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Well, whats everyone up to?

Also, if any of you are bored join my Titanpad document! We can discuss this or anything I guess. https://titanpad.com/R08Kao7RKF
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I have EVO finals I missed to go over as well as food to eat right now so I'm not quite bored
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Well, at least you have things going on.
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I'll wait to go over CS until I get a word of finality from everybody that they're all finished.
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I dunno when I'll get mine up. I got a novel to work on, an OOC to make, and I'm on vacattion too.
Not for sure when I'll be done.
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Been busy this week, I'll try to get a CS up tomorrow.
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I'll let you know if I make any edits before you go over it. Otherwise consider it done.
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Draconilian said
I'll wait to go over CS until I get a word of finality from everybody that they're all finished.


Mine's been done since the first upload, though I admit that I've toyed with giving her another magic that's still in-the-works. Guess I could just work on that in the RP itself.
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Consider me done with my CS as well. I haven't been able to think of any other necessary edits.
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unlikely to get any updates for a couple days since I'm going on a vacation, but we're still waiting on character sheets anyway so not a big deal
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Since GM is on vacation, I'm going to throw in my two cents for Princess Fuego Pantalones.

First of all, somebody has been watching way to much paranormal activity, but that's just me being an elitist I guess.

I actually just have a couple questions, maybe to clear it up just for my own personal benefit.

#1: Is she a demon? It's not specifically stated what she shifts into, My money is on Demon.
#2: Magic comes back to the world January 1st, 2016 (Ignoring the Bruja and her mystical sense to know that in 18 years Princess fuego would become devil incarnate)
The Roleplay begins exactly one month afterwards, February 1st, 2016.
-- So this means in the span of a month she... Burned down a highschool, Murdered a nurse, and escaped Texas while avoiding the entirety of the media and the police force, and somehow supports herself in New York
#3: Her powers include.. (quote) "..she felt that she was stronger and faster.." , Anything Fire (I'm assuming already present physical flames, like a camp fire) Pyrokinesis, which is the ability to will fire into existence, Fire bending (The ability to bend the fire to your will, despite willing it into existence anyways through pyrokinesis.), etc (??). Use fire to heal her wounds (does she absorb it like some sort of elemental?) and cure herself of illness. (It's a pretty epic skill alone to control fire on the atomic level and destroy multiple cells of bacteria, virus, etc)

Synopsis: It feels like you watched Paranormal V: The Marked Ones, and thought up a neat idea for a character, then proceeded to smash through and rush the biography leaving it meatless, and chalked full of amusing errors. ("..She wants to find them old".. is my favorite) Then thought of the best way for your character to outshine and surpass everybody else because she can control fire, will it into existence, heal wounds and illness, so basically when she bursts into fire she's invulnerable.

Advice: Re-write it, Elaborate on Key-points, read some others for positive reinforcement.

Admittedly I tend to rush as well, but not development wise. I type around 116 words per minute, I make mistakes too and I don't catch them, but it's the detail and effort you put into it that makes it good.

*****The above points are personal opinion and in no way, shape, or form represent the collective views of other members, or the GM himself*****

P.S:: There are way too many pictures in your signature. If you haven't noticed, most people tend to use one.

EDIT: Atleast he changed his signature?
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Draconilian said
It's visible, general colored energy stuff,It's "coded" so that only individuals with certain traits may pass through it, otherwise it's (theoretically) impenetrable. The traits in question of course, being the ability to shapeshift, It can also be manipulated by shifters however they please, I won't cut details here, a malicious shifter could easily ruin everything inside the field, other shifter colonies may have different defenses.Quality Begets Quantity =)At least, I hope it does.


So I'd like to clear up a couple points with you. Can Aeric enter the zone even though I'm still indecisive on if he will be a shifter or not.

Also, can I be indecisive or do I have to pick now?

Also I was just kind of wondering. Does it bother anyone else that darkwolfsoul's character could just blow off one of your legs whenever it pleases her?
Is there a limit on this power protecting our legs or is it "no-holds barred?"
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No time for serious thought, mere glancing, but I noticed Aeon said he types 116 words per second, sorry, but you're breaking the laws of physics there

Back to the beach
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Aeonumbra said
So I'd like to clear up a couple points with you. Can Aeric enter the zone even though I'm still indecisive on if he will be a shifter or not.Also, can I be indecisive or do I have to pick now?Also I was just kind of wondering. Does it bother anyone else that darkwolfsoul's character could just blow off one of your legs whenever it pleases her?Is there a limit on this power protecting our legs or is it "no-holds barred?"


I hadn't really thought about it, but now that you mention it I do think that it's a bit much that she could, potentially, destroy anything with but a thought and a snap of her fingers.
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kapuchu said
I hadn't really thought about it, but now that you mention it I do think that it's a bit much that she could, potentially, destroy anything with but a thought and a snap of her fingers.


Not really.
For an explosion to do obliterating damage it needs a sort of shrapnel. Causing explosions by air only really causes a massive shockwave that can propel things, or burn them.

It's not like harpy girl couldn't put a hole in you with compressed air.

I'm pretty sure everyone's magic is fairly lethal.

I know my character will be a ticking time bomb.
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FrozenEcstasy said
Not really.For an explosion to do obliterating damage it needs a sort of shrapnel. Causing explosions by air only really causes a massive shockwave that can propel things, or burn them. It's not like harpy girl couldn't put a hole in you with compressed air.


" She does this by being able to generate extremely high temperatures and quick control of gases in the surrounding air, causing explosions that range from mild shock to annihilating."

Quote taken directly from the character sheet. Such an explosion, regardless of whether or has shrapnel or not, is still a shockwave capable of tearing a leg apart if it is close enough. It does say "annihilating" after all.
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kapuchu said
Quote taken directly from the character sheet. Such an explosion, regardless of whether or has shrapnel or not, is still a shockwave capable of tearing a leg apart if it is close enough. It does say "annihilating" after all.


Well gas explosions aren't annihilating. They burn, crush by immense force, and emit shock waves.
Still could blow a leg off if used properly, but most the damage she'd be doing is burning and knocking people away. Her bio does also say she has limits on it. From my understanding if she became to annoying she could be obliterated in her charge up time.
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I'd also like to point out if she does this by superheating air the effect will be more like lightning than a bomb.

And her explosions wouldn't be focused enough to blow a leg off by that means, it would blow the rest of the body away as well.

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I'm such a fucking nerd omg.
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I will tone him down if I must.
Excuse my shaky biography.











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