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Partisan said





Hillan has final say on everything, but from what I read, I like it. The clan stuff is very interesting as well. Seems fine to me all around.
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Given that Hillan asked me to revive this clan I think it's fine, but you are right, he has final say.

He's just ignoring me on Skype. The bastard.
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Yeah, Hillan has been kind of silent on my end as well. Rez, I'll send my character to you for evaluation as well.
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That's fine.
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Oh shit, hey yeah. I forgot I hadn't responded to you. I'm a goof like that.

Your Jounin is accepted.
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So, is it fine for me to keep the other candies if I remove the focus one? Because that seems to be the only one you had a problem with...
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Work in Progress. Revamps are inbound. I just didn't wanna be the only one without a sheet up.

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Tatsua Aiisen said
So, is it fine for me to keep the other candies if I remove the focus one? Because that seems to be the only one you had a problem with...


No, the problem is actually with the other two. They leave no room for counterplay. Someone eats the candy, they're out, or essentially useless.
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Gosh darn it Hill, I was gonna do Steel for a genin. Eh, maybe Swift works? Or maybe Ranmaru's KG. Yeah, one of those two might be good. I'll do some rough idea sketchems.
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No, the problem is actually with the other two. They leave no room for counterplay. Someone eats the candy, they're out, or essentially useless.


I personally don't see anything wrong with them. Since you know, you need to eat it. So unless she force feeds it to you, they're pointless. They're situational at best, and probably for NPC usage.

(Shoot, did a double post, sorry.)
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No, the problem is actually with the other two. They leave no room for counterplay. Someone eats the candy, they're out, or essentially useless.


C-Counterplay? You mean like, not eating strange candy given to you by an enemy Kunoichi?

The best way to judge equipment is to use "Kunai Rating", which bases their balance off the effective power of a kunai. In this case, if Kunai were a 5, her candies would be a 3 or a 2. That puts her safely below the Kunai Rating, meaning it's probably balanced.

EDIT: Oh, and as Reflection said, they were never really meant to be used on players.
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I agree with the fact that eating them would require you to be really really stupid but for the sake of PvP balance I do think you should add some sort of limit to them. I.e how long do they work, can you resist it, is there an antidote, etc.
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Though. Then again, it ain't that hard to hide a piece of candy in food, or drinks.

Also. If you people have skype and want to join the chat we're setting up there, you should add me on Hillanx@Skype.

Edit: Fine, if you do as Partisan suggested, and give them clear limitations, you may keep them.
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Added you, my skype is: dirtylittlegrimreaper, you have my approval for adding me
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Her sister's candies are all stated to last an hour. Sure, if you happen to be unnaturally resistant to being drugged, it's a given that you'll be less effected.

There isn't an antidote, as they're more drugs than they are conventional poisons. A medical-nin with the know-how could probably go hard and reduce/nullify their effects, but this is the same with any other attack, so it's sort of a given.

The fact that it can be hidden in food doesn't change the fact that you're an idiot for eating any food given to you by a kunoichi. Why do you think everybody in Naruto eats at the Ramen guy's shop? He probably has a ninja seal of approval saying that all his food is legit.

EDIT: Their limitations are all stated, unless you want me to include things like "Can't be swallowed in a vacuum" and "Isn't capable of rapid teleportation."
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"When in doubt, aim for the crotch!" -Hiroto Narumi, Taijutusu for Dummies

Basics

Name: Hiroto Narumi

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Birthplace: Iwagakure
Known history and secrets

Personality: Hiroto is a hot head and a bit of a smartass, but to his credit he usually makes a fair point in regards to the latter, as proven by the above motto about aiming for the crotch. Sure, it sounds harsh and totally unfair, but when was fighting ever supposed to be about fairness in the first place? Hiroto was was raised and trained in the infamous Nine-Point Discipline, explaining where his "kicking below the belt" philosophy stems from. Though when it's not about fighting, Hiroto tends to lean more toward being a joke-cracking clown than anything else. So while he is admittedly insufferable to be around, he's still a good fighter and, hey, sometimes his humor makes a surprisingly valid point, ergo it becomes genuinely funny.

History: Originally born to a family of sushi vendors, Hiroto abandoned that lifestyle at the first opportunity to become a ninja. It wasn't that he hated sushi or his family, quite the opposite, in actuality he was tired of his family being complete nobodies and wanted to put the name Narumi on the map, and becoming a ninja was the best way to do that. Of course, once he was actually in the academy, he found becoming a ninja to be harder than he expected. Despite the fact that Ninja's were supposed to be great spies and tough fighters, becoming one apparently required an obnoxious amount of reading and written tests. What, Hiroto often wondered, did writing this monotonous crap down on paper have to do with being a kick-ass ninja? Still, he persisted and earned himself a headband soon enough.

Some of the teachers could tell that Hiroto was far more suited to combat over all that cloak-and-dagger spy stuff. One of them in particular was part of the Nine-Points Discipline, and apparently felt that Hiroto would fit right in, and so he invited the newly christened ninja to start training with him. While Hiroto is still a fairly new disciple of the Nine-Point style, his new teachers are confident that he's got the right stuff to go all the way with it.

Clan: Narumi, and sadly they are not ninjas, but Hiroto is part of the Nine-Point Discipline.

Dreams and aspirations: To master his Discipline, put his family's name on the map, and to kick the collective asses of anyone who tries to stop him from achieving those goals.

General strengths: He can generally hit pretty hard and take quite a bit of punishment from opponents before finally going down. He's also tenacious, having once been compared to a bulldog, stubbornly refusing to let go of any challenge presented to him.

General weaknesses: His focus on Taijutsu obviously gives him a disadvantage against opponents who like to stand back and spam ranged attacks. His hot-headedness isn't exactly a flattering trait and therefore others might find it difficult to work with him.
Combat intel

Known chakra natures: Earth

Kekkei Genkei: None

Skill Specialization: Taijutsu. Hiroto practices the Nine-Point Discipline, a style of Taijutsu that is infamous for it's lack of subtlety. Basically it boils down to making damn well sure you are the one who walks away from the fight, no matter what kind of cheap shots or dirty fighting you have to resort to. Most Taijutsu styles emphasize the use of only four striking points, the hands and feet. This discipline, on the other hand, entails the use of nine points, the aforementioned hands and feet as well as one's elbows, kneecaps, and head if necessary. This makes the ninja in question a far more versatile fighter and, as a result, much more difficult for opponents to read or predict. It's not without its problems though. For one thing, it's a very difficult discipline to practice, easily requiring twice as much rigorous training as the average Taijutsu specialist to accommodate for the toughening of extra body parts beyond the fists and feet. It's also a controversial discipline, with detractors often scorning it for its use of what they believe are "dishonorable techniques", and for the teachers' tendency to employ tough-love training on their students, thus being believed to be the most cruel of Taijutsu masters.

Jutsu's that (s)he has shown capable of using:

Canon: Basic Academy Techniques, Rock Fist Technique

Custom

Name: Chaotic Combo
Kind Of Jutsu: Taijutsu
Range: Short
Rank: D
Nature: None
Handseals: None
Description: A straight-forward 8-hit beat down. It's name reflects the random nature of the strikes, as they come from random directions and from random striking points. Ergo, no two uses of this technique are ever a hundred percent identical, but each are equally effective.
Weakness: The opening strike of the combo is generally straight-forward, and thus easy enough to block or dodge. It's the follow-up attacks that are more difficult to deal with, as they are usually swifter and almost always being of a much more unorthodox nature (ie a headbutt or a knee into the groin) meant specifically to catch opponents off guard.

Name: Giant Step
Kind Of Jutsu: Taijutsu
Range: N/A
Rank: D
Nature: None
Handseals: None
Description: Despite its name, it is not a "step", rather a strong leap into the air, through which a user can reach an aerial opponent or, more often than not, put themselves in a prime position to follow up with an aerial technique of their own.

Name: Earth Release: Meteor Kick Technique
Kind Of Jutsu: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Range: Short/Mid
Rank: C
Nature: Earth
Handseals: Snake -> Ram -> Dog -> Rat -> Snake -> Tiger
Description: From an aerial position, the user comes crashing down on his opponent, their legs transformed into stone by Earth nature chakra.
Weakness: Being an attack from above, it's almost impossible to not see coming, unless the attack just so happens to be coming from a place of cover. Due to this, the technique is generally used as a means to open a fight with a surprise kick from above, though it does make for an interestingly poetic finisher against opponents too stunned or fatigued to defend themselves from it.
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I'd like to point out that simply having a surname indicates a clan, and simply being born means you are part of a clan -- whether that clan are shinobi or not.
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Eh, semantics. But point taken, regardless.
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