding. It has many useless and nonsensical grammatical clauses which were taken from languages that didn't quite fit, much like English, and is spoken throughout the Alderian alliance, although many regions still have their own dialects, and even alternate languages that can be spoken among people from that area, as seen with the elves.
Elves ancestrally have two tongues. Ancient Elves, and Thronic. Ancient Elven is the tongue spoken originally by the Primal Elves, which, after the fall of the Primal Elves, was seen as the perfect language. The High Elves, together with the Wood Elves cherished and protected this language, forbidding the "lesser" elven races from speaking it. However, as the Seven Thrones were instituted, 300 years after the Dragon War, a new language had to be created to combine elves. This language was derived from the complex Primal Elven, but simplified and twisted. Ancient Elven, as it is now known, is a tongue spoken mostly by scholars throughout the world, having spread as Elven magical knowledge spread as the language of learned men.
Thronian, on the other hand, is a tongue that is rarely spoken by Elves nowadays. Elves were required to learn Alderian when the Seven Thrones were conquered, but the members of the resistance refused. Due to this, elves who speake Thronian are associated with the resistance, and it is spoken exclusively among elves, not when there are humans present, a hiddenl language. It is popular in Elven bars after a few drinks have been served, as some small measure of resistance.
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That helps very much! Thank you for the information. I edit my CS right now to make the changes.
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That helps very much! Thank you for the information. I edit my CS right now to make the changes.


Meh, I just realized I hadn't made up languages and pulled those out of my ass. (=
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Haha well it works. Seems like I'm causing you to make up a lot of things.
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I consider that a good thing. It helps expand the setting.
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could you provide more info on dragons? it's the shortest one on information but it seems like one of the more important ones since there's a war named for them....
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Alrighty then. Dragons are incredibly big, and incredibly dangerous. They're also magical. They can fly, breathe fire, and older dragons can use more draconic magic. There's really not much to tell. There are many different types that differ from the original, like Swamp Dragons that spit acid, or Frost dragons that spit lava. No, just kidding, they spit ice, obviously. However, If you want to know something, be more specific in your questioning.
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Alrighty then. Dragons are incredibly big, and incredibly dangerous. They're also magical. They can fly, breathe fire, and older dragons can use more draconic magic. There's really not much to tell. There are many different types that differ from the original, like Swamp Dragons that spit acid, or Frost dragons that spit lava. No, just kidding, they spit ice, obviously. However, If you want to know something, be more specific in your questioning.


k... i think i might make a dragon cs if i can find a good pic...
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Name: FavnirAge: 200 years old, still considered youngRace: DragonGender: malePersonality: One word that could describe Favnir is stubborn. If he does not want to do something. It will not be done. And good luck trying to get the 20ft tall dragon to do something. He has a dislike of most humans, even of the war was nearly 1000 years ago, he still hates them. He can and will get very angry. And you best hope you have a way to protect yourself from him or your toast. Literally. Magic: fire and other dragon related magical abilitiesSkills: typical dragon skills.. Climbing.. Flying... Hunting... Etc.Gear: He's a dragon. What gear does he need?Bio: Favnir had an okay life. He was taught when he was young how to fend for himself, as well as the history of what has happened. Once he was old enough to be on his own, he left his parents, and searched for a place to stay. And he found it, a mountain riddled with caves, it was perfect, and with the forest fearing right outside the door it was the perfect hunting ground. He soon found a group of elvish refuges, who were resisting the Alderian Alliance. It took many years for Favnir to gain the elves trust, but once he did he spent more time with them, gradually learning their hidden and secret language, Thronian. He has spent most of his life among them now, and so his perspective about humans were changed further, from just dislike to hate. He has not taken serious action against the humans, only killing a hand full over his years, but he plans to do so, when the elves are prepared to do so.Misc: He can speak Corinthian, and Thronian.


BTW, this fellow is accepted, if I hadn't made this clear yet (=
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k... i think i might make a dragon cs if i can find a good pic...


It seems you have been influenced by Angel.....
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It seems you have been influenced by Angel.....


menh... i liked dragons before she even tryed to influence me *points to the 12ish dragon chars i had in a mini rp*
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i couldn't find a good one so i just picked one >.>
Name: Lasaara
Age: 178
Race: ice dragon
Gender: female
Personality: variant depending on the situation
Magic: draconic ice magic (blue flames, ice breath, etc.))
Skills: aside from the normal draconic stuff she's learned to take the form of an elf (though she can't get the eyes right as they still look reptilian) but if she stays in it for more than a week it begins to hurt
Gear: nothing of note
Bio: TBR (in other words: too fucking lazy >.>)
Misc: she lives on a glacier and eats fish instead of land animals like most other dragons
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IIII FOUUUND YOUUUU~! Why am I the one who never gets told shiz. ;_;
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IIII FOUUUND YOUUUU~! Why am I the one who never gets told shiz. ;_;


I didn't tell anyone about this. Creed still doesn't know about it, and neither does Tiny. Tyki and Ven found it on their own, either by stalking my profile or looking for new rps the old-fashioned way.
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i couldn't find a good one so i just picked one >.>Name: LasaaraAge: 178Race: ice dragonGender: femalePersonality: variant depending on the situationMagic: draconic ice magic (blue flames, ice breath, etc.))Skills: aside from the normal draconic stuff she's learned to take the form of an elf (though she can't get the eyes right as they still look reptilian) but if she stays in it for more than a week it begins to hurtGear: nothing of noteBio: TBR (in other words: too fucking lazy >.>) Misc: she lives on a glacier and eats fish instead of land animals like most other dragons


Give me a reason he's in the story. I mean, he's a big, rather generic dragon, and you've cunningly avoided giving him a personality, so I see no reason he should be doing anything besides eating fish on his glacier. One of the main problems is that there is no glacier anywhere even NEAR the area the story is taking place in, which appears to be around the Seven Thrones, and I see no reason this dragon would randomly migrate to elven lands for no obvious reason.
Basically, he needs a motivation. And maybe a personality. I'd like a personality.
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Name: Bazgulub
Age: 33
Race: Orc
Gender: Male
Personality: Bazgulub is quite aggrisive and will attack anyone that even looks wrong on him and would rather die in battle than flee to see an other day. If you mannage to gain his Respect and honor he will follow you till death and even in the after life he will always stay loyal to his word.
Magic: (Put N/A if you don't use magic) N/A
Skills: Bazgulub As most orcs have been training since he can walk in the art of fighting rangeing from Big swords till Orcish bows that where brutal made and with the arrow head, that was made in a way that it would be very Difical to remove as it had fangs that went right into the flesh
Gear: Full set of spiked mail hearvy orc armor with full armored helment with horns. An big orcish battle axe ( Thats what showen in the picture
Bio: TBR ( I cant think of something i will get ideas if im accepted in the roleplay
Misc: Bazgulub is on his quest to prove that he can become the mightest of orcs to one day claim his fathers clan by killing him
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I didn't tell anyone about this. Creed still doesn't know about it, and neither does Tiny. Tyki and Ven found it on their own, either by stalking my profile or looking for new rps the old-fashioned way.


Oh. That's fine then.
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I should have my cs posted today.
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Name: BazgulubAge: 33Race: Orc Gender: MalePersonality: Bazgulub is quite aggrisive and will attack anyone that even looks wrong on him and would rather die in battle than flee to see an other day. If you mannage to gain his Respect and honor he will follow you till death and even in the after life he will always stay loyal to his word. Magic: (Put N/A if you don't use magic) N/ASkills: Bazgulub As most orcs have been training since he can walk in the art of fighting rangeing from Big swords till Orcish bows that where brutal made and with the arrow head, that was made in a way that it would be very Difical to remove as it had fangs that went right into the flesh Gear: Full set of spiked mail hearvy orc armor with full armored helment with horns. An big orcish battle axe ( Thats what showen in the picture Bio: TBR ( I cant think of something i will get ideas if im accepted in the roleplay Misc: Bazgulub


He seems like an absolute badass. However, why is he here?
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I should have my cs posted today.


Hey, Jorthon! Nice to see you again (=
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