[OOC] The Dawn of Tomorrow's World(A Dieselpunk Nation Roleplay)

[AspenIvan]

Skepic: I am totally done! :D

eemmtt: I would definitely be down to do some shared history on that. Could you PM me so we can discuss more?

[Hystarea]

Skepic: I am done finally! I think. I rewrote pretty much my whole application because I really didn't like certain aspects of it. I believe it is now good and is ready for review. I am also sorry if there is anything conflicting or strange I did at like 12:00 am. Please let me know if there is anything strange or incorrectly spelt and I will fix it.

[Peace Keeper]

I'm ready for review.

[Voltus_Ventus]

Skepic said
Alright, so I know some of you may have already told me, but who is totally done with there Nation Sheet and thinks its ready for review?

Not done but could you take a look at it?

[Skepic]

Peace Keeper, Hystarea, and AspenIvan, they look fine by me! Go ahead and post your sheets in the Nation Library, link is on the OP

@Voltus_Ventus

Looks pretty good so far. The Technology overview sounds a lot like Japan back in the day, so you could even put in how divided people are maybe for or against leaving their traditionalist, isolationists views in order to embrace the new world or something? Just a suggestion so you already have some fun conflict at the beginning.

[Peace Keeper]

As you command so shall it be.

[So Boerd]

Ready for review.

[So Boerd]

Hey Peace keeper, you missed an island south of Elyahkanc and a small chain off the west coast of Causidia's peninsula.

[Peace Keeper]

In your NS it did say ''islands that weren't a couple miles from shore'', para-phrase.

These islands you mentioned are a couple miles from shore.

My Opinion

Still illogical placement controlling land at the other side of the earth when it crosses the naval territory of non-allies.

[Pepperm1nts]

EDIT: Disregard this

[Peace Keeper]

Edit: Disregard this too.

[Littlefield]

My nation sheet is finished, and ready for review.

[So Boerd]

The set of islands to which I refer off Causidia's coast are assuredly more than a few miles. The ones by Eratia's north island I believe is sufficiently far.

[Peace Keeper]

The only island I don't see you own off the Causidian coast is pretty close to the coastline.Maybe you're speaking about the tiny island off southern Causidia? or are you talking about the one just south of the one you already own in close proximity to the Causidian League?

[Zurajai]

I myself am a bit displeased with it. You say you gained it during your age of exploration but it's not like you found India or North America. You found regions populated with similarly technologically advanced people. We're on the same continent, after all.

[Skepic]

@So Bored
Sorry, having a brain fart here, could you link me to your NS post?

@Littlefield

Everything looks, good, but could you perhaps be importing more resources? Maybe some special stuff like Black ore, Ragnite, or Aquitium. Stuff like that. Other than that, nothing else really stood out to me.

[So Boerd]

Causidia is formed of three land masses, essentially. In between the two on the left you'll see a very large bay or sea. South of this bay is a much smaller bay. In that bay or just outside it is a series of very small islands.

[Peace Keeper]

Before that, you may want to reply to the GM.

[Littlefield]

@Skeptic Updated my imports to include multiple raw materials, and ore. If more needs to be added, I can make further additions.

[Milkman]

My nationsheet is pretty much done. I am still planning on describing the different territories in more detail.