There is one glaring giant issue here now Sovi3t, and I quote from the sheet:
Sovi3t said
The question remains however how this pirate faction has remained intact for all these years is one that eludes even the senior of Alliance and other Military personal, most pirate factions either are murdered by some sort of Coup d’état from the inside. Or the military catches wind and sends an armada to capture the Pirates.
Thats a really good question. How
have you managed to avoid getting crushed by the superpower that is the Systems Alliance? Not to mention the Turians and Mercs. The reason piracy works is because they pick their targets well. Targets that don't fight back much or at all. Raiding combat patrols makes for a very swift end for most pirates. Doing it regularly while also raiding weapons shipments belonging to pretty much everyone inspires dedicated taskforces to hunt you down and make you go away.
And thats without talking about the carrier.
Carriers are dreadnought sized fleet centerpiece ships and command vessels. One of the reasons the Alliance invented them was to bypass the restriction on Dreadnoughts imposed by the Treaty of Farixan. Ships that big require incredible amounts of resources to build, and are vital strategic pieces. They never go anywhere without a small armada of escorts. One does not simply steal a carrier in active use. Even the Blue Suns would have a hard time facing one and its support fleet down and winning, much less taking it intact. Even supposing you succeeded, you'd be hunted down for possessing a powerful strategic asset, mostly so they could get it back.
You'll need a better reason than that if you want to keep the carrier. Sep is only allowed his because the whole ship was fundamentally flawed and not worth the resources for converting it to a cruise liner in the eyes of the Batarian government.
Unfortunately, this is combined with a number of failures to research and an apparent ignorance of the finer points of Mass Effect Lore that all together suggest to me that this is not the game for you. I am sorry Sovi3t, but I am denying this sheet in its entirety.