Name: Blaze
Real Name: Blaire Daniels
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Name: Wave
Real Name: Jessamine “Jess” Daniels
Okay, so what I'll do in this instance is give you feedback for each of them individually; first starting with Blaire, then with Jess, before looking at the backstory together.
Blaire:
I like the idea you have going for this character, a fire manipulator is a good character when done well, there are a few things though that I would like you to go over however before I can accept her.
1. When it comes to her position within the compound, because of her age she herself would still be in training so she wouldn't be able to be an assistant trainer, plus she would also only be learning what it takes to be a hacker in the compound. A lookout is okay for her, however there is something else that I will bring up later that will determine this.
2. I wouldn't say that being a thief is an occupation in the compound, it's more of a skill than an occupation.
3. I love where you're going with her powers, fire manipulation is really cool, but however I do have my concerns with the "Phoenix Physiology". Being the "bird of rebirth" effectively makes you immortal and unkillable due to being reborn from the ashes, unfortunately I'm not going to be able to accept this particular part of her abilities.
Jess:
I like the idea that you have going, however I'm not quite so sure if a water manipulator is going to particularly fit in with the roleplay setting too much.
1. Like her sister, when it comes to her position within the compound, because of her age she herself would still be in training. Again a lookout is okay for her (and I will bring up something soon that will determine this), however playing "bait" isn't something that leaders would encourage as it would put more lives in danger.
2. Unfortunately, because of the setting the roleplay is in, I'm not going to be able to accept this particular set of powers; sorry...
Backstory:
Okay, this is the part (that mentioned above) I was going to talk about in regards to determining their positions and such in the compound. As mentioned in your backstory, both Blaire and Jess don't actually live within the compound, they only live near by to it; because of this I take it as they are still trying to hide within the human society, so in that case they wouldn't be able to participate in activities in the Pit due to safety issues (it would make them a target for the government because they aren't living in The Pit like the other mutants). The only way I can see it working with them having their own place for a while is if you make them both new recruits, this way they won't have a position or occupation within the compound yet however once they are recruited they would move into the compound like the others.