I'm sorry, but I'm not accepting new members at the moment.
I will, however, say a few things about this character sheet.
1. His history is short to the extreme. I have no idea where Blake is from, what kind of life he has lived and where, and gives no explanation as to why he has an Houndour Egg to begin with. It has left me completely and utterly confused.
2. Fire Bird isn't an ability I have ever seen, and isn't one I can find any information about. Aside from that, a Pokemon can't have two abilities.
Other than that, the CS is alright. Some might pick on the personality bit, but it doesn't bother me because I like seeing personality be done in the IC anyways. I'm sorry I'm not accepting, but the advice I can give you is to try and improve on the history bit. The more details, the better. Explaining where Blake is from, where he got the egg, and how he was raised, ect. That's about all I can say on it, apologies again that I'm not accepting, but maybe what I said can help you in some way. I'm not the wisest person though, so I probably wasn't that constructive.