Digimon G-Shatter (Redux)(Royal Knights Mk: II[Sorta])

[tobiax]

RBYDark said
Now, now, Tob, if I don't have to alter V-mon's personality for Magnamon, then it should probably be fine if Gankoomon is consistent with past digivolutions. They're new Knights, aren't they?And I'll go tweak colors.

I see that- but there's a difference between referring back to what you've already put, and that being a personality that is a broad base such as V-mon/Magnamon, and not letting me know what's up with the personality. Understand? Not trying to dig at xander- see below.

XxFellsingxX said
Oh okay. I just wanted to make sure LordKnightmon wasn't overpowered, but if that's the case, I'll change it.

Defensive orientation and weaker physical strength is enough.

22xander said
I was just trying to translate the attacks, that was the best I could do... I wanted to keep them all in the light theme, and those were the best ideas I could come up with. I'm sorry if I'm a bit bad, I'm just super streassed about school. I'm trying to do my best, I really hope we can reach an understanding.

Okay, xander. Let's get on the same page. You can slow down on RP related things if school is an issue. I get it. Now, the important thing is thinking of how you want to play your characters in an interesting way. Do that first, and leave everything else about the CS as secondary for now. Once you've thought of that, do your best to put it into words in the personality section. I don't mean to make this stressful- it's supposed to be fun. But there's the matter of quality. Like... I don't want there to be one player- and this is anyone, not just you- who the other players feel doesn't offer anything, and the only way I can check that is by evaluating your ideas, which I can only do by looking for the underlying potential in the personality section. Is that understood?

EDIT: I'd like to remind everyone that there's a link to the OOC on the first post of this thread right at the top.

[22xander]

I suppose I understand, and this isn't stressing me out much it's just comeing to the end of the term with only two As. I'm sure that I can get going in the to, but its hard for me to try and say something about personality without much backstory or blatantly saying what he would do in a situation.

Vincent will play as the awkward and sometimes belligerent role. In game he will prove time and time again that he has a hard time understanding people because of his background but also that he has a good heart and that many times he'll prove himself. As a reference think of a more well rounded izzi from the first season.

The Digimon is an outgoing and frankly reckless character. In game he'll take an active role in most things he's present for, and he'll often mess it up. He's just as nice as his tamer, but he has a just as roundabout way if showing it. He'slike an 80's sitcom older brother, sometimes a bit mean but he proves himself to only be looking out for everyone.

Dynamicly they're actualy fairly simulerz but neither would ever admit it. They're equaly awkward and stumbling through social interaction, but in opisit ways. And they both are probly some of the nicest people whem you get past thair egos.

[tobiax]

Okay, then make that apparent in your CS. Take your time if you have to, but make it so that we can tell how things would go by reading the personality, more than being told specifically, ya' know? It's called "Show, don't tell", but more accurately, "describe, don't state". Unless it's for dramatic effect it seems.
But yeah, like RBY said, look at other people's CS's, and see how they did it so you can see what methods you can take for yourself. All CS's are compiled on the first page of the OOC. Here you go. Right there.

[tobiax]

Still looking for more players.

[FrozenEcstasy]

Mind if I stake a claim of interest and request to be the operator of an eventual Jesmon? :3