[OOC] Dragon Ball - To Whom the Planets were Sold

[HaltingBlooper]

Welp, here is my race application.

Race: The Tailed

The Tailed consist of humanoid foxes that are comparable to Namekians in terms of average strength. They physically age about half as fast as humans, and live up to 200 years. Most of The Tailed are orange, but are rarely born gray. The gray Tailed are much stronger. Tailed mostly have blue or brown eyes.

Their transformations are:
2-tailed: Two times Base Power increase.
3-tailed: Three times 2-tailed power.
4-tailed: Four times 3-tailed power.
ETC.

NOTE: Transformations are much harder to obtain for The Tailed as they get bigger. For example, 5-tailed would be much harder to obtain than 4-tailed, relative to the previous form.

[Chev]

Interested. Are you still accepting? I have a few ideas for a character.

[HaltingBlooper]

Chev, probably. This OOC just got up maybe a day or two ago.

[Rune_Alchemist]

@HaltingBlooper So Kitsunes~ xP

I'm not gonna lie. I thought about making a Kitsune race with various transformations before I decided on a Majin xP

Also, I edited the Glimmer Blast move.

Glimmer Blast - Gathering any remaining energy she has, a large ball of bright purple Ki is gathered. This unstable manifestation of Ki is highly volatile, and could easily be detonated before it even leaves her hands. The slightest miscalculation could easily make it explode.

Also being her 'trump card' if you will, it makes this her most powerful attack. If you survive, this, then chances are she's out of tricks. However, once launched from her hands it is shot towards the target. It can either connect with something, and explode with tremendous force, or she detonates it with a simple hand motion.

[IceHeart]

Welp, here is my race application.

Race: The Tailed

The Tailed consist of humanoid foxes that are comparable to Namekians in terms of average strength. They physically age about half as fast as humans, and live up to 200 years. Most of The Tailed are orange, but are rarely born gray. The gray Tailed are much stronger. Tailed mostly have blue or brown eyes.

Their transformations are:
2-tailed: Two times Base Power increase.
3-tailed: Three times 2-tailed power.
4-tailed: Four times 3-tailed power.
ETC.

NOTE: Transformations are much harder to obtain for The Tailed as they get bigger. For example, 5-tailed would be much harder to obtain than 4-tailed, relative to the previous form.

@HaltingBlooper

Kitsunes are cool; however, first of all they would fit into the Anthro category. Second they obviously have way too many transformations, plus the fact that each one has even greater exponential power growth than the last transformation. Race is unapproved.

@HaltingBlooper So Kitsunes~ xP

I'm not gonna lie. I thought about making a Kitsune race with various transformations before I decided on a Majin xP

Also, I edited the Glimmer Blast move.

Glimmer Blast - Gathering any remaining energy she has, a large ball of bright purple Ki is gathered. This unstable manifestation of Ki is highly volatile, and could easily be detonated before it even leaves her hands. The slightest miscalculation could easily make it explode.

Also being her 'trump card' if you will, it makes this her most powerful attack. If you survive, this, then chances are she's out of tricks. However, once launched from her hands it is shot towards the target. It can either connect with something, and explode with tremendous force, or she detonates it with a simple hand motion.

@Rune_Alchemist

As a trump card move it works fine, that should fix up your character nicely.

[HaltingBlooper]

Okay, majin times.

Name: Abera

Appearance: 3 foot tall chubby Majin. (Basically, short Fat Buu) He is a lighter shade of pink than most Majins, and he wears a light orange shirt and pale blue pants. He wears seafoam green gloves(Or whatever they have on their hands.). He also has a dark red cloak. He has two antennae, which are positioned slightly above and in front of his ears. Oh, and he has a black cat that follows him around. Don't ask why.

Age: 9

Race: Majin

Gender: Male

Personality: Abera is a nice, but childish Majin that enjoys popping up in random places. When he does so, he is usually seen with a big, stupid grin on his face. He tends to stick with first impressions unless he really gets to know someone, and is very outspoken, to the point where it can be a major flaw. When he fights, he tends to not take the opponent seriously unless he is losing. This does not apply when he is mad. He dislikes being left behind, and tags along even when unwanted. This can be very annoying. He is very persistent, especially when trying to get something.

Bio: Abera was dumped in a dumpster by unwanting parents when he was young. No, not really, that was a joke on some...generic backstories. Abera had a nice time growing up, doing really whatever he felt like at the time. Then he found out that he was much stronger than normal humans. Yes, he is an idiot, bear with me. He then began training himself, trying to get stronger. He knew he wasn't the only Majin, and that there were others stronger. He didn't want to fall behind or anything. He doesn't really care about being the strongest, he cares about not being the weakest. He doesn't really have any life goals. He does what he wants, when he wants. Because he feels like it.

Aura Color: Light Pink

Fighting Style: Ki blasts. He really likes shooting things. Also, it is more fun than just punching and kicking.

Signature Attacks:

Melee:

Rapid Barrage: A flurry of punches and kicks, strengthened by ki, sometimes resulting in explosions. This ends with him kicking the opponent into the nearest hard object and then blasting it with a large amount of ki blasts.

Ki:

Homing Army: Similar to a Hellzone Grenade, this technique fires a ton of stationary blasts a foot or two away, and then, at a signal, chase after the enemy and blast them.

Barrier Wave: Blocks incoming attacks with a spherical bubble, and then flies outward, damaging terrain and enemies around it.

Finish Cannon: Gathers a large portion of ki, and blasts a powerful energy wave at the opponent to try and destroy them. Sometimes follows the Rapid Barrage.

The End: A last resort, he gathers all of the energy he can muster into a huge ball, and flings it at the opponent. Extremely powerful, but extremely draining.

Other:

Well, he is a Majin, so he can regenerate himself and his body is malleable. Can throw slabs of himself at the enemy, sort of like Buu.

[Rune_Alchemist]

As a trump card move it works fine, that should fix up your character nicely.

@IceHeart

Alrighty!~

[Archmage MC]

I can also make her a majin instead if you want.

Name: Light

Appearance: Light is a 1.65 meter tall pure white humanoid with a skinny neck, overly large head with equally large black/orange eyes (like a majins eyes, just bigger) No nose and a smallish mouth with blue jelly featherlike hair and aquatic looking ears. She had comically large forearms and hand with no visible wrist, wears a white dress with a blue top and blue trim, the front of the dress which is open with a tabard coming from her waist to cover her front. (think lab coat looking tails with a tabard in the front) Her legs end in points with Light having no feet, and her fingers are razor sharp.

Age: '24'

Race: Void Daemon

Gender: Female

Personality: Light enjoys fun and freedom more than anything else, and does what she wants to do. She views things as a game, and has a poor grasp of the severity of situations because of this. While this might make her come off as an airhaed, Light is quite intelligent and uses that perceived notion to her advantage.

Bio: A being from the Void, Light made her way to Earth through a combination of a rogue cult and her interest in the physical plane. Due to her appearance, she could pass herself off as a Majin very easily and started to enjoy the experiences of the physical realm for herself. Of course the fact that she was from the Void causes lots of problems with the physical realm, most notably in the fact she has to constantly be on the move from city to city as if she stays in one place too long, imprints of her body can be found where she was sleeping which irritates quite a few humans.

Aura Color: Void/space black/purple

Preferred Fighting Style: Melee. Light is incapable of using Ki blasts.

Signature Combat Techniques:

-Melee-
Void Shield: Light creates a shield of Void energy around herself, absorbing all energy that hits it. While using this shield Light can't move. Energy absorbed by this shield is used to either replenish Light's own energy or used as a short range explosion.

Void Siphon: Physical contact with Light causes whatever she is touching to slowly lose energy. Energy lost due to damage Light has inflicted is siphoned to her to use. Given long enough contact, this will cause something to eventually fade from existence. Creatures with a tie to the void are immune to this technique.

Reality Step: Light can conjure a void portal to take her between two points in space. The first location is always next to her, the other can be any location that she can sense energy, see, or remember. Others can not interact with the portals, besides overloading them with energy and causing an explosion.

Fusion Punch: Light channels energy into her fist, unleashing a massive surge of Void energy to the next thing she punches. This punch has a slow wind up, but is devastating if it hits.

Shatter Reality: Light's ultimate ability. She shatters reality in an area around her, causing a tear in space that cuts off whoever is caught in it from using magic, and all energy based moves that are not Void based are greatly weakened. Staying in this area for those who are not bound to the Void will slowly drain their vitality. Energy can not be sensed inside this area, and observers will only see darkness. Attempting to leave the arena or enter it causes whoever is entering or leaving to drastically slow down as their essence reconfigures to the presence of reality or lack of.

-Other-

Adaptive Regenerative Essence: Light can regenerate from nearly any injury, even supernatural ones such as being turned into candy. Afterwords Light gains a huge amount of resistance to the last thing that hurt her for a few hours, adapting body appendages or skin textures or whatever she needs to in order to adapt to resisting whatever she was hit with. Light can not adapt to an injury caused by Silver, and injuries caused by Iron have a reduced adaptive resistance, however she can still regenerate from both types of injuries. Obviously regeneration takes a good amount of energy, especially if it was inflicted using Silver or Iron. If Light dies, her essence drifts back into the void to reform instead of going to Otherworld.

[Kitsune]

I missed the OOC announcement! I will be sure to get my sheet up soon.

[Weird Tales]

Sorry about not responding to the ooc, I'll have a cs up sometime today or tomorrow

[IceHeart]

I can also make her a majin instead if you want.

Name: Light

Appearance: Light is a 1.65 meter tall pure white humanoid with a skinny neck, overly large head with equally large black/orange eyes (like a majins eyes, just bigger) No nose and a smallish mouth with blue jelly featherlike hair and aquatic looking ears. She had comically large forearms and hand with no visible wrist, wears a white dress with a blue top and blue trim, the front of the dress which is open with a tabard coming from her waist to cover her front. (think lab coat looking tails with a tabard in the front) Her legs end in points with Light having no feet, and her fingers are razor sharp.

Age: '24'

Race: Void Daemon

Gender: Female

Personality: Light enjoys fun and freedom more than anything else, and does what she wants to do. She views things as a game, and has a poor grasp of the severity of situations because of this. While this might make her come off as an airhaed, Light is quite intelligent and uses that perceived notion to her advantage.

Bio: A being from the Void, Light made her way to Earth through a combination of a rogue cult and her interest in the physical plane. Due to her appearance, she could pass herself off as a Majin very easily and started to enjoy the experiences of the physical realm for herself. Of course the fact that she was from the Void causes lots of problems with the physical realm, most notably in the fact she has to constantly be on the move from city to city as if she stays in one place too long, imprints of her body can be found where she was sleeping which irritates quite a few humans.

Aura Color: Void/space black/purple

Preferred Fighting Style: Melee. Light is incapable of using Ki blasts.

Signature Combat Techniques:

-Melee-
Void Shield: Light creates a shield of Void energy around herself, absorbing all energy that hits it. While using this shield Light can't move. Energy absorbed by this shield is used to either replenish Light's own energy or used as a short range explosion.

Void Siphon: Physical contact with Light causes whatever she is touching to slowly lose energy. Energy lost due to damage Light has inflicted is siphoned to her to use. Given long enough contact, this will cause something to eventually fade from existence. Creatures with a tie to the void are immune to this technique.

Reality Step: Light can conjure a void portal to take her between two points in space. The first location is always next to her, the other can be any location that she can sense energy, see, or remember. Others can not interact with the portals, besides overloading them with energy and causing an explosion.

Fusion Punch: Light channels energy into her fist, unleashing a massive surge of Void energy to the next thing she punches. This punch has a slow wind up, but is devastating if it hits.

Shatter Reality: Light's ultimate ability. She shatters reality in an area around her, causing a tear in space that cuts off whoever is caught in it from using magic, and all energy based moves that are not Void based are greatly weakened. Staying in this area for those who are not bound to the Void will slowly drain their vitality. Energy can not be sensed inside this area, and observers will only see darkness. Attempting to leave the arena or enter it causes whoever is entering or leaving to drastically slow down as their essence reconfigures to the presence of reality or lack of.

-Other-

Adaptive Regenerative Essence: Light can regenerate from nearly any injury, even supernatural ones such as being turned into candy. Afterwords Light gains a huge amount of resistance to the last thing that hurt her for a few hours, adapting body appendages or skin textures or whatever she needs to in order to adapt to resisting whatever she was hit with. Light can not adapt to an injury caused by Silver, and injuries caused by Iron have a reduced adaptive resistance, however she can still regenerate from both types of injuries. Obviously regeneration takes a good amount of energy, especially if it was inflicted using Silver or Iron. If Light dies, her essence drifts back into the void to reform instead of going to Otherworld.

@Archmage MC

Its cool you're trying to make a new race but a few things seem a little off about this character. First of all you make the character be a melee only fighter, but then give her a Void Shield, which completely negates distance fighting with ki blasts, though I suppose they could still at least throw large heavy objects at her. On top of that she has the nasty Void Syphon ability, which makes close combat fighting fairly hazardous and given the fact that enemies can literally 'fade from existence' on top of syphoning energy when even dealing damage to enemies is way too overpowered.

Certain androids had similar abilities, minus the whole 'fade from existence' thing, but even then they were limited in how they could absorb from opponents, such as their absorbers were on their hands only and they had to either grab their opponents or absorb the incoming blast with their hands. Adding on to these rather powerful abilities is Shattered Reality; on its own the Shattered Reality is only a little overpowered, basically making an advantageous environment for the character to fight in, but that in combination with the other abilities makes this bubble of reality super deadly. Basically the character as she is has way too much synergy, also the weaknesses to silver and iron, while interesting do not fit all that well in the dragon ball universe, as only a few characters in the series tend to use weapons. Certainly there are some who use swords, like Trunks, but its not something that occurs that often so the weakness will barely be taken advantage of.

An interesting character but too powerful as is. Its up to you rather you want to try to tone her down or if you just want to scrap and change her to a majin like you said at the start.

[HaltingBlooper]

Can you look at mine?

[IceHeart]

Can you look at mine?

@HaltingBlooper

Abera seems fine, nothing bad to say, fits the bill so to speak.

[Chev]

Name: Android 26

Appearance: Android 26 stands at around 6'7 and has long silver hair that goes down to his shoulder. His eyes are light blue and he looks similar in build to Android 16. His current clothing is a black Capsule Corp jacket with blue jeans and black combat boots.

Age: Unknown

Race: Prototype Tactical Android

Gender: Male

Personality: Although he was designed mostly for combat, Android 26 has a surprisingly gentle personality and is reluctant to fight unless there is a need to. He is extremely interested in the latest advances in technology and often finds himself examining new technology. He isn't a big fan of the outdoors in general.

Bio: Created around ten years ago by Capsule Corp, Android 26 was designed mostly for combat and was programmed for nearly any problem that could be thrown at the planet. Capsule Corp had records of many of the previous threats that the planet faced such as the Sayians, Frieza's race and various others. Android 26 was designed to recognize weaknesses in the fighting style of his opponents although this feature has been acting up since it was first activated. A rather unique prototype feature of Android 26 is that when he is badly damaged he can draw power from the surrounding area and increase his own power level. This feature has not been activated since 26 himself was activated and is largely untested. Since he has been activated he has mostly kept to himself but he can be seen walking around various electronic shops every so often.

Aura Color: Silver

Preferred Fighting Style: Balanced

Signature Combat Techniques:

Ranged Attacks

Energy Blast ((Self explanatory))

Rapid Energy Blast ((Android 26 fires a rapid barrage of Energy blasts at a target to attempt to overwhelm them or to obstruct their vision so he can hit them with another, stronger attack.))

Energy Beam ((Fires a beam of pure energy at a target, not the most usable attack since a target either has to be unaware of his presence or has to be pinned down for it to be practical.))

Energy Wave ((Android 26 unleashes a massive wave of energy that rapidly expands as it moves across the landscape.))

Final Barrage: ((Android 26 uses this as a bit of a last resort attack since it drains a significant amount of energy. He gets in close to his opponent and unleashes a massive barrage of energy blasts.))

Melee Attacks

Crushing strike ((Android 26 punches an opponent towards the ground and slams into them at high speed a second before they make impact which increases the amount of force.))

Crusher Barrage (( Similar to the Crushing Strike, Android 26 grabs an opponent and slams them repeatedly into a mountain or whatever else is handy and proceeds to hit them with everything he has once they dazed or off-guard.))

[Kitsune]

Name: Kira
Appearance:

Magic Educed Appearance

True Appearance

Age: 19
Race: Demon Half Breed
Gender: Female
Personality: Kira Loves thrill and enjoyment of battle. She even holds back to make the fight last longer, though a small 'kindness' that she tries to show is stopping a fight if a enemy is too injured to fight back, of course this often follows with mentions of how weak they are and not worth killing. People that can keep up with her and push her to her limits gain a deep respect. Despite all this she does have a sort of moral compass and trying to make her actions mean well, though they often fail in a comical way due to how she is. She does have a deep weakness though, as she uses her magic to change her looks to something more 'demon like' as the alternative is more fluffy... and less intimidating...

Bio: Born to a human farther and a demon mother, Kira has always been distrusted due to what she was. As she aged her anger rose but so did her power level, growing into something far more than her human teachers could control. Even using the magic taught to her by her mother she changed herself into a more intimidating figure by the time she was only 12. However to control their daughter the pair of warrior parents took their child to learn in the demon realm, learning and evolving into what she is today. Though she still holds some dislike of humans she has grown as a person, and has now return just in time to face this new threat, maybe fate?

Aura Color: Crimson Red
Preferred Fighting Style: Balanced - Uses swords within close combat though is not limited to just them.
Signature Combat Techniques:

Power is immortal

Bloody Slicer: Channeling her energy into her swords, or something similar, she can either sends out a slice of energy or focus it to greatly enchance the cutting power of the blade. She can also do this with her claw like nails, though of course it is lessened from her former.

Mortal Crusher: Using her powerful muscles Kira grabs the enemy and starts to crush them within her arms.

Intimidating Roar: Letting out a beast like roar Kira can blow away weaker enemies while maybe stunning people on her level, though she is distracted while using the technique.

Oni Bu-ra-su-to: Her main stay beam attack that can be fired from two/one hand or even her mouth.

Death Spike: Using her magic Kira can form a gem like lance that she is able to throw and combine with other techniques. A second stage to this weapon can split and set up a spike like trap after it has impacted, that can be used to her advantage.

Demon Transformation: "Hair of crimson red, skin as white as snow, and tattoos that marked her right to power..." Unleashing her full demon blood, Kira enters a uncontrolled state of power. In this state she looses all the use of her complex Techniques other than Bloody Slicer but in return gains a huge boost the melee capability.

Magic: She is able to use magic, though this is non-combative stuff.

[Rune_Alchemist]

I feel like Bea is a bit on the uncreative side for some reason...

maybe its because this is my first time doing a Dragon Ball related RP >_>
Might just be this migraine though.

Ugh.

[IceHeart]

@Chev
Android 26 seems pretty complete, one question though. In the bio he says he has an unactivated ability to draw power from the surrounding area. What kind of power are we talking about first of all and what are the sources for this power? Other than that question the character seems fine.

@Kitsune
Good to see a demon character, even if only a half-blood. Tried to find something to critic but nothing stood out other than a few minor spelling errors that could be corrected. Noticed you put "dose" instead of "does" a few times but aside from spelling mistakes the character herself is solid so good job.

@Rune_Alchemist
Well for a first time Dragon Ball character not bad. Only thing I would say is that since Majin characters are naturally magical beings you could have added some kind of magical element to her but not required of course. Majins are known for unconventional tactics and turning people into candy after all.

[Kitsune]

Honestly she is full demon, since I don't think a demon can be half, they just become a new type of demon. Thanks though I will try to correct the spelling as much as I can. Should I post her into characters?

[Rune_Alchemist]

Huh...really?

I mean, I had Majinn Buu do that to me in Xenoverse once and I was like...what? I mean, I figured most of them were a little out there in there mannerisms, but still that kinda made me go. - Whaaaat.

That sound like the exact opposite of a character I would normally play, honestly. Cutesy pink cuddly characters aren't my thing. I was just going by what was on the Wiki, and they said nothing about them turning people into candy. I figured they were magical in nature, which is why I made her main focus on Ki blasts, she's just no so good at using it yet.

After hearing that though, I may decide to scrap Bea and make another character. but eh, I'm too out of it to seriously think about it for now, so later.

[IceHeart]

Honestly she is full demon, since I don't think a demon can be half, they just become a new type of demon. Thanks though I will try to correct the spelling as much as I can. Should I post her into characters?

@Kitsune

You may put her into the character sub thread.