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Mahz felt like it.
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Got it. Also, nice to see you again Rtron.
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Nice to see you too Toxic.
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How have things been?
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How is my char?
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WitchChild said
Character name: Lord Haklo Thalen Desol


I see nothing to complain about, though if you could go into more detail on what exactly happens when the sword attacks, how often, and for how long would be nice.

Also, what does 'give it to the user' mean?
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Rtron, I was under the impression that Psychomancy had nothing to do with telekinesis, and was, in fact, entirely telepathy and illusion...
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I am alive.
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Crossark said
I am alive.


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Sundered Echo said
Rtron, I was under the impression that Psychomancy had nothing to do with telekinesis, and was, in fact, entirely telepathy and illusion...


It's Lucius's department. It very well could be that, but it also could involve telekinesis. Until it's been hammered out, it's uncertain.

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I am alive.


So you are.
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So, by the progression of work, the intro for the new Elves will be done before my CSs are...
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Cause I'm a dapper fellow, I'm going to break it down to sections so that I can work this out.

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Favoured Magic Class: Psychomancy (Telekinetic and Telepathic abilities)


Psychomancer does not involve telekinsies. It's more along the lines of Illusions, though telepathic abilities are included. The closest form to Telekinsese is dependent on what you're trying to move: Move metal stuff and you'd have to be a Geomancer. Ice stuff requires Cyrtomancy. Necromancy might be able to cover all those areas, but I didn't cover Necromancy so you'd have to ask Rtron. But Psychomancy does not included Telekinesis.

Witchchild said Previous Magic training: He was trained by his father to control his abilities but not advance them.


Define Control. What many Psychomancers have to deal with when starting is is the difficulty of controlling when/what they read the minds of people. It's actually a bit of an accomplishment to get a legible sentence out of someones random thoughts. It's like a continuous run on sentence in there. even more so if you can pick out a single mind in a crowded area.

WitchChild said Appearance: 6'2" and 190lbs and healthy mix of masculine and athletic built. He wears finely made clothing and carries himself with confidence and authority. Always at his hip is his sword known as "Rift" The Desol Honorblade, a broken blade of blackened Godstone and the prison of the demonMuardu, the Aether Serpent. which gives the sword the ability to deflect and tear through magical barriers and attacks.
His hair is midnight black and his eyes are hold and icy cold glare.


Your sword will look like this and you will agree to it.

WitchChild said Short Bio: Haklo Talen Desol was bron to Baron Thalen Desol of Port Slaughter. Although the Port is one of the least savory locations in the world, Baron Desol has a secret control over it's criminal activity. He has the know how of each criminal boss and they make sure to "give" the baron a tribute for good favor. Skara Desol later fathered a son which he began to mold in his image which was already happening. Haklo Desol had the same midnight black hair and the same icy cold eyes of his father. As Haklo grew up, he studied under his tutors and learned about important royalty and nobility as well as their secrets from his father's spies and assassins. From them and the honorguard he learned how to ride a steed and handle a sword. From the street contacts he learned how the streets worked and their filth survived.

Haklo then inherited the responsibility of Rift, the Desol Honorblade. It was a broken longsword made of blackened godstone. It had broken generations ago and the broken point was never found. Within the blade was the demonic spirit of Muardu The Aether Serpent, a demon who devoured magical energies. The blade was capable of cutting through magical barriers and deflect magical projectiles as well, absorb magic of fallen foes and transfer it to Haklo. However, with the blade broken, the demon is capable of taking magical energies as well and use it to attempt escape. To keep the demon in line, Haklo suffers excruciating amount of pain of both physical and mental.

As Haklo got older, his training got a bit tougher. Once he was training with one of the underling guards and it ended with Haklo stabbing him through the neck without remorse.

(Nothing major, just some background to share about your character from where they were born, their life like, and what drove them to study at the College? At least 2-3 paragraphs (5-7 sentences), though believe me when I say the more depth and detail then the more the GMs- at least one of them- will love you for it…)


This looks incomplete. Is it incomplete? I think it's incomplete. Work on it.

WitchChild said Bad Attributes: He might get too ruthless towards anyone he sees as a detriment to his goals.


Elaborate. Will he stab someone using wordplay and innuendo to stall time? Does he hate tactical planning and prefer to go into battle with the notion that all he needs to do is run towards teh enemy and stab them to death without remorse? Or is this something to be developed in the IC? Answer me!
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Lucius Cypher said Your sword will look like and you will agree to it.


You do not have to agree to it.
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You're a party pooper, you know that Rtron? Party pooper.
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So, Lucius.
You ready for some sexy Elf/Girl action?

Of course, when I say sexy, I mean awkward moments around others and both of them reading together.
Also, Cynn getting mad at Annabeth somewhere along the line and having the most utterly adorable freakout ever.
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Yo, totally, once I actually finish making Annabeth. We're actually getting a lot of Psychomancers this time around, I should finish writing the magical section for it.
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Lucius Cypher said
You're a party pooper, you know that Rtron? Party pooper.


I find you sadistic and insane. But, that would be like the pot calling the kettle black, so I can't really use it.

But you can't force people to choose how their equipment/characters look! Or force them into slavery through cleverly worded agreements!
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Lucius Cypher said
Yo, totally, once I actually finish making Annabeth. We're actually getting a lot of Psychomancers this time around, I should finish writing the magical section for it.


You really should.
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Lucius Cypher said
Yo, totally, once I actually finish making Annabeth. We're actually getting a lot of Psychomancers this time around, I should finish writing the magical section for it.


Probably...:p
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Also, folks, I've been thinking about this New Elf Race thing, and I think I'm going to start a separate thread for it. I don't want to dirty up the IC with things that really don't relate to people at all this Act around. However, I might occasionally bring the main Ice Elf into the IC for reasons I cannot disclose at this time, so I would really appreciate it if, perhaps, you kept up with the story there just so you're not caught off guard when the character shows up.
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