Hidden 10 yrs ago 10 yrs ago Post by Suku
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char done also claiming a spot as prodigy if this is ok

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Crimmy Oi brat, what're ye using that noggin for?

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Hai!

Ofcourse. You said you'd pay me after the IC started right? *wink*


That wasn't me, I'm afraid.
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That wasn't me, I'm afraid.


It was a joke. jeez
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Crimmy Oi brat, what're ye using that noggin for?

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It was a joke. jeez


Apologies.
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WAY TO MURDER IT
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Crimmy Oi brat, what're ye using that noggin for?

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WAY TO MURDER IT


I am ignorant of what I have murdered. As such, it would likely be manslaughter.
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THAT IS........ a good point.
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@Suku Nothing wrong. However Partisan has sent to you a message concerning some things.

@Crimmy All seems to be in order, accepted~

@Partisan Both your chars should die, but they're also accepted. C:
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They shouldn't die. Fuck you, Hyugahater.
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So I got my character's skeleton down but I'm having a hard time fleshing the guy out. I'll have to work on him more when my head isn't so full of ideals and other duties.
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@Partisan@Savato changed my char added a bit more to history and weapons I am also thinking of somme custom jutsu's to give her later.
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@Suku I'm wondering if you're 100% complete? At the moment she's fit to be a normal student, seeing as she goes 1-2-2 in her jutsu.

I do have some pointers to her weaponry, and these are some big things. At the moment her whip has both electrical and fire qualities, which is essentially fine. As for the explosions on the whip I'll asume these are akin to explosive tags.

Then you go on to say on the rapier that it has wind, ice and water qualities, which is in theory for Naruto-verse not possible for a chunnin, and highly improbable for even a jonin of high ranks.. actually, I think that even the hokage might have trouble doing this.

See, it has wind and water, which is possible, it has ice.. which would require your character to have ice release, a kekkei genkai that has to do with nature combination. So in essence, if you have both wind and water this is possible. Your character has water techniques so I'll assume that that is the nature you were going for (haha duh) and then I'll also assume that she has wind nature. This means that, if she were to use ice release, you'd need to put the kekkei genkai in the kekkei genkai section of the CS.

OR! you'd need to explain how she got wind+ice on her sword without having the natures.

In theory: everything up to here is plausible. Then it gets tricky because you also have fire and wind on your whip, meaning you already have 4+ affinities (not counting ice release here) which I don't think is possible for anyone that isn't superbly good at everything and is at technically a hokage level? I'm not sure, I think that even jonin have 3 affinities max, and I don't remember the Hokage going over 3 either but it's been a long time since I watched.

The only people I remember going over that affinity limit were Kakuzu, that one lady that could kiss and then steal chakra or whatever, and Madara and his gang of criminals.. I mean warheroes.

Do you understand what I mean with this?
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@Partisan it seems I forgot to delete the ice part out sorry about that. so its good enough for a normal person barely? I admit I got rid of a a rank jutsu but as I said I was going over some original for her so what else do you want me to add for it to be classified as a prodigy than?
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Morning.
5 chakra elements are not impossible to get. Is just that it will take a lifetime to obtain it. An average person can only have one, above average is two and totally above average is three or even four. Five is the superior point.

Then again I'm refraining from this route because i want you guys to earn by hardwork.

As for progression.
Prodigies are not even halfway in their potential as of now. But they will progress but slower than a turtle.

Non prodigies gets to progress faster but not rapid yet it will take lots of effort to reach the prodigy's level.

Prodigies are at least Shippuden Sasuke(The one that fought Deidara) level.
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there we go went through the char again and added a bit more upon with everything as it is would this be ok for a char?
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@Sukuaccepted. *kisses you*
OOC is updated thanks to Part.
EDIT: Anyone else needs accepting of characters?

EDIT EDIT:

I would like to remind that we are Chuunins not Genins that need to babysitted, our characters are young adults in a sense given their age and maturity. We are deviating Kishimoto's way of writing for we are original.
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Wanna say that, because of what Masaki said more mature content may also be explored although some things might require more implied ways of being said (fade to black when in doubt)
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Backstory is off. I'm keeping things canon since I don't like messing with the canon timeline. Mess with the timeline = a lot of things needs to be changed because time will always find away to replace things and lots of consequences and stuff.

If you look at my Uchiha character. It's fine that her ancestor is Sarada, given the fact that the rest of Uchiha for 200 years are descended from her anyway. A family tree is established and therefore make sense. Don't ask who Sarada ended up with, that's irrelevant. Either it is Boruto or some random dude

Naruto, Sasuke etc, their generation had been dead for centuries, 2 centuries to be exact.

Having Rasenshuriken is like having Kirin which are S ranks. I personally see Rasenshuriken as an S rank. We are chuunin and we carry A ranks. A ranks can dwarf a house and equals to city block level of fighting.

I'll review once the Co-GMs review. So kindly change the backstory and whatnot.

Frankly speaking, "New gen surpasses old gen" is not really a true statement, somethings just can't be surpassed and sometimes matched.
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@Akashi Mayhiro I've reviewed already on skype. I'll list the details that need to be changed:

-Backstory. Obvious enough.

-Link the canon or game references.

-Your A rank, I'm okay with a makeshift fire style shinra tensei, but like a B-C rank defense should be able to defend from most of it. Needs nerf

-S rank goes away
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