room for 1 more?
TheBigJon said
room for 1 more?
Sep said
Welcome.One minor thing: The archives aren't purely holocrons, holocrons are reserved for Jedi Masters.
Blaze96 said
That's fine, do you want me to change the sheet or just correct for it in RP. I more just went with the Holocrons because the wiki rather sucks at quick elaboration most of the time.
Sho Minazuki said
This, this looks fun.
WriterRaven said
Let me know if there's anything you feel needs changing.
Delta44 said
This looks interesting... Mind if I join? :P
WriterRaven said
Let me know if there's anything you feel needs changing.
Sho Minazuki said
I have like, no in-depth knowledge on Star Wars and it's world and lore, so I'm gonna make a character learning everything from scratch. Yay.
Sho Minazuki said
I've edited that bit.And out of Stealth and Barrier, Stealth would probably be the one to go with, he wouldn't have much exposure to combat or anything at all for the need to use Barrier. It's explained he likes to train himself out of the notice of others, so Stealth definitely.Though, are you confusing it with Concealment/Cloak, where it's invisibility? Because Force Stealth pretty much conceals one's capabilities, and prevents one from being sensed, usually.
Blaze96 said
Done and done, holocrons change to archive.
Sketcher said
Updated again :3
Sketcher said
Name: Illi Luca DahnGender: MaleSpecies: HumanAge: 17Homeworld: Courascant Personality: Luca is a somewhat dull young boy. He doesn’t tend to speak unless spoken to, of course with a few exceptions. He’s a sharp and perceptive brat, sometimes getting on people’s nerves by sounding like a smartass, though his visage never gives off any emotion that would suggest he was looking down on anyone. He can be insubordinate from time to time, taking actions on his own without the consent of his master when he thinks the orders given to him are flawed.He’s quite patient, able to meditate for several hours without being distracted. Though, when his limit breaks, he becomes rather violent, still keeping his annoyed and cold demeanour about.Flaws: Although he’s generally calm and collected, Luca can have violent outbursts from time to time. This makes his fighting style rather predictable since he simply lashes out without any complex technique that could be created using the seventh form. These outbursts originate from his prolonged exposition to the dark side of the force during his childhood. His silent demeanour usually makes him unsociable.Skills: Luca is quite nimble thanks to his physique. Though most jedi are capable of achieving great acrobatic feats, Luca’s greatest virtue in close combatEquipment: He carries a hidden under his cloak.Force Abilities: Luca spent quite a bit of time training his skills in the ways of the force; almost as much as he did training with his lightsaber. At the academy, he became proficient with simple force tricks like Force Push and Force Jump. During his time with he mastered the Art of Movement during his time as a padawan as his fighting style was highly dependant on his ability to move around freely. From his master, he learned the stance and meditation technique "Center of Being" to further his development in the ways of the force and to increase his skill as a swordsman.Personal History: Illi Luca Dahn had been at the Jedi Temple ever since he could remember. During his time as an initiate, he was a rather poor student. This wasn’t because he was unskilled, but rather because he was insubordinate and impatient. He paid little attention during the training, doing his best to keep up to his fellow students with as little effort as possible. This was his mindset for quite some time, since he was never actually a below average student. He felt quite content with what he could do and even took pride in being able to contend with, even if not best, the other students. During his time slacking, of course, he had the chance to improve some other skills. He spent a lot of this time in the archives, reading.This all changed, however, when he first entered the Jedi Temple Apprentice Tournament at the age of 10. He had some high hopes, dreaming of how he’d triumph over his opponents. Of course, he was quite disappointed when he couldn’t pass the first round, showing poor coordination and technique. Though he convinced himself his opponent was superior to that of any other in the tournament, the defeat still lead him to change his attitude about training. He devoted most of his time to mastering his techniques, disciplining himself so that he would focus more.With his newfound determination, Luca trained harder and harder, aiming to enter once again when he was ready. After the second year since his first tournament passed, he entered once more, feeling that he was prepared. He started off well, displaying good technique and serenity.After the tournament, one of the jedi knights claimed him as an apprentice. The woman, a young knight recently given her current rank, wasn’t especially impressed with his abilities but rather with his calm stature. Once she took him in as her padawan, she started training him before actually taking her to missions. Needless to say, Luca wasn’t very eager to get more lessons after leaving the academy. With time, he got more patient and eventually Liana started taking him with her to fight on the front lines.Today, Luca is currently staying at the temple while Liana Radiian is on her own mission, the boy unbeknownst of the betrayal against the jedi and his teacher.Additional Info: Sorry for the anime thing in the appearance but because I couldn’t find anything, I drew it.
Sep said
Thats better.