[OOC] Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

[Durnehviir]

Curious, will there be any Chuunin exams?

[Masaki Haruna]

Yeah there will be! Ideas for it I dunno but it should be harder.

[Durnehviir]

Ha. Nice post Insomnia.
Guess I'll wait on the meeting to start then.

[Insomnia]

Thanks hahah, your posts give me good material to work with.

Masaki I must've missed your last post so I've just edited my last post with a response.

[Durnehviir]

Also, curious, are you European?

[Innue]

I may not be able to get many posts up for the next few days. I am studying for a big exam and I am doing some things on my thread. If anything is urgent, please PM me (and you are all invited on my thread as well).

[Insomnia]

Durnehviir said
Also, curious, are you European?

Me? No. Are you?

[Yog Sothoth]

@LillyLove, after the mission can my character join your team if there's room since their both from the Rain Village?

[Durnehviir]

Insomnia said
Me? No. Are you?

Canadian then?
Just noticed you have European typing mannerisms.

[Insomnia]

Durnehviir said
Canadian then?Just noticed you have European typing mannerisms.

Nope.
Huh. Is that a bad thing?

[Teleport]

I hope you're still accepting character applications.

Appearance:
Name: Takahiro Uchiha

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Village: Konohagakure

Village Rank(Genin, Chunin, Etc.): Jounin

Ninja Rank(S-Rank being the highest and deadliest.): S Rank

Normal Release: Yin-Yang, Fire, Wind
Kekkei Genkai/Tota Release: Kurayami(custom dark kekkei tota), Blaze(basically evolved version of fire)

Tools(Optional):

Muramasa

The Muramasa is a sword created directly from the Kurayami Release that is deliberately meant to make defeating people with better armor/defense much easier. This happens through one passive skill it holds - and that is the ability to increase its overall cutting potential and speed to far more than its default the better his opponent's defense. It is noted to be more powerful than a normal katana at its default level of power. Another interesting ability it has it the ability to become stronger as it claims more souls - as a side note, it can also be materialized and de-materialized at will.

Biography:
Takahiro was born into the Uchiha Clan as a noble; his ancestors were famed aristocrats in the clan itself. His parents were skilled users of the Sharingan - both had already awakened the Mangekyo before he was born. At an early age, Takahiro found that he was exceptionally talented at doing just about anything; his ninjutsu, taijutsu and genjutsu prowess were far above his age. This led his parents to often boast about him to others; his parents being not the most humble, also called him the genius that came only once in a century. Other parents tried to boast back; that their children were also quite talented. But whenever Takahiro took part in competitions against those children, he always won with a perfect score - whilst not even trying. The other children felt inadequate compared to him, and Takahiro always offered to help them.

Takahiro graduated from the Academy at the age of five. During the time when he was a genin, his skills were sharpened immensely; almost to the point where he could be considered an actual threat to inexperienced jounin. His genin group was captured while on one mission by jounin sent from Shinobi Republic, and the jounin-sensei of his group was tortured for potential information, though he would not yield. During this time, Takahiro awakened his Sharingan(which immediately had three tomoe) to face this difficult circumstance, and proceeded to use his newfound abilities to their fullest, killing the jounins with the help of his team and proceeded to flee alongside his teammates. However, backup for the Shinobi Republic jounin had already arrived, and proceeded to kill one of his teammates and his jounin-sensei, leading Takahiro to awaken the Mangekyo Sharingan and kill the attackers. However, he fell unconscious from fatigue soon after reaching Konoha.

Takahiro mastered his Sharingan at the age of six, and proceeded to enlist in the chunin exams. He easily progressed through the exam without much difficulty, and when it came to the final part of the chunin exams, he decided to reveal a kekkei-tota he had been training. His opponent was a Hyuga Clan member, who had awakened the Byakugan and could be considered a genius as well. As the Hyuga member prepared to activate the 'Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms' technique, Takahiro summoned a dark katana into his hand as a dark aura started to emanate from him, the crowd holding their breath in anticipation for what was going to happen next. The Hyuga tried to attack him, but Takahiro instantly vanished and appeared behind him, sheathing his katana back into its sheath. Deep diagonal lacerations were found on the Hyuga's chest that ruptured every weak point in his ribs and chest, causing immense blood loss and were inches away from what would have been a sliced heart.

Takahiro became a chunin after that fight(at the age of 7), and engaged on medium-high ranked missions quite frequently. He strove to control the destructive power he withheld, and spent the next five years honing his skills in all areas of shinobi training. By the end of the five years, he had almost mastered the abilities of his Mangekyo Sharingan, and had obtained a great proficiency with his Kekkei Tota, to the point where he would be considered one of the best jounins in Konohagakure. He was promoted to the rank of a jounin subsequently.

The rest of what he was doing after that is kept secret to the public, though it is presumed that in that time, he obtained the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan.

Kekkei Tota Jutsu

Name of technique: Kurayami(lit. Darkness)
Description-
Similar to Amaterasu, this technique is ninjutsu based, requiring a lot of stamina and chakra for it to be used correctly. Takahiro can materialize into reality a concentrated form of darkness that holds highly offensive capabilities. This is the most versatile of all the advanced nature types, due to its fast movements, strong attacking power and defensive/counter-attacking abilities. Some have called it the unholy combination of black lightning and Amaterasu's flames, as its speed is comparable to lightning and its power to Amaterasu's flames. It also has an innate ability that allows it to increase its power in accordance to the strength/defense of the opponent. This is known to be the primordial darkness that has existed before time came into existence, allowing Takahiro to materialize it wherever and whenever he wishes(he is not limited by shadows), and also provides immunity against any sort of light that would affect 'artificial' forms of darkness.
Type: Kurayami Release(Ninjutsu)
Class: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long

Name of technique: Kurayami: Kurai ora(lit. Dark Aura)
Description-
The manipulated darkness infuses itself into the Takahiro, and for as long as his chakra levels last, heavily increases his speed, destructive power and all attributes to extreme heights. This allows for extremely fast and powerful nintaijutsu; making it extremely hard for even a fully matured Mangekyo Sharingan or experienced taijutsu master to keep up with him. This form also increases his ability with Kurayami, increasing his proficiency with it tenfold. He will also have the ability to disperse his body into a shadow-like form A 'dark aura' will also start to emanate from Takahiro's body, with wisps of darkness coiling closely around him.
Type: Kurayami Release(Ninjutsu)
Class: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short

Name of technique: Kurayami: Teleport
Description-
There are two abilities to this technique, similar to Kamui. The first one is allowing its user to quickly teleport anywhere within the user’s line of sight. This is achieved through surrounding said user with darkness, and molecularly transporting them through a dimensional void in space-time to the place which they desire to be at within their sight instantaneously. The second one is slower, but allows for much longer teleportation. The user creates a portal made of darkness that can either be placed on himself to only allow him to teleport, or placed on a surface, be it air or the ground. This portal then latches onto the place the user desires, and transports him through a dimensional void(known as the Dark Passageway) to the desired location.
Type: Kurayami Release(Space Time Ninjutsu)
Class: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long

Name of technique: Kurayami: Kyofu Yuhatsu(lit. Fear Inducement)
Description-
Simply by pointing at the desired target, Takahiro can induce their worst fear in a genjutsu - and even amplify it by a thousand times to heavily increase their anxiety. He can also alter the perception of time in that genjutsu, making it seem as though they have been trapped in there for a millennium. It also closely links reality with illusion; making the opponent think that what is fake is real - meaning that they would think that their worst fear is 'real'. This is added with the amount of psychological trauma they already had to create a genjutsu that can only be countered by a kekkei genkai/tota with as much power that it has. However, this is of the highest caliber of genjutsu.
Type: Genjutsu
Class: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long

Name of technique: Kurayami: Jigen no Setsudan(lit. Dimensional Cut)
Description-
This technique either uses the Murasama or his own hands. First, with the Murasama, he unsheathes his sword and slashes it. The force of his sword slash is transferred through the Dark Passageway, appearing instantaneously after he slashes it to a place he desires in front of the slash. It is also amplified by the force of Kurayami and can be made to expand to lacerate much larger objects if he does not wish to cut them directly. With his hands, it works the same except the force from his hand is infused into a dark chakra slash that cuts the opponent.
Type: Kurayami Release(Kekkei Tota and Kekkei Tota Space-Time Ninjutsu)
Class: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu

Name of technique: Amaterasu
Description-
Known as the jet-black flames from hell, Amaterasu's flames are created simply by focusing Takahiro's eyes on a certain area within his line of sight. Amaterasu's flames are inextinguishable through normal means; they will only extinguish after 7 days and 7 nights. Takahiro's mastery over Amaterasu has allowed him to evolve this jutsu into an actual release(Blaze Release), and thus can form it even without the use of his Sharingan eyes. This is noted to have more control over Amaterasu than Blaze Release: Kagutsuchi, allowing Takahiro to have a versatile Amaterasu. Amaterasu is also an evolved version of the fire release. However, due to the immense amount of chakra it consumes and the strain it puts on the user's eyes, it is advised to not use it a lot during battle due to its side effects.
Type: Blaze Release(Ninjutsu)
Class: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long

Name of technique: Shinsei Kaen
Description-
Known as Amaterasu's stronger counterpart, Shinsei Kaen glows of a translucent white color and incinerates anything and everything it touches. It spreads at an alarmingly fast rate as well, making it a very versatile technique. It is said to be holy - and has the innate ability of growing stronger as the enemy puts more of a fight against it, similar to Kurayami. This requires more chakra and puts more strain on Takahiro's eyes than Amaterasu, so it should be used less.
Type: Blaze Release(Ninjutsu)
Class: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long

Name of technique: Tsukyomi
Description-
A powerful genjutsu only able to be activated by the luckiest and most worthy users of the Mangekyo Sharingan. This is of one of the highest calibers; it cannot be stopped unless by a close blood relative. If used by one with mastery over genjutsu, it will allow the user to alter the target's perception of time within the genjutsu - making a few seconds seem like years as a means of torture. This genjutsu can be used for many purposes, but the main one is usually torture and the creation of phycological trauma in the victim.
Type: Genjutsu
Class: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short

Name of technique: Hitoshirenu Genkaku(lit. Unseen Illusion)
Description-
By simply looking at the target for even an instant, Takahiro can cast an extremely powerful and complex genjutsu, known to some as the evolved version of Tsukyomi. This allows the Takahiro to completely trap the opponent in an illusion under his control. Takahiro's prowess of the jutsu has allowed him to deliberately alter the enemy's perception of time to make a few seconds seem like years. But here's where the fun starts - this jutsu is so advanced that not only can it alter the enemy's perception of time, but it can enhance their senses as well. This means that this can easily be used as a means of torture - by heavily enhancing their sense of pain and making them feel as if they were burning eternally without ever dying, it would cause excruciating pain that would result in the nerves in their mind to overload from too much electrical current being transferred between each neuron - damaging the nerves and thereby causing paralysis. Due to the amount of complexity and versatility this genjutsu withholds, it consumes a lot of chakra. It also can only work on one target at a time. This genjutsu is of a higher caliber than Tsukyomi, and is of the highest caliber.
Type: Genjutsu
Class: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long

Name of technique: Hitoshirenu Harasu(lit. Unseen Dispel)
Description-
This technique achieves the effect of negating and reflecting every genjutsu, fuinjutsu and juinjutsu on Takahiro towards the caster of said status effect. How does this technique achieve this? Well, similar to the Izanagi, this applies a genjutsu on its user. There is a difference, though; this technique actually uses the genjutsu to make all the effects on Takahiro seem false, thereby negating them through a heavily enhanced placebo effect. Then comes the reflection; the effects placed against him are made to think, through genjutsu, that the caster of the effects is actually the target. This is then enhanced by his chakra, and as such a skill containing all the 'bad' effects put on him at thrice their power combined is created and is reflected onto the opponent. All this happens instantly once the dispel is cast.
Type: Genjutsu
Class: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short

Name of technique: Susano'o
Description-
As the guardian deity that protects special Mangekyo Sharingan users, this technique creates a translucent, giant humanoid being that surrounds the user. Due to Takahiro's different abilities, his Susano'o differs from the original. Takahiro's Susano’o is unsurprisingly darker than other Susano’os, and withholds the Yata Mirror and a variation of the Murasama. Takahiro's Susanoo also is a full bodied form, allowing it to have extremely great mobility whilst having a great offense and defense at the same time.
Type: Ninjutsu
Class: Supplementary, Offensive, Defensive
Rank: S
Range: All Ranges

Combined Jutsu

Name of technique: Kurayami: Shin Rasenkatana(lit. True Spiralling Katana)
Description-
A rasengan infused with the advanced kekkei tota of Kurayami has created a rasengan that has been made small for the sole purpose of it becoming exponentially bigger once it hits the opponent, trapping and continuously dealing damage to the opponent in a sharp edged wave-like vortex of darkness and precisely deadly strikes until it dissipates after a few seconds. Strangely enough, the wave-like vortex resembles a katana in its form. This causes massive concentrated destruction upon impact, and its power far exceeds that of even the Scorch Release: Halo Gale Jet Black Arrow Style Zero.
Type: Kurayami(Ninjutsu) and Kinjutsu
Class: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short

Name of technique: Kurayami: Run moji no Shiru(lit. Runed Seal)
Description-
If Takahiro manages to land at least one touch on the opponent during the match, he can activate the pentagram seal. First, wisps of darkness would coil around his hand - already surrounded by a dark aura. He puts his hand on the ground, causing runes to write themselves under the opponent's feet, before the enemy is trapped in an eternal genjutsu that cannot be broken unless the seal is broken. Because of this, the target would be paralyzed until the seal broke. The seal can only be broken by an unsealing fuinjutsu of the same power, but this cannot be attempted unless by a good fuinjutsu user with an S-Rank kekkei genkai/tota unsealing technique.
Type: Fuinjutsu, Genjutsu and Ninjutsu(Kekkei Tota)
Class: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short

Name of technique: Kurayami: Kurage no Me(lit. Medusa Eyes)
Description-
Eye contact is necessary for this technique. However, he merely needs to look at the enemy's eyes for this; it does not matter if they are wearing special goggles or not. As long as he can look at the enemy's eyes, this technique will work. This technique turns the target into dark stone by using this ocular seal jutsu; the seal can only be broken by an S-Rank kekkei genkai/tota unsealing technique. Nonetheless, this technique is seen as easier to release compared to Kurayami: Run moji no Shiru.
Type: Fuinjutsu, Ninjutsu(kekkei tota)
Class: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long

Name of technique: Tasatsu(lit. Assassination)
Description-
An impossibly quick unsheathe and resheath, this sword technique is suited as a finisher(or rather, the beginning in a fight that ends it) to assassinate the enemy quickly. This utilizes the quickness and destructive power of Kurayami, but deliberately focuses it all in a single impossibly fast strike that cannot be blocked. This is what it would look like: Takahiro would grip his katana, immediately vanish and reappear behind the opponent and re-sheath his katana(even you didn't see him unsheathe his katana). The opponent would have a VERY deep laceration at the weak point in their chest that would kill them. And yes, the stronger an opponent is, the more powerful this technique gets.
Type: Ninjutsu(Kekkei Tota) and Kenjutsu
Class: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short

Name of technique: Taiteki(lit. Archenemy)
Description-
The chinese characters '曲拱敵人'(lit. Archenemy) appear in midair while circling around Takahiro. Those characters are supposed to be said to be the last thing the opponents will see if they ever come into contact with it. Takahiro teleports to their blind spot them and kicks them high into the air, but as the teleport happens instantaneously the opponent will not have time to react. He teleports up into the air and rotates his body quickly so that his face is facing the ground. Multiple katanas made of ‘Kurayami’ appear beside him as well, and in a swirling motion, stabs the enemy with the Murasama whilst the other swords continuously pierce the opponents body. This part is similar to the One Man Front-Lotus used by Lee. The enemy and Takahiro fall to the ground quickly as the swords continuously pierce the opponent, until the enemy hits the ground and a pillar of darkness and black flame erupts from the ground to obliterate the enemy and anything else within a 10 metre radius. Take note that the only way to stop or avoid this technique is to make sure he has no time to activate this, as Archenemy has been labeled a kinjutsu due to its unrivaled destructive power. Dodging this technique is not an option, as the teleport is instantaneous and the Takahiro usually hits a nerve cluster at the enemy's blind spot which renders them temporarily paralyzed - further amplified by the swords which specifically target chakra and nerve points on the body to sever chakra and nerve connections as well as to deal massive damage to the opponent and burn them internally with Amaterasu's flames.
Type: Kurayami and Blaze Release(Kekkei Tota and Kekkei Genkai Ninjutsu), Kenjutsu and Kinjutsu
Class: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short

Name of technique: Muko ka no Shoheki(lit. Nullifying Barrier)
Description-
Takahiro forms a barrier solely made out of yin-yang chakra that focuses on negating any ninjutsu attacks that come forth. This can be made into multiple shapes, but the one Takahiro uses most often is the sphere, which protects him from attacks from all directions. However, the bigger the object is, the more chakra he will have to use or the defense will be inadequate.
Type: Yin-Yang Release(Ninjutsu)
Class: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short

Normal Jutsu

Rasengan
Planetary Rasengan
Wind Release: True Rasenshuriken
Wind Release: Ultra Big Ball Rasenshuriken
Multiple Shadow Clone Jutsu
Wind Release: Divine Wind
Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains
Blade of Wind
Wind Release: Rising Dragon
Dust Cloud Ignition Technique
Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Fire Release: Great Fireball Shower
Fire Release: Running Fire
Leaf Dragon God
Shadow of the Dancing Leaf
Five Elements Seal

Kekkai Genkai:
The trademark of the Uchiha Clan, Takahiro's bloodline allows him to use the Sharingan - also known as the Copy Wheel Eye to some. It is said to allow the user to see chakra flow, have incredible perception, predict attacks and copy almost any technique (s)he witnesses. Takahiro has awakened an evolved Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan; one which has enhanced all his abilities even more, allowing him to easily recognize even complex genjutsu.

Sharingan

Takahiro is also is part of a special bloodline that has allowed him to be born with an arcane kekkei-tota release once used by only by a single legendary Uchiha that is said to be the unholy manifestation of darkness itself. It draws power from primordial darkness that has existed within this world since the beginning of time, and has been concentrated into a form brimming with powers beyond this realm. It has been dubbed the Kurayami Release, and is the true concentrated form of darkness.

Other Info(Anything about your character that you deem noteworthy.):
He's handsome, of course.
He may or may not be a double agent working for the Shinobi Republic after defecting there. Or was he working for Konohagakure again? Is he even a double agent?
He's a Uchiha, but he doesn't really behave like one. He's more calm, collected, charismatic, and funny.
His favorite food is miso ramen.
He has a lot of likes, and not many dislikes. Or was it the other way 'round?
His loyalty to his friends are boundless. Well, maybe not that boundless, but you get the gist of it. He's loyal to his friends.
He's rich. Maybe due to the fact that he's a noble and has went on a lot of S-Rank and A-Rank missions.
He doesn't fret under crazy situations.
He's way more mature than his age makes people think he is.
He's friendly. Really friendly.
He can get quite arrogant at times, especially when facing enemies holding similar powers to his.

[Insomnia]

Hey look another Uchiha.

[Yog Sothoth]

Teleport said
I hope you're still accepting character applications.Appearance:Name: Takahiro UchihaAge: 17Gender: MaleVillage: KonohagakureVillage Rank(Genin, Chunin, Etc.): JouninNinja Rank(S-Rank being the highest and deadliest.): S RankNormal Release: Yin-Yang, Fire, WindKekkei Genkai/Tota Release: Kurayami(custom dark kekkei tota), Blaze(basically evolved version of fire)Tools(Optional):Biography:Takahiro was born into the Uchiha Clan as a noble; his ancestors were famed aristocrats in the clan itself. His parents were skilled users of the Sharingan - both had already awakened the Mangekyo before he was born. At an early age, Takahiro found that he was exceptionally talented at doing just about anything; his ninjutsu, taijutsu and genjutsu prowess were far above his age. This led his parents to often boast about him to others; his parents being not the most humble, also called him the genius that came only once in a century. Other parents tried to boast back; that their children were also quite talented. But whenever Takahiro took part in competitions against those children, he always won with a perfect score - whilst not even trying. The other children felt inadequate compared to him, and Takahiro always offered to help them.Takahiro graduated from the Academy at the age of five. During the time when he was a genin, his skills were sharpened immensely; almost to the point where he could be considered an actual threat to inexperienced jounin. His genin group was captured while on one mission by jounin sent from Shinobi Republic, and the jounin-sensei of his group was tortured for potential information, though he would not yield. During this time, Takahiro awakened his Sharingan(which immediately had three tomoe) to face this difficult circumstance, and proceeded to use his newfound abilities to their fullest, killing the jounins with the help of his team and proceeded to flee alongside his teammates. However, backup for the Shinobi Republic jounin had already arrived, and proceeded to kill one of his teammates and his jounin-sensei, leading Takahiro to awaken the Mangekyo Sharingan and kill the attackers. However, he fell unconscious from fatigue soon after reaching Konoha.Takahiro mastered his Sharingan at the age of six, and proceeded to enlist in the chunin exams. He easily progressed through the exam without much difficulty, and when it came to the final part of the chunin exams, he decided to reveal a kekkei-tota he had been training. His opponent was a Hyuga Clan member, who had awakened the Byakugan and could be considered a genius as well. As the Hyuga member prepared to activate the 'Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms' technique, Takahiro summoned a dark katana into his hand as a dark aura started to emanate from him, the crowd holding their breath in anticipation for what was going to happen next. The Hyuga tried to attack him, but Takahiro instantly vanished and appeared behind him, sheathing his katana back into its sheath. Deep diagonal lacerations were found on the Hyuga's chest that ruptured every weak point in his ribs and chest, causing immense blood loss and were inches away from what would have been a sliced heart.Takahiro became a chunin after that fight(at the age of 7), and engaged on medium-high ranked missions quite frequently. He strove to control the destructive power he withheld, and spent the next five years honing his skills in all areas of shinobi training. By the end of the five years, he had almost mastered the abilities of his Mangekyo Sharingan, and had obtained a great proficiency with his Kekkei Tota, to the point where he would be considered one of the best jounins in Konohagakure. He was promoted to the rank of a jounin subsequently.The rest of what he was doing after that is kept secret to the public, though it is presumed that in that time, he obtained the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan.Kekkai Genkai:The trademark of the Uchiha Clan, Takahiro's bloodline allows him to use the Sharingan - also known as the Copy Wheel Eye to some. It is said to allow the user to see chakra flow, have incredible perception, predict attacks and copy almost any technique (s)he witnesses. Takahiro has awakened an evolved Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan; one which has enhanced all his abilities even more, allowing him to easily recognize even complex genjutsu.Takahiro is also is part of a special bloodline that has allowed him to be born with an arcane kekkei-tota release once used by only by a single legendary Uchiha that is said to be the unholy manifestation of darkness itself. It draws power from primordial darkness that has existed within this world since the beginning of time, and has been concentrated into a form brimming with powers beyond this realm. It has been dubbed the Kurayami Release, and is the true concentrated form of darkness.Other Info(Anything about your character that you deem noteworthy.):He's handsome, of course.He may or may not be a double agent working for the Shinobi Republic after defecting there. Or was he working for Konohagakure again? Is he even a double agent?He's a Uchiha, but he doesn't really behave like one. He's more calm, collected, charismatic, and funny.His favorite food is miso ramen.He has a lot of likes, and not many dislikes. Or was it the other way 'round?His loyalty to his friends are boundless. Well, maybe not that boundless, but you get the gist of it. He's loyal to his friends.He's rich. Maybe due to the fact that he's a noble and has went on a lot of S-Rank and A-Rank missions.He doesn't fret under crazy situations.He's way more mature than his age makes people think he is.He's friendly. Really friendly.He can get quite arrogant at times, especially when facing enemies holding similar powers to his.

To me having him use the eternal Mangekyo Sharingan seems rather OP, he's not a Kage and that would mean he would have access to insanely powerful techniques like Amateratsu without any side effects. It's Shadow's decision but I think you should wait and have him develop the Mangekyo sharingan later in the rp.

[Teleport]

@Yog Sothoth

Teleport said However, due to the immense amount of chakra it consumes and the strain it puts on the user's eyes, it is advised to not use it a lot during battle due to its side effects.

HMM. I don't think I said there were no side effects to Amaterasu.

lol but I don't think my character is that overpowered if you look at the 16 year old Kage. Also, Amaterasu still causes Sasuke's eyes to bleed even after he received the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan - and this means that even if you have the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, you won't necessarily be free from its side effects.

[Insomnia]

Teleport said
HMM. I don't think I said there were no side effects to Amaterasu.lol but I don't think my character is that overpowered if you look at the 16 year old Kage. Also, Amaterasu still causes Sasuke's eyes to bleed even after he received the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan - and this means that even if you have the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, you won't necessarily be free from its side effects.

How is she overpowered? She's just good for her age. Like real good.

Edit: c'mon you can't graduate at the age of five.

[Origin]

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[Teleport]

Insomnia said How is she overpowered? She's just good for her age. Like real good.

So you think becoming a kage at the age of 16 is not overpowered? That's quite an interesting statement. Because as far as I know, the abilities Kages hold far exceed those of the jounin. Meaning that your character is way over the jounin level. And she's younger than my character. That doesn't seem overpowered at all to you? Not even a bit? :P

Insomnia said Edit: c'mon you can't graduate at the age of five.

Kakashi graduated at the age of six. My character simply enrolled one year earlier lol.

[Origin]

Hey look another S-rank Uchiha and guess what their from Konoha shock.... :O

Teleport said
HMM. I don't think I said there were no side effects to Amaterasu.lol but I don't think my character is that overpowered if you look at the 16 year old Kage. Also, Amaterasu still causes Sasuke's eyes to bleed even after he received the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan - and this means that even if you have the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, you won't necessarily be free from its side effects.

Hmm slightly bleeding eyes oh the pain.... Gaara was a 16 year old kage but he wasn't OP just like the one in this RP, she's good but not overly powerful. Your explanation of you acquiring Mangekyou shows someone else killed your sensei, however mangekyou only activates from guilt thinking it was your fault or from actually killing them, there is no way your character would believe that was his fault but instead you listed he did as a convenient way to become OP... You don't list any siblings so I assume that you had to receive your mangekyou transfer from one of your parents or otherwise you wouldn't have EMS

"Some have called it the unholy combination of black lightning and Amaterasu's flames, as its speed is comparable to lightning and its power to Amaterasu's flames." this is from your first technique.... wow just wow as fast as black lightning and as strong as amaterasu flames so basically no one can dodge it unless they can move instantaneously.

"This technique achieves the effect of negating and reflecting every genjutsu, fuinjutsu and juinjutsu" No comment.

Then it seems like you weren't happy with OP techniques and you decided to take it to a new level by upgrading Amaterasu and Tsukiyomi, was that really necessary?

"Eye contact is necessary for this technique. However, he merely needs to look at the enemy's eyes for this; it does not matter if they are wearing special goggles or not. As long as he can look at the enemy's eyes, this technique will work. This technique turns the target into dark stone by using this ocular seal jutsu;" Can you explain why your character can cast fuinjutsu with his eyes.

"Takahiro teleports to their blind spot" So now he can move instantaneously as well as sword technique that gets stronger if the oponent is stronger just so you can justify a one hit kill althought it shouldn't be that strong.

" but as the teleport happens instantaneously the opponent will not have time to react" So it is un-counterable and a one shot kill.. wait my bad did i say uncounterable

"Take note that the only way to stop or avoid this technique is to make sure he has no time to activate this, as Archenemy has been labeled a kinjutsu due to its unrivaled destructive power. Dodging this technique is not an option, as the teleport is instantaneous" that's right it gets better the only way to stop is to make sure he doesn't use an instanteous technique

That's not even covering your normal jutsu, look man I don't really care if your character is OP I know you are trying to fulfill a fantasy of having an insanely strong character we all want to but don't shit in front of my face and tell me it's chocolate.. Get what I'm saying? Don't piss over me and tell me it's rain. If your character is OP just admit it don't try cover it up or try justify it. However I myself don't see the point you won't have much chance to dominate and/or kill someone in a fight, maybe if this turns to war you can but if Corrupt allows your character all of this then all of the Kage's are gonna vamp up their power or atleast I am to the point were you look like a mere genin but would that be fun?

All in all it seems to me like you were trying to create a perfect character, maybe a perfect version of what you wish you were. Take away the jutsu and the kekkei genkai you see that this was an attempt to create a perfect being and all but I'm not expert let's see what corrupt says

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So you think becoming a kage at the age of 16 is not overpowered? That's quite an interesting statement. Because as far as I know, the abilities Kages hold far exceed those of the jounin. Meaning that your character is way over the jounin level. And she's younger than my character. That doesn't seem overpowered at all to you? Not even a bit? :PKakashi graduated at the age of six. My character simply enrolled one year earlier lol.

Nope. Sure it seems unfair but it simply means that my character is stronger than yours and she achieved this level at an earlier age than your character. Doesn't make her overpowered.

I would've made her older but she's a potential romance interest so nup.

And yeah if Corrupt accepts this I'm giving Yume invulnerability and instant healing. THEN you may call her OP.

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Origin said "Some have called it the unholy combination of black lightning and Amaterasu's flames, as its speed is comparable to lightning and its power to Amaterasu's flames." this is from your first technique.... wow just wow as fast as black lightning and as strong as amaterasu flames so basically no one can dodge it unless they can move instantaneously.

Lightning can be dodged, if you haven't noticed, in the universe of naruto. It can be blocked as well. I did not say it had the quickness of which Amaterasu was executed; I simply said its speed was COMPARABLE to lightning, and that its power to Amaterasu's flames. They do not need to move instantaneously. End of story.

Origin said "This technique achieves the effect of negating and reflecting every genjutsu, fuinjutsu and juinjutsu" No comment.

An immense amount of chakra would be needed and strain would be placed everywhere across the body - similar to what Sasuke felt when he used his Susanoo over a longer period than he should've. I was hoping to save the weaknesses for when in the actual story, but I guess I'll have to explain them to you. If your character knows the ins and outs of your own genjutsu/fuinjutsu/juinjutsu, wouldn't you know the exact counters to it? That would make it easy to escape from them, would it not?

Origin said Then it seems like you weren't happy with OP techniques and you decided to take it to a new level by upgrading Amaterasu and Tsukiyomi, was that really necessary?

I don't believe you've read the even nastier side effects of the upgraded techniques. If Tsukyomi puts immense strain on the eyes, don't you think the upgraded version would put an even bigger strain?

Origin said "Eye contact is necessary for this technique. However, he merely needs to look at the enemy's eyes for this; it does not matter if they are wearing special goggles or not. As long as he can look at the enemy's eyes, this technique will work. This technique turns the target into dark stone by using this ocular seal jutsu;" Can you explain why your character can cast fuinjutsu with his eyes.

I'll explain it in full detail, since you've inquired so kindly.
This technique works similar to genjutsu, in the fact that it manipulates a certain part of the opponent's body to activate it. However, this specifically writes a seal in their chakra pathway system in their brain, through an imbalance in chakra. Then, the seal is created and activated, paralyzing the enemy until an unsealing jutsu is used.

Origin said "Takahiro teleports to their blind spot" So now he can move instantaneously as well as sword technique that gets stronger if the opponent is stronger just so you can justify a one hit kill although it shouldn't be that strong.

I believe I have already mentioned the teleport earlier. His kekkei tota is specifically meant to punish his opponents for being stronger - but unless he uses a jutsu that does a lot of damage, it will not one hit kill nor justify it - though it can become stronger as the enemy is stronger.

Origin said " but as the teleport happens instantaneously the opponent will not have time to react" So it is un-counterable and a one shot kill.. wait my bad did i say uncounterable

It's not a one-shot kill. This only works on one person at a time. If another person were to be there and even interrupt it a slight bit, the whole technique would fail, Takahiro would be left defenseless and his chakra levels would be depleted as the move would virtually stop. You're basically asking me to tell you all his weaknesses.

Origin said "Take note that the only way to stop or avoid this technique is to make sure he has no time to activate this, as Archenemy has been labeled a kinjutsu due to its unrivaled destructive power. Dodging this technique is not an option, as the teleport is instantaneous" that's right it gets better the only way to stop is to make sure he doesn't use an instanteous technique

If you really haven't read, it takes time for the runes to form and circle around him. I'll give you the details; the runes take approximately 7.8 seconds to write themselves in the air around Takahiro for the teleport-kick to work.

Origin said That's not even covering your normal jutsu, look man I don't really care if your character is OP I know you are trying to fulfill a fantasy of having an insanely strong character we all want to but don't shit in front of my face and tell me it's chocolate.. Get what I'm saying? Don't piss over me and tell me it's rain. If your character is OP just admit it don't try cover it up or try justify it. However I myself don't see the point you won't have much chance to dominate and/or kill someone in a fight, maybe if this turns to war you can but if Corrupt allows your character all of this then all of the Kage's are gonna vamp up their power or atleast I am to the point were you look like a mere genin but would that be fun?

Chill. Derogatory language is not cool. I don't think my character is OP, because of the reasons I have already stated. You have just skimmed through my character and came up with some hypothesis that it was the most overpowered thing in creation, when you don't even notice the other overpowered things around you. That's what bias is.

Origin said All in all it seems to me like you were trying to create a perfect character, maybe a perfect version of what you wish to be taking away the jutsu and all but I'm not expert let's see what corrupt says

Of course my character isn't perfect. Every character has flaws, though I was going to wait until the story to show how truly flawed my character was, especially mentally. You, however, have forced me to explain the flaws of his jutsu, which I was going to hope to only reveal in the story.