[OOC] Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

[BladeSS4]

@Caits@Expolar@Zarkun

Would it be alright for me to rejoin this? I'm sorry I haven't posted in a while I have been meaning to but just couldn't really think of a post. I do want to get back into this though, maybe or most likely make a different character then the one I had originally signed up with. If you it would be alright for me to rejoin that is.

[TechnoWizROK]

@t2wave@Zarkun
What if I were to adapt on your first idea? Maybe in the midst of the power vacuum the dragons left, two noble families climbed to positions of power together, bringing order and peace to the aftermath of the Dragon King Festival. The Fiore family worked with the Flamels until the matter of the crown came into question, at first Nicodemus's ancestor was agreed upon to be ruler but then on the coronation day was betrayed (killed) and his family was banished? Still illustrious and really adds to the 'vengeful' part of him whilst keeping to RP canon. Would that work?

[MarshiestMallow]

@Caits@Expolar@Zarkun

Would it be alright for me to rejoin this? I'm sorry I haven't posted in a while I have been meaning to but just couldn't really think of a post. I do want to get back into this though, maybe or most likely make a different character then the one I had originally signed up with. If you it would be alright for me to rejoin that is.

@BladeSS4

Sure!

[Zarkun]

@Caits@Expolar@Zarkun

Would it be alright for me to rejoin this? I'm sorry I haven't posted in a while I have been meaning to but just couldn't really think of a post. I do want to get back into this though, maybe or most likely make a different character then the one I had originally signed up with. If you it would be alright for me to rejoin that is.

@BladeSS4

Tis perfectly acceptable. Good to see ya again.

@t2wave@Zarkun
What if I were to adapt on your first idea? Maybe in the midst of the power vacuum the dragons left, two noble families climbed to positions of power together, bringing order and peace to the aftermath of the Dragon King Festival. The Fiore family worked with the Flamels until the matter of the crown came into question, at first Nicodemus's ancestor was agreed upon to be ruler but then on the coronation day was betrayed (killed) and his family was banished? Still illustrious and really adds to the 'vengeful' part of him whilst keeping to RP canon. Would that work?

@TechnoWizROK

I mean, I don't actually know if there was an actual vacuum after, but something like that could work. Type it up and post it and we'll see what we think.

[twave]

@Zarkun Canon wise, maybe not. But it wouldn't be an unreasonable thing to assume. No longer being terrorized by the dragons people would rise to leadership to grow once they could.

[twave]

@t2wave@Zarkun
What if I were to adapt on your first idea? Maybe in the midst of the power vacuum the dragons left, two noble families climbed to positions of power together, bringing order and peace to the aftermath of the Dragon King Festival. The Fiore family worked with the Flamels until the matter of the crown came into question, at first Nicodemus's ancestor was agreed upon to be ruler but then on the coronation day was betrayed (killed) and his family was banished? Still illustrious and really adds to the 'vengeful' part of him whilst keeping to RP canon. Would that work?

@TechnoWizROK

That may be a tad too specific. The Flamel family claiming to have been betrayed and should be the rightful rulers could be said. But if the manga reveals more about the earlier days of Fiore then the history could get confusing.

[Lunarlord34]

@t2wave
It won't
There's only like, ten chapters left, and there wasn't a great deal revealed about early fiore. Well besides the royal family coming along somewhere along the line of the 400 years since Zeref went AWOL

[MarshiestMallow]

Okay, will be catching up on stuff today and the weekend. Forgive me, it just got to be a busy time for me

[twave]

@t2wave
It won't
There's only like, ten chapters left, and there wasn't a great deal revealed about early fiore. Well besides the royal family coming along somewhere along the line of the 400 years since Zeref went AWOL

@Lunarlors34

@TechnoWizROK Well then, you can give it a shot I suppose.

[BladeSS4]

Well here is my attempt at a new character. Still not very good when it comes to making a history or backstory but I hope this works.

Tenshi Koga

Tenshi Mizuru Name: Tenshi Koga
Age: 22
Magic: Water Manipulation Magic
The name is what it is manipulating water with magic and making appear through means of magic. To use in many ways, and many forms somewhat like maker magic except it only can keep its forms through magical energy, once the magic stops the water just turns back into its original form of water.

Magic Level: B
History: Tenshi was born in Hargeon Town, his first home was within a small fishermen family. For the early years of his life he was once afraid of water, afraid of drowning to death in the vast ocean. When he was ten years old, his family's fishing boat was destroyed, with him and his family on the boat. They were out sailing when they got caught up in a storm. The ship was torn apart by brutal waves and the sheer might of a water spout. He fell off the ship when a massive wave crashed into it He nearly met the same fate as his mother and father did as he almost drowned to death.

He didnt drown though, he was saved by something that manage to get him out of the water and to the edge of a beach. Tenshi's memories of this are rather vague but he swears he was saved by a mermad. Other people believe Tenshi saved himself as his magic revealed itself after this day. He could control and manipulate all forms of water. Some believe he manipulated it in that dire moment to get himself to safety. After this day Tenshi went and tried to hone his skills on his one but eventually made his way to a guild to the Phoenix wing guild.

Personality: Talkative, friendly, sarcastic, cocky, arrogant , just a few things to describe Tenshi but his personality is more then this. These are just some of his personality that are very obvious. He is also very brave and protective of his comrades and guild. He is easily angered when it comes to insulting his guild that he is apart of or insulting/hurting his friends. Tenshi likes to show off with big displays of unneeded effort. Especially when it comes to using his magic and what things he does with it. Tenshi also likes to 'party' whether that be drinking a lot, or partying by fighting.

Guild and guild mark location: Phoenix Wing(if my character can start up in a guild) On top his right hand
Team Members: None as of yet
Three Strengths:
1.Can Breath Underwater
2. Very Creative
3. Wounds are healed faster when submerged in water
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. Lightning/ Electricity
2. Powers are weakened with less water around,
3. Very easily distracted

Greatest Love: Magic
Motivation: To learn more about himself and about how he was saved long ago when he started to use magic.
Appearance:

Appearance

Additional Details: N/A

[TechnoWizROK]

Nico Flamel

Name: Nicodemus 'Nico' Flamel
Age: 23
Birthday: July 17th

Magic:

Tattoo Magic

Tattoo Magic - Nicodemus's body can generate tattoos on a whim, producing many runic tattoos that enhance his body and magic. Most tattoos are temporary but there are few that are etched permanently:

• Rune of Strength: Placed on various key points of the human body, the runes make his muscles stronger and faster.
• Rune of Fortitude: Runic arrays painfully carved onto his bones develops the density up to staggering levels helping it become incredibly resistant to force.
• Rune of Life: Engraved onto his very heart, granting him endurance and vitality that would be difficult to challenge.
• Rune of Lightning: A series of runic tattoos, at the base of the skull, triples the reaction rate by superconducting the neural system.

Rune Mastery

Rune Mastery - Possessing a prodigious knowledge of most known runic languages, Nico can utilise multiple runic circles and arrays to accomplish various feats of magic:

• Barriers: The overall durability of these barriers depends on the quality and complexity of the runes, on a whim using his Tattoo Magic he can block blows from conventional weapons with ease. With a pre-prepared runic array magic can withstand most high-level magic.
• Seal: Able to seal away inanimate objects for later use, or in the case of high-grade seals the same for attacks. Often Nico would seal away his opponent's attacks, using his tattoos on his own body.
• Limited Elemental Magic: There are runic symbols for all five main elements; fire, wind,lightning water and earth. Nico, using his extensive knowledge of runes can employ these elements (his affinity with each is weaker in the line of order: left to right) through the use of many runic tattoos across his body, even allowing for some combination attacks. However he is easily taxed using it and his control over the elements pales in comparison with a magic user who specialises with the elemental affinity.

Imperial Eye

Imperial Eye - Hereditary eye magic granting abilities that has been passed down through the royal Flamel bloodline, which is unlocked and activated after chanting an incantation. Far more taxing on his stamina to use than either Tattoo Magic or Runes.

• King’s Sacred Commandment: Any form of Caster magic is able seen as ‘colored strands’ of intent shaping the magic and the ethernano powering it. With this ability Nico can discern different types of Caster magic with just a glance and even snap the link between intent and ethernano which causes the magic to cease be. Though this is only possible within the range of his perception and the higher level a magic is, the more strands that are needed to be broken and therefore more energy and time is expended doing so.
• King’s Divine Judgement: Requiring direct eye-to-eye contact, the Imperial Eye can judge whether or not a person is innocent. For the guilty it induces an illusion where they relive the torment and terror they have inflicted onto others. This ability can be effectively resisted by the strong-willed or the insane.
• King’s Transcendant Blade: Requiring the full recital of the complete verse of incantation, it can call upon a giant building-sized sword, named 'Ea' "The Sword That Cut the World Apart", to fall from the skies onto a selected area. The impact is devastating, shaping the very earth with its power, making sure to leave nothing behind in its wake. The use of such magic leaves him completely spent of magic for a whole day.

Magic Level: A

History:

History

In the midst of the power vacuum the dragons left, two noble families climbed to positions of power together, bringing order and peace to the aftermath of the Dragon King Festival. The Fiore family worked with the Flamels until the matter of the crown came into question, at first Nicodemus's ancestor was agreed upon to be ruler but then on the coronation day was slain by his Fiore comrades and his family was banished.

Five hundred years into the present and after the rise and fall of the Black Wizard, magic being forced into hiding, the subsequent hunting for magic, and countless assassination attempts, the last remaining direct descendant of the Flamel bloodline has been born into the world without lands or wealth and after a gruesome childbirth; parents. Even centuries after a broken promise there are still men loyal to the name though not for noble reasons, the faceless men that have taken on the newly-named Nicodemus Flamel are more than displeased with how magic is regarded in this time and age and wish to manipulate him to become their own puppet king. But they would be foolish to think a child with an old name would be enough to regain his rightful seat of power, they had hidden far from the eyes of the world and hired the best of tutors; educating him in languages, sciences, mathematics, politics, combat and most especially magic.

With time he grew into a man worthy of the title that is rightfully his and with that the men who took him in offered up a piece of parchment left to him from his dying mother. On it were scant remnants of his Family Words:

I am the Soul of the King
My blood is royal
And my soul is noble
Seeking what is rightfully mine
I shall transcend existence
And ascend to my divine throne
For I am the King of the Soul

With these words uttered Nico had brought upon divine judgement among the conclave of liars and manipulators, seeing them for who they really are. Uncovering their true intentions and in his rage, he had summoned Ea from the skies and demolished their stronghold to bits. As exhausted and deprived of magic he was then, with little time before the authorities would come to investigate he fled the scene, off into the shadows to rest and recover.

Now Nicodemus Flamel is set on a journey to reclaim his rightful throne through his own power. What shall lay on his path to do so?

Personality: Without question, Nicodemus’s most prominent personality trait is his ego. This is true whether it manifests itself in his “vengeful monarch” or “noble champion” modes. Though capable of kindness and fairness, he’s usually impulsive and overconfident, with little regard for the consequences of his actions.

Guild and Guild-Mark Location: -

Three Strengths:
1. Groomed to rule; skilled in diplomacy, court politics, managing matters of the state, etc.
2. Possesses an iron liver, has yet to meet anyone able to drink him under the table.
3. Displays an indomitable will by meeting his body, mind and spirit’s limits and exceeding them.

Three Weaknesses:
1. An arrogance which is common amongst royalty though he still recognises those who are well above himself.
2. Has a tendency to rely on his two lesser magics before resorting to the Imperial Eye.
3. Any slip-up using Rune Magic can lead to severe magical backlash even if Nicodemus is second to none in this field of magic.

Greatest Love: Studying ancient languages and rune arrays.

Motivation: To overthrow the current ruler, gaining the throne, through his own individual power not by the machinations of others as a puppet.

Appearance:

**EDITED**

[twave]

@TechnoWizROK Looking a lot better. Now we let the GMs decide.

[Crimson Raven]

@BladeSS4

You can reuse your old character(s) if you want. Don't have to though, its just an option.

Also, in your strengths section its 'submerged' instead of 'emerged'

I'll hold off on further critique until Caits or Zarkoon-sama gives the okay.

But I will say that its not bad. You just need to work on sentence structure and flow of thought.

@TechnoWizROK

Alright

Tatoo magic: Do you mean the tattoo spontaneously appear on him or he has to write/draw them? The way you word it, it sounds like the former.

Rune magic: Better.

Imperial Eye:

This part is all personal thoughts. Its not a huge issue, and maybe I'm overstepping here. Its more food for thought then anything else.

Anyway, If I may split hairs here, the ability to decern whether someone is guilty or not is vague statement. What if they feel guily bit arn't? What if they think they are guilty but really aren't? What are determines the question that asks they are they guilty of? Could he say "Are they guilty of lying?" Look into their eyes, and get an answer. Basically turning him into a walking lie dector. Which I would say is an ability too great for a player, but that is up to te GMs, because canonically, there was a magic item that basically was a lie detector.

Overall, you probably could combine the tattoo magic with the rune magic, and just call it that, since the difference between them is moot.

History: Again, much better, they gave you some good advice and I'm glad to see you took it into account.

I'm curious as to where this divine power came from, but that is something you should wait to reveal later in the IC.

Personality:

I still see some problems with the personality trait of 'with little regard for the consequences of his actions.' as I, and others here, have had bad experiences in the past with characters like that. (Destroying a heavily populated city? I think you guys know what event I'm referring to.)

I ask you to think carefully about any sudden and/or irrational actions he may do in the future. Not saying you can't, just make sure there are proportional consequences, and possibly clear it here first.

I also still object to his very anarchist personality, on the basis that he is trying to topple a kingdom in an already chaotic time for mages. But, if @Caits and @Zarkun are okay with it, I have no problem.

Overall, though, its a much better sheet. I'd like to really apologize for and appreciate that you took my somewhat blunt and mocking criticism exceptionally well.

[MarshiestMallow]

@BladeSS4
Your CS looks good, I don't see any issues with it. Like Crimsons said, just sentence structure and such, but I understand it's hard-I know my writing has improved dramatically over the years. It comes with experience, and I'm always happy to help.

Welcome aboard! Or should I say, welcome back!

@TechnoWizROK
My issue with your CS is that he's only 23, and has three magics. Master Jamie is only... fudge. I have to math. Made harder by the fact that i can't actually remember when Jamie had Sam. Is only 38-41 years old, and even she only has mastery over... transformation, and wave magic. For someone to have three, I'd have to say that they wouldn't have a great mastery over all of them. Maybe one, with novice like mastery over the other two. While you have given weaknesses to them all, it nevertheless seems like he has great skill in them all.

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If there is anything else I need to look over, can someone kindly link me to it? I'm doing this all on y tablet since my laptop is being a pain again and its frigging hard.

[BladeSS4]

Alright, if I remember correctly I need to get accepted by a co gm as well, before moving my CS over to the Character section.

[Zarkun]

Well here is my attempt at a new character. Still not very good when it comes to making a history or backstory but I hope this works.

Tenshi Koga

Tenshi Mizuru Name: Tenshi Koga
Age: 22
Magic: Water Manipulation Magic
The name is what it is manipulating water with magic and making appear through means of magic. To use in many ways, and many forms somewhat like maker magic except it only can keep its forms through magical energy, once the magic stops the water just turns back into its original form of water.

Magic Level: B
History: Tenshi was born in Hargeon Town, his first home was within a small fishermen family. For the early years of his life he was once afraid of water, afraid of drowning to death in the vast ocean. When he was ten years old, his family's fishing boat was destroyed, with him and his family on the boat. They were out sailing when they got caught up in a storm. The ship was torn apart by brutal waves and the sheer might of a water spout. He fell off the ship when a massive wave crashed into it He nearly met the same fate as his mother and father did as he almost drowned to death.

He didnt drown though, he was saved by something that manage to get him out of the water and to the edge of a beach. Tenshi's memories of this are rather vague but he swears he was saved by a mermad. Other people believe Tenshi saved himself as his magic revealed itself after this day. He could control and manipulate all forms of water. Some believe he manipulated it in that dire moment to get himself to safety. After this day Tenshi went and tried to hone his skills on his one but eventually made his way to a guild to the Phoenix wing guild.

Personality: Talkative, friendly, sarcastic, cocky, arrogant , just a few things to describe Tenshi but his personality is more then this. These are just some of his personality that are very obvious. He is also very brave and protective of his comrades and guild. He is easily angered when it comes to insulting his guild that he is apart of or insulting/hurting his friends. Tenshi likes to show off with big displays of unneeded effort. Especially when it comes to using his magic and what things he does with it. Tenshi also likes to 'party' whether that be drinking a lot, or partying by fighting.

Guild and guild mark location: Phoenix Wing(if my character can start up in a guild) On top his right hand
Team Members: None as of yet
Three Strengths:
1.Can Breath Underwater
2. Very Creative
3. Wounds are healed faster when submerged in water
Three Weaknesses: (Make them Applicable)
1. Lightning/ Electricity
2. Powers are weakened with less water around,
3. Very easily distracted

Greatest Love: Magic
Motivation: To learn more about himself and about how he was saved long ago when he started to use magic.
Appearance:

Appearance

Additional Details: N/A

@BladeSS4

I'm good with it. Pass.

Nico Flamel

Name: Nicodemus 'Nico' Flamel
Age: 23
Birthday: July 17th

Magic:

Tattoo Magic

Tattoo Magic - Nicodemus's body can generate tattoos on a whim, producing many runic tattoos that enhance his body and magic. Most tattoos are temporary but there are few that are etched permanently:

• Rune of Strength: Placed on various key points of the human body, the runes make his muscles stronger and faster.
• Rune of Fortitude: Runic arrays painfully carved onto his bones develops the density up to staggering levels helping it become incredibly resistant to force.
• Rune of Life: Engraved onto his very heart, granting him endurance and vitality that would be difficult to challenge.
• Rune of Lightning: A series of runic tattoos, at the base of the skull, triples the reaction rate by superconducting the neural system.

Rune Mastery

Rune Mastery - Possessing a prodigious knowledge of most known runic languages, Nico can utilise multiple runic circles and arrays to accomplish various feats of magic:

• Barriers: The overall durability of these barriers depends on the quality and complexity of the runes, on a whim using his Tattoo Magic he can block blows from conventional weapons with ease. With a pre-prepared runic array magic can withstand most high-level magic.
• Seal: Able to seal away inanimate objects for later use, or in the case of high-grade seals the same for attacks. Often Nico would seal away his opponent's attacks, using his tattoos on his own body.
• Limited Elemental Magic: There are runic symbols for all five main elements; fire, wind,lightning water and earth. Nico, using his extensive knowledge of runes can employ these elements (his affinity with each is weaker in the line of order: left to right) through the use of many runic tattoos across his body, even allowing for some combination attacks. However he is easily taxed using it and his control over the elements pales in comparison with a magic user who specialises with the elemental affinity.

Imperial Eye

Imperial Eye - Hereditary eye magic granting abilities that has been passed down through the royal Flamel bloodline, which is unlocked and activated after chanting an incantation. Far more taxing on his stamina to use than either Tattoo Magic or Runes.

• King’s Sacred Commandment: Any form of Caster magic is able seen as ‘colored strands’ of intent shaping the magic and the ethernano powering it. With this ability Nico can discern different types of Caster magic with just a glance and even snap the link between intent and ethernano which causes the magic to cease be. Though this is only possible within the range of his perception and the higher level a magic is, the more strands that are needed to be broken and therefore more energy and time is expended doing so.
• King’s Divine Judgement: Requiring direct eye-to-eye contact, the Imperial Eye can judge whether or not a person is innocent. For the guilty it induces an illusion where they relive the torment and terror they have inflicted onto others. This ability can be effectively resisted by the strong-willed or the insane.
• King’s Transcendant Blade: Requiring the full recital of the complete verse of incantation, it can call upon a giant building-sized sword, named 'Ea' "The Sword That Cut the World Apart", to fall from the skies onto a selected area. The impact is devastating, shaping the very earth with its power, making sure to leave nothing behind in its wake. The use of such magic leaves him completely spent of magic for a whole day.

Magic Level: A

History:

History

In the midst of the power vacuum the dragons left, two noble families climbed to positions of power together, bringing order and peace to the aftermath of the Dragon King Festival. The Fiore family worked with the Flamels until the matter of the crown came into question, at first Nicodemus's ancestor was agreed upon to be ruler but then on the coronation day was slain by his Fiore comrades and his family was banished.

Five hundred years into the present and after the rise and fall of the Black Wizard, magic being forced into hiding, the subsequent hunting for magic, and countless assassination attempts, the last remaining direct descendant of the Flamel bloodline has been born into the world without lands or wealth and after a gruesome childbirth; parents. Even centuries after a broken promise there are still men loyal to the name though not for noble reasons, the faceless men that have taken on the newly-named Nicodemus Flamel are more than displeased with how magic is regarded in this time and age and wish to manipulate him to become their own puppet king. But they would be foolish to think a child with an old name would be enough to regain his rightful seat of power, they had hidden far from the eyes of the world and hired the best of tutors; educating him in languages, sciences, mathematics, politics, combat and most especially magic.

With time he grew into a man worthy of the title that is rightfully his and with that the men who took him in offered up a piece of parchment left to him from his dying mother. On it were scant remnants of his Family Words:

I am the Soul of the King
My blood is royal
And my soul is noble
Seeking what is rightfully mine
I shall transcend existence
And ascend to my divine throne
For I am the King of the Soul

With these words uttered Nico had brought upon divine judgement among the conclave of liars and manipulators, seeing them for who they really are. Uncovering their true intentions and in his rage, he had summoned Ea from the skies and demolished their stronghold to bits. As exhausted and deprived of magic he was then, with little time before the authorities would come to investigate he fled the scene, off into the shadows to rest and recover.

Now Nicodemus Flamel is set on a journey to reclaim his rightful throne through his own power. What shall lay on his path to do so?

Personality: Without question, Nicodemus’s most prominent personality trait is his ego. This is true whether it manifests itself in his “vengeful monarch” or “noble champion” modes. Though capable of kindness and fairness, he’s usually impulsive and overconfident, with little regard for the consequences of his actions.

Guild and Guild-Mark Location: -

Three Strengths:
1. Groomed to rule; skilled in diplomacy, court politics, managing matters of the state, etc.
2. Possesses an iron liver, has yet to meet anyone able to drink him under the table.
3. Displays an indomitable will by meeting his body, mind and spirit’s limits and exceeding them.

Three Weaknesses:
1. An arrogance which is common amongst royalty though he still recognises those who are well above himself.
2. Has a tendency to rely on his two lesser magics before resorting to the Imperial Eye.
3. Any slip-up using Rune Magic can lead to severe magical backlash even if Nicodemus is second to none in this field of magic.

Greatest Love: Studying ancient languages and rune arrays.
Motivation: To overthrow the current ruler, gaining the throne, through his own individual power not by the machinations of others as a puppet.

Appearance:

**EDITED**

@TechnoWizROK

So, I'm with Crimson on combining rune and tattoo into one magic. Kudos for trying to make them unique though. Now, the only issue I have is that, also this is entirely subjective, magic is in a rocky place in public opinion. Remember that when writing posts. Also, hope he never runs into James. Cause he has divine judgement in his arsenal. Oh, Imperial Eye could stand tweaking for further balance, but we need to see it in use first. Tentative pass from me.

[Lunarlord34]

Who tagged me and why?

[twave]

@Lunarlors34 They changed the notification to tell you when someone posts. Have to move Subbed threads to Archive it seems. We'll see if that lasts.

[Noodles]

The new feature is ugly and annoying >_>

[MarshiestMallow]

O.o

This new feature is weird. But at least it tells me that I need to check things XD