Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by TheBigJon
Raw
Avatar of TheBigJon

TheBigJon yung $$$

Member Seen 8 yrs ago

room for 1 more?
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sep
Raw
GM
Avatar of Sep

Sep Lord of All Creation

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

TheBigJon said
room for 1 more?


Yeah sure, feel free.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Blaze96
Raw

Blaze96

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Sep said
Welcome.One minor thing: The archives aren't purely holocrons, holocrons are reserved for Jedi Masters.


That's fine, do you want me to change the sheet or just correct for it in RP. I more just went with the Holocrons because the wiki rather sucks at quick elaboration most of the time.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sho Minazuki
Raw
Avatar of Sho Minazuki

Sho Minazuki P5 Hero

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

This, this looks fun.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Taka
Raw
Avatar of Taka

Taka The Last Son of Vegeta

Member Seen 2 days ago

Alright. Tuesday is the day that I get this sheet done. YEAH! True Jedi Knight greatness.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by WriterRaven
Raw
Avatar of WriterRaven

WriterRaven Doing My Best

Member Seen 1 yr ago

Let me know if there's anything you feel needs changing.

Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sep
Raw
GM
Avatar of Sep

Sep Lord of All Creation

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

Blaze96 said
That's fine, do you want me to change the sheet or just correct for it in RP. I more just went with the Holocrons because the wiki rather sucks at quick elaboration most of the time.


Just give it a quick edit, you can post anyway like it's a minor thing.
Sho Minazuki said
This, this looks fun.

That's cause it is.

WriterRaven said
Let me know if there's anything you feel needs changing.


Will read it in ab bit. Good to see a Padawan emerging!
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sho Minazuki
Raw
Avatar of Sho Minazuki

Sho Minazuki P5 Hero

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

I have like, no in-depth knowledge on Star Wars and it's world and lore, so I'm gonna make a character learning everything from scratch. Yay.

Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Delta44
Raw
Avatar of Delta44

Delta44 Back In The Game. / Mostly.

Member Seen 4 mos ago

This looks interesting... Mind if I join? :P
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sep
Raw
GM
Avatar of Sep

Sep Lord of All Creation

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

Delta44 said
This looks interesting... Mind if I join? :P

Feel free
WriterRaven said
Let me know if there's anything you feel needs changing.

Accepted.
Sho Minazuki said
I have like, no in-depth knowledge on Star Wars and it's world and lore, so I'm gonna make a character learning everything from scratch. Yay.


You wouldn't get to sixteen without a master, if you don't pass the initiate trials you are offered a place in the Exploration or AgriCorps branch of the Jedi, or to be an assistant in the temple as it is usually for a reason.

You have two powerful abilities, stealth and barrier. I can maybe allow you to know one (But not that good at it) if you explain it in your history.

Orphanages on Coruscant would be frequented by Jedi quite often for Force Sensitive children so it's unlikely he would need to sneak into the temple.

All this interest!
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sho Minazuki
Raw
Avatar of Sho Minazuki

Sho Minazuki P5 Hero

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

I've edited that bit.

And out of Stealth and Barrier, Stealth would probably be the one to go with, he wouldn't have much exposure to combat or anything at all for the need to use Barrier. It's explained he likes to train himself out of the notice of others, so Stealth definitely.

Though, are you confusing it with Concealment/Cloak, where it's invisibility? Because Force Stealth pretty much conceals one's capabilities, and prevents one from being sensed, usually.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sep
Raw
GM
Avatar of Sep

Sep Lord of All Creation

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

Sho Minazuki said
I've edited that bit.And out of Stealth and Barrier, Stealth would probably be the one to go with, he wouldn't have much exposure to combat or anything at all for the need to use Barrier. It's explained he likes to train himself out of the notice of others, so Stealth definitely.Though, are you confusing it with Concealment/Cloak, where it's invisibility? Because Force Stealth pretty much conceals one's capabilities, and prevents one from being sensed, usually.


Nah I know theres a difference, though it depends really how much you want to hide yourself in the Force. Some people can hide themselves even from a Miralukas sense. But still, it's not a hard ability but not all over the place :P Once you're done tell me and I'll accept you :P
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Blaze96
Raw

Blaze96

Member Seen 9 yrs ago

Done and done, holocrons change to archive.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sketcher
Raw
Avatar of Sketcher

Sketcher The Sketchful

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

Updated again :3
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sep
Raw
GM
Avatar of Sep

Sep Lord of All Creation

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

Blaze96 said
Done and done, holocrons change to archive.


Good to go.

Sketcher said
Updated again :3


Will read it in a bit.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sep
Raw
GM
Avatar of Sep

Sep Lord of All Creation

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

Sketcher said
Name: Illi Luca DahnGender: MaleSpecies: HumanAge: 17Homeworld: Courascant Personality: Luca is a somewhat dull young boy. He doesn’t tend to speak unless spoken to, of course with a few exceptions. He’s a sharp and perceptive brat, sometimes getting on people’s nerves by sounding like a smartass, though his visage never gives off any emotion that would suggest he was looking down on anyone. He can be insubordinate from time to time, taking actions on his own without the consent of his master when he thinks the orders given to him are flawed.He’s quite patient, able to meditate for several hours without being distracted. Though, when his limit breaks, he becomes rather violent, still keeping his annoyed and cold demeanour about.Flaws: Although he’s generally calm and collected, Luca can have violent outbursts from time to time. This makes his fighting style rather predictable since he simply lashes out without any complex technique that could be created using the seventh form. These outbursts originate from his prolonged exposition to the dark side of the force during his childhood. His silent demeanour usually makes him unsociable.Skills: Luca is quite nimble thanks to his physique. Though most jedi are capable of achieving great acrobatic feats, Luca’s greatest virtue in close combatEquipment: He carries a hidden under his cloak.Force Abilities: Luca spent quite a bit of time training his skills in the ways of the force; almost as much as he did training with his lightsaber. At the academy, he became proficient with simple force tricks like Force Push and Force Jump. During his time with he mastered the Art of Movement during his time as a padawan as his fighting style was highly dependant on his ability to move around freely. From his master, he learned the stance and meditation technique "Center of Being" to further his development in the ways of the force and to increase his skill as a swordsman.Personal History: Illi Luca Dahn had been at the Jedi Temple ever since he could remember. During his time as an initiate, he was a rather poor student. This wasn’t because he was unskilled, but rather because he was insubordinate and impatient. He paid little attention during the training, doing his best to keep up to his fellow students with as little effort as possible. This was his mindset for quite some time, since he was never actually a below average student. He felt quite content with what he could do and even took pride in being able to contend with, even if not best, the other students. During his time slacking, of course, he had the chance to improve some other skills. He spent a lot of this time in the archives, reading.This all changed, however, when he first entered the Jedi Temple Apprentice Tournament at the age of 10. He had some high hopes, dreaming of how he’d triumph over his opponents. Of course, he was quite disappointed when he couldn’t pass the first round, showing poor coordination and technique. Though he convinced himself his opponent was superior to that of any other in the tournament, the defeat still lead him to change his attitude about training. He devoted most of his time to mastering his techniques, disciplining himself so that he would focus more.With his newfound determination, Luca trained harder and harder, aiming to enter once again when he was ready. After the second year since his first tournament passed, he entered once more, feeling that he was prepared. He started off well, displaying good technique and serenity.After the tournament, one of the jedi knights claimed him as an apprentice. The woman, a young knight recently given her current rank, wasn’t especially impressed with his abilities but rather with his calm stature. Once she took him in as her padawan, she started training him before actually taking her to missions. Needless to say, Luca wasn’t very eager to get more lessons after leaving the academy. With time, he got more patient and eventually Liana started taking him with her to fight on the front lines.Today, Luca is currently staying at the temple while Liana Radiian is on her own mission, the boy unbeknownst of the betrayal against the jedi and his teacher.Additional Info: Sorry for the anime thing in the appearance but because I couldn’t find anything, I drew it.


Thats better.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by cqbexpt
Raw
Avatar of cqbexpt

cqbexpt Warden Eternal

Member Seen 7 yrs ago

Name: Tactus
Gender: Male
Species: Chiss
Age: 19
Homeworld: Coruscant

Appearance:

Personality: Tactus is a some times intense man who for even a Chiss excels at suppressing most if not all his emotions. When it comes to combat Tactus has the occasional bout of trance like fervor, though this has never once led him away from the light side of the force it was watched closely by his master when he was younger. He can be rather strict with some of his observations of the jedi code, however his interpretation of the code has differed in a few ways compared to that of some though not often. Tactus has never had trouble falling into where his place is and not questioning the word of his elders, though his master has been slowly breaking him of his habit. He has also had a fascination with why things work rather than how, this applies to everything from governments to the order itself.
Flaws: Tactus has had trouble conquering the emotion of disgust and from time to time still does, though he has learned to control it with the help of his master. Tactus has never been good at sparring other saber wielders nor has he ever enjoyed it, if at all possible he will attempt to keep his distance from melee based opponents.

Skills: Iightsaber forms: Shii-Cho, Soresu.
Due to his reliance on more ranged weapons and tactics Tactus prefers to be on the defensive with the lightsaber and disengage duels as quickly as possible. Tactus however is rather proficient with most of the GAR armory due to his masters like of ranged offense but also due to spending much of his time as a padawan in the war.
Equipment: Standard lightsaber (Dark blue)
DC-17S
Forearm gauntlets(made for protection from blasters)
Simple jedi robes
Utility belt w/ holster (contains collapse able data pad, thick metal cord, a few spare tibanna cartridges etc.)
Force Abilities: Most abilities Tactus possess are centered around his ability to fire weapons accurately and obtain positions that are more advantageous.
Force jump, Force push, Force sight, telekinesis, Force listening, Breath control(training).

Personal History: Tactus was an orphan on Coruscant for reasons that are still unknown to him. However he was found to be force sensitive early and being as close as he was to the jedi center of power he was picked up rather early by the order. His earliest true memories however are of being raised in the temple and taught day in and day out about history and the jedi code. He preformed rather well at tasks that involved him having to little other than absorb knowledge. However Tactus struggled when he was required to think entirely out side of the box. He excelled as a youngling in strict adherence to an idea or method, again though he was unable to come up with things beyond simply combining old ideas.

However when his initiate trials came around he was easily able to pass them especially the test of self discipline which he again excelled at. He was picked up soon after by Shir-Val-Kuul as a padawan. This may have been partly because of his love of non saber weapons which he shared with his superior. However she would battle Tactus's unquestioning nature throughout his entire apprenticeship. Most of her methods of teaching him lessons about the force were unconventional and Tactus initially struggled to understand some of the things she taught him. This was further compounded by Tactus conforming to one line of thought while the next Shir would have him guessing what happened.

Later in his apprenticeship at the outbreak of the clone wars though the lessons she taught him began to come from the battlefield. Being thrust into battle in cities and on open ground was easily the time of his life that cemented his love for ranged combat. He found out quickly as that he was a rather excellent natural shot and he rather enjoyed it compared to what he thought was dreary lightsaber combat. It also helped that since most of the combatants were droids wielding weapons which in general complimented his fighting style of playing defensive until and opening was given. As the war progressed however and his teacher dragged him across the galaxy to different hotspots he also began to foster a sort of warriors bond with the clones they fought along side in increasingly intense fights.

Though as the war and his apprenticeship begin to come to a close however he can't help but look forward to being a knight. Currently though he is inbetween missions and has taken up reading up on the end of wars past and how they moved the galaxy forward from there.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by UnusualStranger
Raw
Avatar of UnusualStranger

UnusualStranger

Member Seen 5 yrs ago

Hey there. Figured I might as well see if I can get involved in all this. Hope you don't mind.



Also....how does one decide if they are going to be knight, padawan, or master? Cause if its alright, I would like to possibly change this sheet to try for Master if I can.
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sketcher
Raw
Avatar of Sketcher

Sketcher The Sketchful

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

Sep said
Thats better.


Does that mean it's accepted? ^.^
Hidden 10 yrs ago Post by Sho Minazuki
Raw
Avatar of Sho Minazuki

Sho Minazuki P5 Hero

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

Appearance still not drawn, but otherwise it should be fine.

↑ Top
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet