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Kalamadea said
That's what I'm saying. Most people don't speak in third person, so all I'd really be doing differently is sticking all dialog and action in one block of text. I can eliminate environmental description if needed, I just want to put dialog and action in the same paragraph. That's what I've been trying to say that all along. So (using your example as well) I'd doSo-and-so looks down. I don't usually use terms like "says" or "said". I just kinda stick the dialog right after an action and only use those kind of terms if they speak a specific way.


That would be fine, but the only difference between that and the way we RP is that instead of having actions as normal and speech in quotes, it would just be speech as normal text and actions in asterisks. For example, an introduction of a fire primordial could go as such:

*A strange presence can be felt in the air. Everywhere that (insert character here) looks, a haze can be seen, almost like from a candle flame. After a moment, a dragon seems to form out of the haze* Hello, (insert character here), my name is (insert fursona name).

Or, to the example being used, it could easily go as:

*(Character name) looks down* Hey, I can pull this off.

It doesn't really have to be multiple paragraphs. You could even go so far as to have a block of text such as:

*Heat bursts forward from (name), causing everything within a nearby radius to burst into flames* Hello, my name is (name), pleasure to meet you. *The flames begin to die down as the heat disperses throughout (location)*

This could be used for quite a long paragraph as well, it's really up to the organization style rather than writing style. Otherwise, I'm sure I can think up some arbitrary reason that would let you use your regular writing style without breaking realism.
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also, will alucard and shinji/kaine be added in as well or no? to the wikia i mean.
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Glad we could work it out. Now, I don't feel comfortable if I don't fill out a sheet first, so I'll make one up so you guys can see what Kalama's like.
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souleaterfan320 said
also, will alucard and shinji/kaine be added in as well or no? to the wikia i mean.


Eventually, yeah. It's still in progress.
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Eventually, yeah. It's still in progress.


alright.
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Glad we could work it out. Now, I don't feel comfortable if I don't fill out a sheet first, so I'll make one up so you guys can see what Kalama's like.


Okay, if you say so. But you'll have to learn the rest of the development from us. Oh, and me, Etcetera, and LegendBegins are the same person.
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souleaterfan320 said
alright.


We'll probably add them chronologically.
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Name: Kalamadea

Age: Estimates himself to be around 50000, but he's likely far older than that.

Gender: Male

Species: Primordial; born a Drakoniid (and looks like one)

Ascension Level: He is very close to ascending to the highest plane of existence, being only one or two planes away.

Abilities: Immortality
Not restricted to a physical form
Total, uncontested control of fire. He is the consciousness behind fire, and, therefore, cannot have his pyromantic control of fire overridden.
Total immunity to fire in all forms, whether hot, cold, dark, light, evil, holy, etc.
Draconic physiology grants total immunity to all forms of mental alteration. This draconic physiology also grants superhuman strength, as well as tough scales that can repel small arms fire and short blades, and negate damage from most firearms (but they'll break under that kind of force).
Multiple physical forms. He currently has three: an anthro form, feral form, and human form (in order of most used to least used).
Can compress fire to the point of being solid, as well as making it flow like water or expand like gas. This means that, in effect, Kalama can make fire behave like matter. In doing so, he can craft literally anything he wishes from fire.
Ascended: Kalama is totally unique within the Multiverse. Because of this, he cannot be copied or cloned without the copy/clone merging with the original. There can only be one Kalama in existence.

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Mkay, feel free to pop in whenever.
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hey guys, sorry if i seemed upset yesterday, its been a bad week.
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Oh, I'd also like to use Sheogorath. He's so much fun to play, lol.
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hey guys, sorry if i seemed upset yesterday, its been a bad week.


It's fine.
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Kalamadea said
Oh, I'd also like to use Sheogorath. He's so much fun to play, lol.


Sure.
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There you go! Enjoy! Hope you like my Sheo.
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Asterisks?
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id like to make another character if i could.
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souleaterfan320 said
id like to make another character if i could.


Go for it. There's no limit.
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alright, ill make it later though, ill be busy most of today.
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souleaterfan320 said
alright, ill make it later though, ill be busy most of today.


Mkay. Don't bother with a character sheet.
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ok.
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