[OOC] Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

[Expllo]

Nero said
I think we all agree that Teleport hasn't done a very good job balancing his crap out.

Indeed.

[Masaki Haruna]

@Lily YAY!, I'm at our pad! and yeah you may make a Kiri nin... be it Mizukage's relative or child lolz!
I see what I can do for this blonde Uchiha but yeah I agree, on that Nero. We all do.

[Origin]

Nero said
I think we all agree that Teleport hasn't done a very good job balancing his crap out.

This.

[Masaki Haruna]

Here's my outline:

Since we're at the beginning of the story, we can't have the big guns right away.

[Durnehviir]

So...Saiyaka is going to have to permanently seal some ninja powers in the Rp I see.
S'all good.

[LillyDove]

Perhaps the child can be both, lol

[Insomnia]

Isn't it kinda like saying, my character has instant healing but lemme give him this weakness to eggplants and fire real quick so does that make up for it?

No, it does not make up for it. Sure your character has couple weaknesses but it doesn't make up for the fact that he has instant healing

Oh and let me put in a weakness for every skill you call OP too. "I was gonna reveal them later blah blah bullshit."

[Durnehviir]

I'm shifting through the comments and dang! What did you do to Teleport, Insomnia? Yours is like the only character he called out. haha. And like for no reason.

[Insomnia]

Durnehviir said
I'm shifting through the comments and dang! What did you do to Teleport, Insomnia? Yours is like the only character he called out. haha. And like for no reason.

Because mine was younger and stronger which didn't make sense apparently.

Edit: I just noticed his character is 17. Was it always like that?

[LillyDove]

Anaru Yuki

Appearance:

Name: Anaru Yuki
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Village: Kirikagure (Hidden Mist)
Village Rank: Genin
Ninja Rank: C-Rank
Release: Ice and Water

Tools:
Senbon (Unlimited supply)
Kunai- 4
Shuriken - 10
Smoke Bombs- 30
Explosive Tags- 10

Bio:
Anaru Yuki was born to one of the remaining Yuki clans after Haku's family died, his father a young man who had done well to hide his Kekai Genkai from the rest of his world. Apparently word got out about a Yuki Clan member being alive and sent the villages in a frenzy to find this supposed member, the Hidden Rain was quick to send out their best Jounin, young girl with a temper. Sarsano Yuki, Anura's father managed to elude the other villages but he could elude the Hidden Rain's Jounin.

Captured only to find the girl intriguing as her temper matched the color of her hair, eventually on the way back to the Hidden Rain, he allowed himself to love her and she came to love him as well. One fateful night was it all took for the two, back at the Hidden Rain, they tried to keep their secret from the prying eyes of her family but further into the pregnancy she became sick and that was the end of the secret. The girls brother was out raged at this, demanding that the moment their child was born that Sarsano took their child and leave, never to return. No matter how hard the girl begged, it was no use, her brother had made his demands quite clear.

After leaving with Anaru, returning to his old home in the land of water to raise their child. His mother had named him and so he kept the name as a remainder of her.

Anaru was taught his kekai despite it being dangerous, it was his best defense against the world. At the age of five years old, Anaru was sent to live in Kirigakure to learn his secondary release of water. He graduated at the young age of ten years old because was exceedingly quick and agile for his age, he inherited his mothers speciality as well as his fathers kekai genkai, making him a considerable opponent.

Anaru was never one to wish harm to another, being gentle and kind to others despite his strength and speed, he is a peace lover.

Jutsu:
Ice Release- Not yet learned
Demonic Thin Ice Mirrors
Demonic Ice Mirrors
Ice Prison
One Horned White Whale
Swallow Snow Storm
Wolf Fang Avalanche

Water Release-
Water Clone
Water Prison
Great Waterfall
Snakes Mouth
Tearing Torrent

Other Notes: Uses mostly water Release out of fear for his kekai genkai.

[Durnehviir]

But I mean Gaara? I feel like that made the entire argument pointless. lol Then his character is extraordinary young, yet has a mastery over his techniques that should take decades. The genius excuse can only be milked so far.

It was just spite. Targeted spite. Like he had a grudge. Insomnia did something to Teleport, huh? Did you kick sand on his cookies in pre-school? Run over his puppy? Made fun of his favorite shirt? Rude, Insomnia. Really rude.

Anyway, no point in beating a dead horse, but I don't think accepting a borderline Rikudo Sennin is needed. The character should specialize in one area. If he has the Sharingan then the Kekkai Tota is unnecessary and if he has the Kekkai Tota then the Sharingan abilities are unnecessary. No point in having a DBZ character.

@Lilly, Also, you can't put a hider in a hider. lol

[Aeris]

Durn: "No point in beating a dead horse, but let me give you this burn just out of compassion."

Also, my all time favorite naruto music, gives me orgamsic chills:

[LillyDove]

Figured that out, lol.

[Expllo]

No, Nero, this is your favorite. This is everyone's favorite!

[Durnehviir]

lol. Great song.
Waaaaaay better than the disgusting Sub'd opening for the first season. It was one of the things the English dub did right!

Also, I think i'm gonna post with some shenanigans in Kumogakure. Raikage should be gone by now, right? So there's like no one in his office? OH yeah. Time to take over Kumo.

[Origin]

Insomnia said
Isn't it kinda like saying, my character has instant healing but lemme give him this weakness to eggplants and fire real quick so does that make up for it?No, it does not make up for it. Sure your character has couple weaknesses but it doesn't make up for the fact that he has instant healingOh and let me put in a weakness for every skill you call OP too. "I was gonna reveal them later blah blah bullshit."

I felt this way as well and would have continued to prove why his character was just too much but it's not my place to say. Just going to wait and see what corrupted says, cause in the end it's up to him.

[Origin]

Was Shadow added to the rooster btw?

[Dystopia]

Tray, if Isai is going to take over Kumo, he needs to do it zombie apocalypse -style.

[Origin]

Dystopia said
Tray, if Isai is going to take over Kumo, he needs to do it zombie apocalypse -style.

Take. Over.. Kumo?? Whaaaaaaaaaaaatchu talking bout' willis

[LillyDove]

Could someone describe the Jinchūriki process to me? How the extra chakra is accessed and all that jazz?