Very surprised at how popular this RP got and how many posts I had to read after finally getting home. Looks like, given the characters I've read so far, we'll be dividing the posts up between this Hard Knocks unit, the Jaeger platoon and a Infantry-Recon outfit.
Here's what I think of the characters thus far. Please get back to me if I misread a part of your character sheet, if you wish to bring any of my thoughts on your character or if you're seeking help adjusting/creating a character in the RP.
Caspian Lee Argo: Background says Caspian's fought through hundreds of battles. I know I said TF Aegis was looking for military experience and all, but hundreds seem like a little bit of a stretch. Especially considering that NATO hasn't been engaged in any major conflicts (with the exception of the Global War on Terror) that might justify this number for a mech pilot (or anyone). If you could maybe lower the number of battles and include how and where Caspian saw so much action, I'd be willing to accept him. (For example, maybe all these battles were simulated?)
Dylan Bede Nicholson: Dylan is stated to be inexperienced, despite his background also stating that he has seen at least one battle. Then there's the fact that he saw this battle during his time in TF Aegis, which has only recently been reactivated and has yet to see any real action. (again, maybe this battle was simulated?)
The XV88 medium assault mech's already strong enough with it's two 40mm cannons and plasma cutters, but the fact it's also equipped with both a railgun and the capability to hack into other mechs concerns me.
Benjamin Edward "Locks" Lockleaer: Looks pretty good, but I think it's the Hard Knocks platoon. Someone should probably clear this up, since it seems every character in the Hard Knocks unit classifies it's size differently. An infantry Captain assigned to the Hard Knocks platoon seems a bit high since I believe Mr. Knight will be assuming command of the unit.
Alexander Hercules Jaegers: Everything checks out, with the exception of it's capability to hack. Again, hacking into other mechs concerns me. At most, I'd be OK with something like a dedicated tech mech being capable of hacking into other mechs and the Liberator (and other mechs) being equipped with counter-electronic warfare systems in response.
Jacob Matthews Knight: Checks out, just worried about the MAC gun. However, given the size and nature of the mech in addition to all of the restrictions you've placed on using it, I'm reluctantly considering accepting it. The primary weapons on the Patton might be too overpowered as well, such as your 150mm tungsten cannon, which mind you tops both the firing rate and caliber of the US military's M1 Abrams.
Jackson P. DuBois: An interesting character given the setting. I'll be looking forward to seeing how Jackson turns out in the RP.
Alexander "Alec" Connors: Looks good, accepted.
Jan Adamczyk: Very cool, accepted.
Malcolm Oliver: Another good one, accepted.
Amy Lindsey Hausler: Good, curious about why Amy didn't join the growing Recon division of Aegis given her experience in FORECON.
Sterling McKnight: Glad to see someone elaborating on their combat experience, but I can't help but worry about whether or not you intend to use his micro missiles against just light armor (like a APC or truck) or against full blown mechs.