[OOC] The New Order(Post WW3 RP)

[AlienBastard]

Not really a case against my idea though, since the dictatorship I have in mind could emerge only by the 2030's and only dominate 60% of afghanistan while the other 40% are dominated by other warlord factions.

[Dinh AaronMk]

Needs feudalism.

[Jeddaven]

I need someone to cause a spectacle about. All I want is to launch a massive military invasion.

I'll probably call it operation "EJACULATE JUSTICE" or something.

[Dinh AaronMk]

Just post feggit.

It's been a year after a massive fifteen year war. I'm sure the last thing anyone wants is another massive war.

[TheEvanCat]

And then you're sitting in the international bed, apologizing over your premature ejaculation of justice. "It happens to every country!"

[Jeddaven]

Dinh AaronMk said
Just post feggit.It's been a year after a massive fifteen year war. I'm sure the last thing anyone wants is another massive war.

I know, but who doesn't want Poland to EJACULATE JUSTICE?

[TheEvanCat]

Jeddaven said
I know, but who doesn't want Poland to EJACULATE JUSTICE?

And then you have to stay for the next fourteen years to raise the troubled child that ensues after your premature justice.

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Name of Group: Merrick's Rangers
Type:Private Military Contractors
Assets:Small Base in the Bahamas used for training,Recruitment, and motor pool
Personnel:1000 (400 Operators the other 600 are misc personnel cooks,mechanics,gunsmiths,ETC)
History:Merrick's Rangers were a small branch of a much larger corporation during the war at that time they were known as the I&R (Intelligence and Retrieval unit) they excelled at gathering intelligence and recon often times going deep behind enemy lines and causing chaos as well as getting intelligence on their contractors enemies they also excelled at getting prisoners of war out.

During the war the company was in high demand especially the I&R branch of it if some high ranking officer got captured you better believe the I&R were there so that their contractors wouldn't waste special forces personnel if some intelligence needed gathering or you needed something deep behind enemy lines taken out their contractor would use I&R were sent in as expendables so precious special operations personnel would not be needed towards the end of the war the detachment started getting called Paulson's rangers after the commanding officer of the unit and because their job was like the rangers of old.

A year before the war "Ended" they were on VIP rescue a commanding officer that had been captured and was being interrogated I&R was called in to kill him if he had leaked any intel or to save him if he hasn't they dropped in under the cover of night and infiltrated the prison until a rookie tipped off the enemy by accident soon a firefight commenced and when the dust settled Paulson had been mortally wounded and it didn't look like he was going to make it so he passed command off to his second-in-command Merrick, they completed the mission and got the officer home and from that night on they became known as Merrick's Rangers.

After the war after all hell had broken loose Merrick's rangers found themselves out of a job nobody had a use for private contractors anymore and the company went bankrupt but refusing to let go Merrick gathered up whats left of his unit dusted off his old BDU and went to work he hired up as much as he could with the money he had made during the war anyone who was a skilled tradesmen like plumbers,mechanics,gunsmiths, and the like were hired up as well and found them a small niche of land that they can live off of his old training base in the Bahama's and there they remain till this day offering their services up to the highest bidder.

Technology: Merrick's Rangers use whatever tech they can get their hands on and give it a modern spin an old hummer might become a Fast attack vehicle an old helicopter might be fitted with more passenger space or to become a mobile bunker an old battle tank might become an anti-air asset as well.

Leadership: Gelen Merrick is a very grim man but also charismatic able to rally his men even when things look bad he values every soldier in his outfit even more so than the money that seems to drive his personnel he joined I&R after being a US marine in force recon his skill set made him valuable in gathering intelligence and naval operations which he still uses today when talking with a prospective client he analyzes them and has a way of making them a little uncomfortable but his second in command normally evens that out with her bubbly personality.

Emily Brewer:Is a very loving person unlike her commanding officer she loves to make people laugh and make jokes she often goes out of her way to know everyone personally like Gelen she is one of the few members of Paulson's rangers that's still kicking after the war her expertise was as a marine scout sniper and she assisted in snatch and grab operations with the old I&R team and that made her invaluable to Merrick's rangers. On the battlefield however Emily is a cold calculating machine seeing her targets as nothing and bringing a cold approach to things this brings other soldiers on base to question her sanity.

[Dinh AaronMk]

Enalais said
Name of Group: Merrick's Rangers

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Dinh AaronMk said

what?

[Chapatrap]

Yeahhhhh, I'mma drop out of this. I'm too lazy trying to cut down my RP's to maybe 2-3.

UK is free from my oppressive control.

[Dinh AaronMk]

Enalais said
what?

Surely you could do better or be more imaginative. App 'es so tiny, 'es like baby man.

[Keyguyperson]

Enalais said
Name of Group: Merrick's RangersType:Private Military ContractorsAssets:Small Base in the Bahamas used for training,Recruitment, and motor poolPersonnel:1000 (400 Operators the other 600 are misc personnel cooks,mechanics,gunsmiths,ETC) History:Merrick's Rangers were a split off of a private military corporation after the war they were the deep reconnaissance and Intelligence gathering arm of the corporation that was led by Merrick's forebear they participated in the war and fought together marking targets for the countries who hired them they made it big and soon they became known as Paulson's Rangers but towards the end of the war Paulson died and left control of the group to him from that day forward they became known as Merrick's rangers.Merrick knew he was going to have to find someplace safe and sound after the war so leaving behind the now bankrupt company he bought out his former training base and now uses it to launch operations across the globe for the right price.

We do not have insanely high standards here, but we like to keep it at or above what seems to be called "high casual" or "low advanced" here. There is no way such a tiny app is going to be accepted, it contains only the most basic hard facts. Tell us more, when did they split off? Who founded the original company? Why did they do it? What are Merrick's goals and ambitions? Who is he? What drives him? (unless that is planned for character development) What sort of weapons does the group use, is it old gear or some sort of experimental device? Do they have distinctive vehicles and weapons, or do they buy them off the market? Will the group kill anyone for a few bucks, no matter what the motivation of the person hiring them? Or will they refuse services to people with goals or motivations they consider immoral? Do they have any opinions on other NGOs and nations, or are they indifferent? Are they only in it for the cash, or do they have some greater motivation? Give us something to work with other than "They have guns and will shoot those guns at other people for money". A lot of people here spent more than one day on their apps, you have apparently spent a few minutes unless you're a really slow typer. This post itself is longer than your entire app, and if you had looked at other apps here, they have multiple paragraphs of history. Your history is acceptable as a short summary of a section of the history seen in Aaron's app. If you want to join, you're going to need a much better app.

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Dinh AaronMk said
Surely you could do better or be more imaginative. App 'es so tiny, 'es like baby man.

better?

[Keyguyperson]

Enalais said
better?

Hmm... significant improvement, but it enters my personal grey zone. I have no opinion until further arguments are made.

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Keyguyperson said
Hmm... significant improvement, but it enters my personal grey zone. I have no opinion until further arguments are made.

is this a bit better?

[null123]

Enalais said
Name of Group: Merrick's RangersType:Private Military ContractorsAssets:Small Base in the Bahamas used for training,Recruitment, and motor poolPersonnel:1000 (400 Operators the other 600 are misc personnel cooks,mechanics,gunsmiths,ETC) History:Merrick's Rangers were a small branch of a much larger corporation during the war at that time they were known as the I&R (Intelligence and Retrieval unit) they excelled at gathering intelligence and recon often times going deep behind enemy lines and causing chaos as well as getting intelligence on their contractors enemies they also excelled at getting prisoners of war out.During the war the company was in high demand especially the I&R branch of it if some high ranking officer got captured you better believe the I&R were there so that their contractors wouldn't waste special forces personnel if some intelligence needed gathering or you needed something deep behind enemy lines taken out their contractor would use I&R were sent in as expendables so precious special operations personnel would not be needed towards the end of the war the detachment started getting called Paulson's rangers after the commanding officer of the unit and because their job was like the rangers of old.A year before the war "Ended" they were on VIP rescue a commanding officer for the united states had been captured and was being interrogated I&R was called in to kill him if he had leaked any intel or to save him if he hasn't they dropped in under the cover of night and infiltrated the prison until a rookie tipped off the enemy by accident soon a firefight commenced and when the dust settled Paulson had been mortally wounded and it didn't look like he was going to make it so he passed command off to his second-in-command Merrick, they completed the mission and got the officer home and from that night on they became known as Merrick's Rangers.After the war after all hell had broken loose Merrick's rangers found themselves out of a job nobody had a use for private contractors anymore and the company went bankrupt but refusing to let go Merrick gathered up whats left of his unit dusted off his old BDU and went to work he hired up as much as he could with the money he had made during the war anyone who was a skilled tradesmen like plumbers,mechanics,gunsmiths, and the like were hired up as well and found them a small niche of land that they can live off of his old training base in the Bahama's and there they remain till this day offering their services up to the highest bidder.

That 3rd paragraph needs to be revised, by the end of the war the USA had become the NAF(North American Federation) and they had pulled out half way through.

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duck55223 said
That 3rd paragraph needs to be revised, by the end of the war the USA had become the NAF(North American Federation) and they had pulled out half way through.

is that a bit better duck?

[null123]

Seems good, but im gonna keep my eye on you.

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duck55223 said
Seems good, but im gonna keep my eye on you.

Roger roger.