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I can tell you what's up.

The sky.

No, I have Pneumonia and Bronchitis. Sincerely sorry, I was in the doctor's office for a while. Sorry for short post...not really feeling too fresh right now.
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So sorry :( *virtual hugs*
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It's no worries. Actually, I know I'm a bit late, but I give you my condolences about your grandfather. I don't think my illnesses are as bad as they sound. c:
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Soul said
I can tell you what's up.

The sky.


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Humor IS one of my more dashing traits.
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Heh. c:
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Welp.

Double hasn't responded to my PM, but I'm not certain if he has been online or not, considering he hasn't made many posts in the last few days.

I'm not sure if I should wait, or move on.
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Hmmm, well there hasn't really been much interaction between characters yet. I think it'd be okay for us to move forward?? I don't want anyone to be left out though. I guess that's your call, Raddum.
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In my opinion, they can just "Catch up" if they decide to rejoin.
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I agree with Pyromania. I mean, they could just play it off as their characters just being quiet throughout the tour, or something of that degree.
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Well, I posted. Glad to know ya'll are still with me, even though I sometimes don't make decisions quickly. :3
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Name: Blake

Age: (12-16) 14

Gender: Male

Appearance:
Personality: aggressive, protective, Helpful
History: Grew up with a houndour egg and hates to put houndour in his duskball
Starter Pokémon: Houndour

Species: Houndour

Nickname: shadow

Level: 5

Gender: Male

Ability: Early bird, and fire bird

Moves: Ember leer and howl

Summary: Blake raised him from an egg. His personality to him is loving and caring but also a troublemaker. To others untrusting and aggressive and trouble making
(Bulbasaur)
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Just browsing through the threads, spotted this CS.

Had to stop and just stare at it for a moment.
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I'm sorry, but I'm not accepting new members at the moment.

I will, however, say a few things about this character sheet.

1. His history is short to the extreme. I have no idea where Blake is from, what kind of life he has lived and where, and gives no explanation as to why he has an Houndour Egg to begin with. It has left me completely and utterly confused.

2. Fire Bird isn't an ability I have ever seen, and isn't one I can find any information about. Aside from that, a Pokemon can't have two abilities.

Other than that, the CS is alright. Some might pick on the personality bit, but it doesn't bother me because I like seeing personality be done in the IC anyways. I'm sorry I'm not accepting, but the advice I can give you is to try and improve on the history bit. The more details, the better. Explaining where Blake is from, where he got the egg, and how he was raised, ect. That's about all I can say on it, apologies again that I'm not accepting, but maybe what I said can help you in some way. I'm not the wisest person though, so I probably wasn't that constructive.
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Yea sorry I just read the rules and description and stuff I just read that part and fire bird is a ability that is rare XD but I assure you it's real if its hit with a fire attack then it takes no damage and boosts his fire attacks by 50%
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its flash fire i think that your talking about. could have miss read it i guess.
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It's your favorite game, Radd!
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I know, I know.

Good posts, but I need the rest. This RP is going to start heating up soon, I assure you. c:
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RALTS!! USE. . . Con-confusion. NOW!! USE. . . Confusion.
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