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Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Lugubrious
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It's true, Cirus. After reading something interesting with an impressive style I attempt to incorporate elements of it into my writing, with varying success.

@Lugubrious
If you're still in the mood of critiquing. What do you think of my writing?

I don't know how much of my posts you read, but I would like to try and improve. Any comments would be nice to hear.


Admittedly I haven't read your stuff as much. I'll get back to you should I have any comments.

Goth, I feel like a celebrity.
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It's true, Cirus. After reading something interesting with an impressive style I attempt to incorporate elements of it into my writing, with varying success.

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Admittedly I haven't read your stuff as much. I'll get back to you should I have any comments.

Goth, I feel like a celebrity.


And a goth apparently XD
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@Lugubrious
Okay, it's cool and thanks :D

Also, if you're wondering about the character that I PMed you several days ago. I'm still working on the CS. Recently I've been busy trying to focus in school. But I might find some time to finish it within a few days.
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Hi guys.

I feel like I'm sucking as Gm at the moment, but I'm struggling with a few things, one namely being my health. recently, my hayfever (Oh god I hope its my hayfever) has taken a turn for the worse. My face itches so much, and my eyes hurt so bad the light burns. I'm so tired all the time. Another being the fact that I have no motivation right now. And finally, I think I'm just...well, depressed. not depression depressed, just...down. I'm tired of trying and putting myself out there for jobs I desperately want.

Essentially, my posting is going to be slack the next few weeks, until I feel more alive then I am right now. I will try, over the next day or so, to get the collab between myself, Zarkun and Joshua up (of course if one of them wishes to do that, I'd really appreciate it [i]nudge nudge, wink wink]/i]) but I won't be starting the next day until I can get the final battles out, again, I'll be trying to get them out the next day or so.

I'm really trying.
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[quote=@Caits]
Hi guys.

I feel like I'm sucking as Gm at the moment, but I'm struggling with a few things, one namely being my health. recently, my hayfever (Oh god I hope its my hayfever) has taken a turn for the worse. My face itches so much, and my eyes hurt so bad the light burns. I'm so tired all the time. Another being the fact that I have no motivation right now. And finally, I think I'm just...well, depressed. not depression depressed, just...down. I'm tired of trying and putting myself out there for jobs I desperately want.

Essentially, my posting is going to be slack the next few weeks, until I feel more alive then I am right now. I will try, over the next day or so, to get the collab between myself, Zarkun and Joshua up (of course if one of them wishes to do that, I'd really appreciate it [i]nudge nudge, wink wink]/i]) but I won't be starting the next day until I can get the final battles out, again, I'll be trying to get them out the next day or so.

I'm really trying.
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Health comes first. Get better then worry about this.
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by MarshiestMallow
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huh.

Actually.

I don't need to do battles for Day five....As everyone has battled from day four...well...it's going to be a massive battle.

YAY

that makes things easier for me.
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huh.

Actually.

I don't need to do battles for Day five....As everyone has battled from day four...well...it's going to be a massive battle.

YAY

that makes things easier for me.


Wait, a free for all. Oh, this will be fun. We need some rematches.
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Wait, a free for all. Oh, this will be fun. We need some rematches.


Yup

And then there will be no battles in the six day. I have something special planned for that.
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yayyy free for all!
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Yup

And then there will be no battles in the six day. I have something special planned for that.


Guild Master battle :P
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<Snipped quote by Caits>

Guild Master battle :P


W-was this a guess XD?
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W-was this a guess XD?


no, it was a joke
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no, it was a joke


At the way they seem to be acting with each other. I can believe it XD
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Mmmmmmm

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[quote=@Caits]
Hi guys.

I feel like I'm sucking as Gm at the moment, but I'm struggling with a few things, one namely being my health. recently, my hayfever (Oh god I hope its my hayfever) has taken a turn for the worse. My face itches so much, and my eyes hurt so bad the light burns. I'm so tired all the time. Another being the fact that I have no motivation right now. And finally, I think I'm just...well, depressed. not depression depressed, just...down. I'm tired of trying and putting myself out there for jobs I desperately want.

Essentially, my posting is going to be slack the next few weeks, until I feel more alive then I am right now. I will try, over the next day or so, to get the collab between myself, Zarkun and Joshua up (of course if one of them wishes to do that, I'd really appreciate it [i]nudge nudge, wink wink]/i]) but I won't be starting the next day until I can get the final battles out, again, I'll be trying to get them out the next day or so.

I'm really trying.
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Okay, you focus on getting better!

Edit: What is up with the quote? O.o
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<Snipped quote by Caits>

Okay, you focus on getting better!

Edit: What is up with the quote? O.o


The problem with the quote is Caits had an 'unfinished' bbcode thing in it, so it broke the quote

also @Caits I really hope you feel better soon.
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Hi guys.

I feel like I'm sucking as Gm at the moment, but I'm struggling with a few things, one namely being my health. recently, my hayfever (Oh god I hope its my hayfever) has taken a turn for the worse. My face itches so much, and my eyes hurt so bad the light burns. I'm so tired all the time. Another being the fact that I have no motivation right now. And finally, I think I'm just...well, depressed. not depression depressed, just...down. I'm tired of trying and putting myself out there for jobs I desperately want.

Essentially, my posting is going to be slack the next few weeks, until I feel more alive then I am right now. I will try, over the next day or so, to get the collab between myself, Zarkun and Joshua up (of course if one of them wishes to do that, I'd really appreciate it nudge nudge, wink wink) but I won't be starting the next day until I can get the final battles out, again, I'll be trying to get them out the next day or so.

I'm really trying.


-huggles- Feel better Caits. No rush.
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huh.

Actually.

I don't need to do battles for Day five....As everyone has battled from day four...well...it's going to be a massive battle.

YAY

that makes things easier for me.


E. Karn: ....fuck.
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<Snipped quote by Caits>

E. Karn: ....fuck.


Karn will be fine. whats the worst that happens? Every S class is within its vicinity?
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Karn will be fine. whats the worst that happens? Every S class is within its vicinity?


Still a lot to taken in when someone is going into a wizard free for all battle with 0 knowledge on magic and none of the battle equipment they usually have xD

She just doesn't like being so Ill prepared for a battle.

That and possible side effects.

But yeah, otherwise, she'll be fine xD
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