What Kylix said. It's been like... what, 2 days in game? So he'd probably be worried, but not freaking out entirely... then again, maybe he would? *shrug*
Mistress Dizzy said
What Kylix said. It's been like... what, 2 days in game? So he'd probably be worried, but not freaking out entirely... then again, maybe he would? *shrug*
Kira Chan said
(If you have enough room for me heres a short Cs)Name: Hannah QuinnParents: Dead pool and Harley quinnAge:18Short bio: She was an accident child so her parents dropped her off at an orphanage. when she turned 18 she was kicked out so she traveled around the world a few times and found herself at the academy. She hopes she can become a fearsome villain or an awesome hero... but she dosent really know who she is just yet she is both good and evil Personality: She very quiet but when she speaks people naturally listen to her, whenever she gets upset she starts talking in a British accent she is very spontaneous and mischievous but she tries to act normal
Mistress Dizzy said
Hiya!Two things: You didn't list any powers for Hannah. This is a superhero school, but even if she doesn't have any powers, maybe give her an inherited skill or two?Also, we have a player who RPs as the son of Deadpool. You'd either have to clear it with him for his character to have a half sister, or choose another character.
Mistress Dizzy said
I'm scattered too. Health problems. I'm gonna go to bed, though. >< G'night all and sundry.
Mistress Dizzy said
"I am Nicholas ...." He said with a blank look on her face his eyes now on his textbook causally flipping though pages."So...what is your power a dangerous one if i cannot touch your hand?" The young man said waving his hand back at her.*can't remember Nick's player for the life of her* You, the guy with the creepy-ass clown picture..I'm having trouble understanding your post. Punctuation is key. I can take his sentence many ways, all with difference cadences. "So...what? Is your power a dangerous one, if i cannot touch your hand?" The young man said waving his hand back at her."So...what is your power? A dangerous one if i cannot touch your hand?" The young man said waving his hand back at her."So...what is your power? A dangerous one- if i cannot touch your hand?" The young man said waving his hand back at her.Do you see what I mean? Just by switching around the punctuation, I'm getting three different versions of the same string of words. Is he curious, is he cautious, is he wary?Help me out, please, because I have got literally nothing to go on here.
Eviledd1984 said
Sorry it would be the first one shit sorry...
Mistress Dizzy said
Don't worry about it. Writing takes practice. Don't feel like you have to rush through the post. Take your time and think about what you want to say, and how you want it said. It helps to say certain lines out loud (even though other people may look at you weird).You'll get a sense of where punctuation should go by listening to where you naturally pause. Those pauses are usually commas.