[OOC] Star Wars - A New Age

[Delta44]

Name: Kreia Azura
Age: 16
Species: Human
Appearance:

Force Abilities:
- Force Pull/Push
- Force Sense
- Protection Bubble
Lightsaber Forms:
~ Juyo
~ Shii-Cho
~ Custom Style [Check history/example post]
Non-Force related Skills:
<Basic Piloting>
<Incredible dexterity, speed and agility>
Weapons: Red and blue lightsabers

History/Example Post:

"Ah, it's good to see you, Master Vahn! I've been awaiting your arrival!" The older Jedi master spoke with much enthusiasm as Vahn entered the room, taking his usual seating across the table from the questioner. "Shall we begin?"

"I do not like it that you need me, of all people, to spy on Kreia. If you wanted to know something about her, then you may as well ask it to her face. You know she'll say what you want to hear..." Replies Vahn in a deep tone, bowing his head low as he sat.

"Ah, yes! But the thing is, despite the practicality of it all, we believe that Kreia's past would influence her future actions. If we asked such questions now, she'd start conspiricizing, and we all know what happened last time when she began as a Padawan..." Says the questioner, reminding Vahn of an accident that happened a few years back when Kreia apparently lost control of herself. He barely managed to keep her in the Order... It also brought back memories of when she was first brought before him, no older than an baby, and how he vowed to train her in the art of the Jedi...

"Master Vahn? Is something the matter?" Asks the questioner suspiciously, causing Vahn to snap back to reality from his daydream.

"Nothing is the matter. My most sincere apologies. You may begin." The questioner sighs at Vahn's words, though proceeds with his usual set of questions.

"To start things off, how has the development of Kreia's fighting style been? Again, I need every detail possible, as it's important we learn her style in case such an event that she-"

"Her style has gone almost unchanged." Vahn cuts off. "From what I can tell, it is a combination of Juyo and Shii-Cho fighting styles, perhaps with a small amount of skills from the other various styles also. Her movements can be described as 'incredibly quick and precise, attacking with a freciousity and odd flow as she does so. Her movements seemingly rely on feints and dodges, or brute, swift strikes in arcing motions, wielding one blade forwards and the other back. Her backwards blade, the left-handed one, is generally seen as the defence and acts in swipes or swings, yet can be combined with spins for deadly attacks. Her right hand, seemingly the offensive one, wields the blade in a standard grip, and uses a combination of slashes, stabs and strikes, yet has been known to come off as a great defensive backbone and excels at parrying blows generally above the waist. All in all, it's near-unpredictable, yet oddly familiar to older Jedi styles."

The questioner scribbles down notes as fast as Vahn can speak, and finishes a mere few seconds afterwards. "May you kindly give detail on her force techniques and practices?"

"Her force technique still retains below-par, yet there have been rare instances where she'll go beyond her limit and do something extraordinary. I'm not quite sure how, but I believe she's been channelling her instincts to find a way to increase the Force's capabilities. As for her own studies, her creation of new Force techniques have been going well, as far as I know. She claims to be working on something though will not go into any detail about it. Says it's a secret of hers. That's as far as I know..."

The questioner nods as Vahn finishes, writing a final note before following up with another question, one that hadn't been asked before: "Have you noticed anything...unusual about Kreia's behaviour compared to the other Jedi? Is she different in some way?"

"That's a fairly open-ended question..." Vahn replies with a sigh. "Aside from the fact that she is a little less...'trained' as some in terms of respect, I see little difference between her and the other Jedi here."

"Do you think her being from a Lost Tribe of Sith has influenced her in any way?"

"... No."

"Master Vahn, you do not seem very certain of yourself..."

"I was merely thinking over my answer. We've had rebellious Jedi before, have we not? Some even turning out to be some of the finest warriors in the galaxy. Just because she has ties to our Sith brethren does not mean she is one."

"Hmph. Very well. Oh, and by the way, many of the children and other Jedi have learned of her history. Fear is spreading amongst the others. It won't be long until something...extreme happens."

"Do not fret. She trusts me. I'll keep her safe from harm, and from harming others." Vahn says, standing finally. "I suppose this is over?"

The questioner nods. "Same time next week. May the force be with you, Master Vahn... And be sure to keep that child on-the-rails. We're counting on you..."

[Sep]

Will check it tomorrow, going out as it is a mates birthday.

IC will also begin tomorrow.

[Keyblade87]

Sorry guys in still here I'm just researching and waiting for a time to write it all out

[Galgarion]

Wookiepedia... A nerds best friend

[Sep]

Keyblade87 said
Sorry guys in still here I'm just researching and waiting for a time to write it all out

Or ask.

[Delta44]

Soooooo Sep...how's mah sheet? :P

[Sep]

Delta44 said
Name: Kreia AzuraAge: 16Species: HumanAppearance: Force Abilities:- Force Pull/Push- Force Sense- Protection BubbleLightsaber Forms:~ Juyo~ Shii-Cho~ Custom Style [Check history/example post]Non-Force related Skills:<Basic Piloting><Incredible dexterity, speed and agility>Weapons: Red and blue lightsabersHistory/Example Post:"Ah, it's good to see you, Master Vahn! I've been awaiting your arrival!" The older Jedi master spoke with much enthusiasm as Vahn entered the room, taking his usual seating across the table from the inquisitor. "Shall we begin?""I do not like it that you need me, of all people, to spy on Kreia. If you wanted to know something about her, then you may as well ask it to her face. You know she'll say what you want to hear..." Replies Vahn in a deep tone, bowing his head low as he sat."Ah, yes! But the thing is, despite the practicality of it all, we believe that Kreia's past would influence her future actions. If we asked such questions now, she'd start conspiricizing, and we all know what happened last time when she began as a Padawan..." Says the inquisitor, reminding Vahn of that burning battle those many years ago of when he first met Kreia, fighting under the arms of a sith tyrant. Her master was slain, leaving her to fight for her life. Vahn barely managed to save her life and persuade the other Jedi to let her train under their terms without conflict! It was harsh, but it was best he could do."Master Vahn? Is something the matter?" Asks the inquisitor suspiciously, causing Vahn to snap back to reality from his daydream."Nothing is the matter. My most sincere apologies. You may begin." The inquisitor sighs at Vahn's words, though proceeds with his usual set of questions."To start things off, how has the development of Kreia's fighting style been? Again, I need every detail possible, as it's important we learn her style in case such an event that she-""Her style has gone almost unchanged." Vahn cuts off. "From what I can tell, it is a combination of Juyo and Shii-Cho fighting styles, perhaps with a small amount of skills from the other various styles also. Her movements can be described as 'incredibly quick and precise, attacking with a freciousity and odd flow as she does so. Her movements seemingly rely on feints and dodges, or brute, swift strikes in arcing motions, wielding one blade forwards and the other back. Her backwards blade, the left-handed one, is generally seen as the defence and acts in swipes or swings, yet can be combined with spins for deadly attacks. Her right hand, seemingly the offensive one, wields the blade in a standard grip, and uses a combination of slashes, stabs and strikes, yet has been known to come off as a great defensive backbone and excels at parrying blows generally above the waist. All in all, it's near-unpredictable, yet oddly familiar to older Jedi styles."The inquisitor scribbles down notes as fast as Vahn can speak, and finishes a mere few seconds afterwards. "May you kindly give detail on her force techniques and practices?""Her force technique still retains below-par, yet there have been rare instances where she'll go beyond her limit and do something extraordinary. I'm not quite sure how, but I believe she's been channelling her instincts to find a way to increase the Force's capabilities. As for her own studies, her creation of new Force techniques have been going well, as far as I know. She claims to be working on something she calls 'Force Alleviate', which is said to cut off an opponents Force techniques. She's even going as far as working on ways to cut off another person's Force flow throughout their bodies so their lightsabers become obsolete. That is as far as I know of..."The inquisitor nods as Vahn finishes, writing a final note before following up with another question, one that hadn't been asked before: "Do you know of Kreia's ancestoral past? Her blood-ties to Darth Traya? Do you also know of anything about her childhood prior to your confrontation?""Despite the similarity in name, I don't know anything about Kreia's history, both ancestoral and her own life." States Vahn clearly, skeptical as to why the inquisitor would ask such a question or make said claims."Well, would you like to learn?" The older man inquires, a faint grin giving the impression that he was dying to tell him.Vahn is silent for a few moments. "You may begin.""Well, at a young age, Kreia was subject to a harsh and abusive world. Her life as a child was very much filled with beatings and hate from both her parents, both of which were rogue sith lovers who had never intended on having her. She had never laid eyes on a blade nor seen the force in action until the Sith Hunters out for her mother and father came, and was an eye-witness to the shear brutality of the Sith and their blades. Her parents were slain before her very eyes, and she was taken in by a Sith Knight to be trained by - the same Sith Knight you killed a few years back, Master Vahn. Anyways, she was trained in the way of the dark for a long time, eventually earning the nickname 'The Darkened Blade' by both Jedi and Sith alike, gaining quite the reputation. The rest of her history is mostly unknown up until the point you killed her Master...""And what does this have to do with her ancestoral history?" Vahn ask a little impatiently."Oh, yes. As well as sharing the same first name as the old Sith Lord, Darth Treya, aka Kreia, she is also a descendant from an almost direct bloodline of hers also. Not only that, but her other family heritage, the Azura family, is also said to be the descendants of one of the original Jedi or Sith Masters. The truth was lost in time, though the history that has stayed with us has revealed one thing: she is either a demon or a goddess in human form. We can assume that the Jedi or Sith was a very skilled bladesman, and that hey also, possibly, had an affiliation for creating new techniques. Still, we don't know all the old Sith and Jedi Masters, but you can only speculate so far with rumours... Speaking of rumours, many of the children and other Jedi have learned of her history. Fear is spreading amongst the others. It won't be long until something...extreme happens.""Do not fret. She trusts me. I'll keep her safe from harm, and from harming others." Vahn says, standing finally. "I suppose this is over?"The inquisitor nods. "Same time next week. May the force be with you, Master Vahn... And be sure to keep that child on-the-rails. We're counting on you..."

1)There are no inquisitors in Jedi Ranks.
2) It couldn't be a Sith Tyrant as the last Sith Tyrant was killed, more likely you could have been part of the Lost Tribe of the Sith.
3)If you were part of the Lost Tribe of the Sith you were born into it.(And you'd either be older or found as a baby)
4) The ability to wield a lightsaber has nothing to do with using the Force (General Grevious) and it is just a weapon. It is mainly used by Force wielders due to the fast nature of battles.
5) There already exists an ability from severing one from the Force.
It's a nice piece but the problem is we're not screwing with star wars history until after the events of 45ABY. If you want help check Wookieepedia or send me a PM and we can probably fix it up.

[Delta44]

Ah fuck. I knew there'd be problems XD I'll fix shit up ASAP.

Btw many of the terms I used were just used to help my writing. I didn't realize there were such things as inquisitors and such in the Star Wars universe, as I was using most of the words just to make the narrative sound more interesting. Again, I'll fix accordingly.

[Sep]

If you're unsure, ask.

[Delta44]

I'll do what I can now, but if I'm stuck or you point out other things that are wrong, then I'll ask.

[Delta44]

All right! I think I did everything you asked! If you find anything wrong with the sheet, feel free to point them out and we can discuss it.

[Sep]

That's better, one last thing it is The Lost Tribe

Short background: The Lost Tribe was formed by a ship of Sith that was lost and crashed on an unknown planet, cut off from the rest of the Galaxy they grew their own culture and their own view on the Sith. They worked in more than twos per example, there was a little less killing between the ranks of the Sith as well. After Jacen Solo went Dark side the Sith Meditation Sphere "Ship" sought out the lost tribe and brought them out into the Galaxy where they raided like pirates for a time and then later freed Abeloth before banding together with the Jedi to kill her. During this time they also occupied Coruscant using force techniques and politics to force the Jedi off planet and take control of the Galactic Alliance.

They were bet back (And on their home planet sustained heavy loses to Abeloth) however eventually the survivors fled back home and the Jedi still cannot find the planet where they came from. Not even its name.

Just a little background for ya.

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Will start working on the IC at some point later today. Expect it to go up in the next twelve hours or so.

[Delta44]

All right, thanks!

[Sep]

Also this is just a personal tidbit, if at all possible could you find a non-anime/magna image? I find it hard to take them seriously myself.

[Delta44]

Sure. Typically, I find anime images just more badass, though I had a contingency image in case you didn't like it :P

[Sep]

I just find it harder to imagine in serious situations. Will get working on the IC in a little bit, eating some Jelly right now post-gym.

[Sep]

IC has begun:

I do have an alternate mission planned if anyone wants to take it. Though there is an element of choice in this RP and as we advance you all will get more control over what missions you go on.

If you do not wish to join us on the Night Fury

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Painted Black

Feel free to meet with the Jedi Council and I shall give you your mission.

[Delta44]

I shall take the other mission :P

[Sep]

Oh be complicated then and don't be awesome and come with me.

[Delta44]

I mean, I would, but in the OP your character stated it was just him and that Alicia chick so I thought "Hey, they're going by themselves! Might as well bugger off!"

I admit, though, investigating a Lost Tribe of the Sith would be cool given Kreia's birth history. You could simply have the Council tell for her to go on the mission too XD