[OOC] Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

[Crimson Raven]

Finaly posted!

[Dark Light]

Work in progress, feedback please

Character Sheet
Name: Vallen
Age: Early 20's
Birthday:
Magic: colour absorption.
Magic is everywhere, even in light. Vallen extracts that magic through his eyes and can enhance himself with it. Each colour is associated to some feelings and can also be used to affect his emotions or another's. The magic can also be condensed down into a small physical manifestations. It is temporary and each colour has different properties.

Vallen begins only available to manipulate yellow light.

Colour: emotion- enhancement. Physicality

RED: Act (physical)
Anger/aggression
Endurance/str
Sticky volatile goo

BLUE: Feel (emotional)
Sadness/acceptance
Empathic/empathy
Soft flexible light

YELLOW: Think (mental)
Hope/determination
Speed/clarity
Solid sharp brittle fragile

Magic Level: No. Of colours.
( C ) one ( B ) two ( A ) three
History: Vallen had a normal upbringing, his family was well off, his mother caring and his father an important banker. He was quite content staying at home and following in his fathers footsteps. Then he discovered his powers, his family thought so highly of him and knew life was passing by the quiet shy Vallen that they forced him out to live a life of adventure. Little did Vallen know his parents were once great adventurers.
Personality: Vallen is quiet and shy and has very little confidence in himself. He has very little combat experience and avoids fights as much as possible. However he is in his element when confronted with a puzzle or mental challenge, also when he is creating or inventing something new.
Guild and guild mark location:
Currently guildless
Team Members:
Three Strengths:
1. Highly Intelligent
2. Inventive/creative
3. Highly observant/strong senses.
Three Weaknesses:
1. Physical strength
2. Low confidence
3. Needs glasses
Greatest Love: Overcoming challenges, learning and creating new things.
Motivation: To do his parents proud, to get a life story so he can go back home.
Appearance: (A picture works, use the image function)
Additional Details: alchemist - makes potions.

[Crimson Raven]

Work in progress, feedback please

Character Sheet
Name: Vallen
Age: Early 20's
Birthday:
Magic: colour absorption.
Magic is everywhere, even in light. Vallen extracts that magic through his eyes and can enhance himself with it. Each colour is associated to some feelings and can also be used to affect his emotions or another's. The magic can also be condensed down into a small physical manifestations. It is temporary and each colour has different properties.

Vallen begins only available to manipulate yellow light.

Colour: emotion- enhancement. Physicality

RED: Act (physical)
Anger/aggression
Endurance/str
Sticky volatile goo

BLUE: Feel (emotional)
Sadness/acceptance
Empathic/empathy
Soft flexible light

YELLOW: Think (mental)
Hope/determination
Speed/clarity
Solid sharp brittle fragile

Magic Level: No. Of colours.
( C ) one ( B ) two ( A ) three
History: Vallen had a normal upbringing, his family was well off, his mother caring and his father an important banker. He was quite content staying at home and following in his fathers footsteps. Then he discovered his powers, his family thought so highly of him and knew life was passing by the quiet shy Vallen that they forced him out to live a life of adventure. Little did Vallen know his parents were once great adventurers.
Personality: Vallen is quiet and shy and has very little confidence in himself. He has very little combat experience and avoids fights as much as possible. However he is in his element when confronted with a puzzle or mental challenge, also when he is creating or inventing something new.
Guild and guild mark location:
Currently guildless
Team Members:
Three Strengths:
1. Highly Intelligent
2. Inventive/creative
3. Highly observant/strong senses.
Three Weaknesses:
1. Physical strength
2. Low confidence
3. Needs glasses
Greatest Love: Overcoming challenges, learning and creating new things.
Motivation: To do his parents proud, to get a life story so he can go back home.
Appearance: (A picture works, use the image function)
Additional Details: alchemist - makes potions.

@Dark Light

I like what you have here, only possable problem I see is his magic level. A class would be able to go toe to toe with Natsu, Gray, or Juvia. I just don't see that. Three colors would MAYBE make him a Low B rank. Other that that, good job.

My two cents, take it with a grain of salt.

[Burthstone]

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I like what you have here, only possable problem I see is his magic level. A class would be able to go toe to toe with Natsu, Gray, or Juvia. I just don't see that. Three colors would MAYBE make him a Low B rank. Other that that, good job.

My two cents, take it with a grain of salt.

@Crimson Raven

I dunno. Juvia was S-Class, and Natsu and Grey are both very high A-Class mages.

What's-her-face, the girl who can drink ridiculous amounts of alcohol, is A-class, but of what I've seen of her she couldn't stand toe-to-toe with any of those three. (With the exception of that Grand Spell she's got.)

[Zarkun]

Work in progress, feedback please

Character Sheet
Name: Vallen
Age: Early 20's
Birthday:
Magic: colour absorption.
Magic is everywhere, even in light. Vallen extracts that magic through his eyes and can enhance himself with it. Each colour is associated to some feelings and can also be used to affect his emotions or another's. The magic can also be condensed down into a small physical manifestations. It is temporary and each colour has different properties.

Vallen begins only available to manipulate yellow light.

Colour: emotion- enhancement. Physicality

RED: Act (physical)
Anger/aggression
Endurance/str
Sticky volatile goo

BLUE: Feel (emotional)
Sadness/acceptance
Empathic/empathy
Soft flexible light

YELLOW: Think (mental)
Hope/determination
Speed/clarity
Solid sharp brittle fragile

Magic Level: No. Of colours.
( C ) one ( B ) two ( A ) three
History: Vallen had a normal upbringing, his family was well off, his mother caring and his father an important banker. He was quite content staying at home and following in his fathers footsteps. Then he discovered his powers, his family thought so highly of him and knew life was passing by the quiet shy Vallen that they forced him out to live a life of adventure. Little did Vallen know his parents were once great adventurers.
Personality: Vallen is quiet and shy and has very little confidence in himself. He has very little combat experience and avoids fights as much as possible. However he is in his element when confronted with a puzzle or mental challenge, also when he is creating or inventing something new.
Guild and guild mark location:
Currently guildless
Team Members:
Three Strengths:
1. Highly Intelligent
2. Inventive/creative
3. Highly observant/strong senses.
Three Weaknesses:
1. Physical strength
2. Low confidence
3. Needs glasses
Greatest Love: Overcoming challenges, learning and creating new things.
Motivation: To do his parents proud, to get a life story so he can go back home.
Appearance: (A picture works, use the image function)
Additional Details: alchemist - makes potions.

@Dark Light

We need a definitive age, first and foremost. I'd say more, but this says WIP. Another thing is, with his magic, while Crimson brings up a good point, I'd like to point out that it has the POTENTIAL to be OP if you don't explain it better, because color is everywhere and that's...sorta cheap.

[Zarkun]

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I dunno. Juvia was S-Class, and Natsu and Grey are both very high A-Class mages.

What's-her-face, the girl who can drink ridiculous amounts of alcohol, is A-class, but of what I've seen of her she couldn't stand toe-to-toe with any of those three. (With the exception of that Grand Spell she's got.)

@Burthstone

Cana is actually ridiculously powerful, but she seriously lacks magical confidence, even if she doesn't sexually.

[Lugubrious]

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I dunno. Juvia was S-Class, and Natsu and Grey are both very high A-Class mages.

What's-her-face, the girl who can drink ridiculous amounts of alcohol, is A-class, but of what I've seen of her she couldn't stand toe-to-toe with any of those three. (With the exception of that Grand Spell she's got.)

@Burthstone

I know Juvia was one of the element four, and probably S-class in terms of Phantom Lord, but she's not on the same level as Natsu, Gray, or Gajeel, that's for sure.

[Burthstone]

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Cana is actually ridiculously powerful, but she seriously lacks magical confidence, even if she doesn't sexually.

@Zarkun

Fair enough.

<Snipped quote by Burthstone>

I know Juvia was one of the element four, and probably S-class in terms of Phantom Lord, but she's not on the same level as Natsu, Gray, or Gajeel, that's for sure.

@Lugubrious

Juvia gave Grey a run for his money in their fight. She only lost because she got all googly-eyed over him.

I think I just have different standards for A-Class than everyone else.

[Oblivion666]

And at the current point and time Im sure Natsu and Gray are both S class ranked. They just never got promoted to S rank.

[MarshiestMallow]

Work in progress, feedback please

Character Sheet
Name: Vallen
Age: Early 20's
Birthday:
Magic: colour absorption.
Magic is everywhere, even in light. Vallen extracts that magic through his eyes and can enhance himself with it. Each colour is associated to some feelings and can also be used to affect his emotions or another's. The magic can also be condensed down into a small physical manifestations. It is temporary and each colour has different properties.

Vallen begins only available to manipulate yellow light.

Colour: emotion- enhancement. Physicality

RED: Act (physical)
Anger/aggression
Endurance/str
Sticky volatile goo

BLUE: Feel (emotional)
Sadness/acceptance
Empathic/empathy
Soft flexible light

YELLOW: Think (mental)
Hope/determination
Speed/clarity
Solid sharp brittle fragile

Magic Level: No. Of colours.
( C ) one ( B ) two ( A ) three
History: Vallen had a normal upbringing, his family was well off, his mother caring and his father an important banker. He was quite content staying at home and following in his fathers footsteps. Then he discovered his powers, his family thought so highly of him and knew life was passing by the quiet shy Vallen that they forced him out to live a life of adventure. Little did Vallen know his parents were once great adventurers.
Personality: Vallen is quiet and shy and has very little confidence in himself. He has very little combat experience and avoids fights as much as possible. However he is in his element when confronted with a puzzle or mental challenge, also when he is creating or inventing something new.
Guild and guild mark location:
Currently guildless
Team Members:
Three Strengths:
1. Highly Intelligent
2. Inventive/creative
3. Highly observant/strong senses.
Three Weaknesses:
1. Physical strength
2. Low confidence
3. Needs glasses
Greatest Love: Overcoming challenges, learning and creating new things.
Motivation: To do his parents proud, to get a life story so he can go back home.
Appearance: (A picture works, use the image function)
Additional Details: alchemist - makes potions.

@Dark Light

Hm. It has potential, and that's great. My only concern is...what's the weakness to the power, besides the lack of magical confidence?

[Crimson Raven]

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[MarshiestMallow]

I currently feel like my eyes are on fire, like my head is about to burst open and like my heart is pounding pounding pounding behind my eyes.

so.

I will post...when the pain killers kick in.

[Oblivion666]

Guys reading anime stuff only makes me wanna make more peeps! WHAT DO!

[twave]

Work in progress, feedback please

Character Sheet
Name: Vallen
Age: Early 20's
Birthday:
Magic: colour absorption.
Magic is everywhere, even in light. Vallen extracts that magic through his eyes and can enhance himself with it. Each colour is associated to some feelings and can also be used to affect his emotions or another's. The magic can also be condensed down into a small physical manifestations. It is temporary and each colour has different properties.

Vallen begins only available to manipulate yellow light.

Colour: emotion- enhancement. Physicality

RED: Act (physical)
Anger/aggression
Endurance/str
Sticky volatile goo

BLUE: Feel (emotional)
Sadness/acceptance
Empathic/empathy
Soft flexible light

YELLOW: Think (mental)
Hope/determination
Speed/clarity
Solid sharp brittle fragile

Magic Level: No. Of colours.
( C ) one ( B ) two ( A ) three
History: Vallen had a normal upbringing, his family was well off, his mother caring and his father an important banker. He was quite content staying at home and following in his fathers footsteps. Then he discovered his powers, his family thought so highly of him and knew life was passing by the quiet shy Vallen that they forced him out to live a life of adventure. Little did Vallen know his parents were once great adventurers.
Personality: Vallen is quiet and shy and has very little confidence in himself. He has very little combat experience and avoids fights as much as possible. However he is in his element when confronted with a puzzle or mental challenge, also when he is creating or inventing something new.
Guild and guild mark location:
Currently guildless
Team Members:
Three Strengths:
1. Highly Intelligent
2. Inventive/creative
3. Highly observant/strong senses.
Three Weaknesses:
1. Physical strength
2. Low confidence
3. Needs glasses
Greatest Love: Overcoming challenges, learning and creating new things.
Motivation: To do his parents proud, to get a life story so he can go back home.
Appearance: (A picture works, use the image function)
Additional Details: alchemist - makes potions.

@Dark Light

I feel like Ariel would not interact well with this character given her magic set. Red would be a disaster.

[Burthstone]

@Crimson Raven@yoshua171 Lazy post is up.

I'm really bad at remembering to mention in my posts.

[yoshua171]

@Crimson Raven I am working now. I'll try to get a post up, but my availability is shaky till after work on Thursday.

[yoshua171]

@Crimson Raven @Burthstone

I posted. Sorry, forgot to tag the two of you. Probably because I was distracted when I wrote it haha.

[Burthstone]

This is why I hate doing conversations in this play-by-post system XD

This could all be done in like, a third the time in like, IRC or a collab or something.

[yoshua171]

@Burthstone well we could've done a collab xD

[Burthstone]

Meh, you mind a short reply post?