[OOC] Descended I: Fires of change

[KaBling]

Yeah; I didn't exactly mean that, however.

Who ever thought Brace stood for 'Cinder/Ember' in Italian?

'Cinder to equip* Water'

*(Assuming we're translating 'garnir,' and Wikipedia is correct about the word 'Garrison.')

[Lugia]

Also, lol at your sig about me.

[KaBling]

That sig kept breaking on me, until I realised it was because I used '[],' which interfered with the QQCode.

I would've gone with the one that described you with a stick. However, it wasn't worth the hassle, plus it was too big.

[Lugia]

So... any ideas on finishing up your app?

[KaBling]

Doin' it.

Currently having difficulty with the history section; can't remember everything in the OP.

[Lugia]

Well, you could open a second tab to keep on the OP while you edit your post.

[KaBling]

It gets confusing to keep checking on two different tabs.

Oh well. I just have physical appearance and history to complete now.

[Lugia]

I'd prefer to have at least someone else here, you know. Also, where's Ridlins?

[KaBling]

Dunno.

I have trouble describing my character's appearance. Could someone give my app a read, regardless?

[Lugia]

Well, I'm no moderator, but the history seems alright. Don't see any problems, and it seems logical that one would move to Vrondi to keep the craziness at bay.

[Riddles]

I'm almost done. I just need to fill out the Abilities/powers, Weapons, and History.

[Lugia]

So... it's about 30% done, then?

[KaBling]

Need help for appearance.

What does everyone look like again?

[Rai]

Physical appearance can be completed with pictures if y'all want to. Giving me a few things to do tonight.
KaBling I like your character idea. But to be accepted your character must have more limitations to his water hose attack. If he uses a high pressure strike, it depletes his water supply from one use. As water is more dangerous than fire when used right.

Descendant appearance range usually from anthro Dragons, to scaled humanoids. More rare are the ones who looks entirely human.

[KaBling]

Rai said
Physical appearance can be completed with pictures if y'all want to. Giving me a few things to do tonight.
KaBling I like your character idea. But to be accepted your character must have more limitations to his water hose attack. If he uses a high pressure strike, it depletes his water supply from one use. As water is more dangerous than fire when used right.

I thought it's stated his attack with deplete his supply within 3 seconds. I don't really get what you're saying, apart from saying how overpowered the attack is.

Rai said
Descendant appearance range usually from anthro Dragons, to scaled humanoids. More rare are the ones who looks entirely human.

Er... I'll keep that in mind.

[Rai]

Just to clarify incase I read it wrong. Besides that you're good to go.
Some Descendants look like demons as well, something else to keep in mind.

[KaBling]

I'm still gonna have general difficulty with the appearance, however.

This is what I've come up with so far: "Scaly, bipedal, armed with claws and horns... a typical Sajukai, dragon descendant."

I feel as if the last three words don't go together...

Oh. Damn; I just realised how the name 'Brace' is similar to my own.

[Rai]

You can give more to the description than that. XD
Doesn't have to be too different, but clothing and style are important to add.

[KaBling]

Well, I'm done.

Gtg now.

[Lugia]

Well, it looks okay to me, but, again, I'm not a moderator here.