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Just gonna say it here then since you've left skype already;

Despite his once coming out of G.L.Z, Takeshi is greatly weakened to the point where he cannot move his body, his mind goes under mental shock as his trying to process what happened leaving him vulnerable for long periods of time.


Laughable weakness. This only really does anything if you've put a limit of time on your KG which I don't see at the moment.
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Patience is a virtue guys!
But ASAP on the CSs! Onegaishimasu~
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I've gotta lot to fix up and re-done. I'll have it done:)
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You better.
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Bit of an update: I'm managed to strain my neck to the point where I cannot move my body. Therefore I cannot update my bio...could one you guys help me?
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Yo, shouldn't you be like.. considering going to a hospital rather than write shit on here? I mean I appreciate the sentiment but I think your health is more important, no?
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Yo, shouldn't you be like.. considering going to a hospital rather than write shit on here? I mean I appreciate the sentiment but I think your health is more important, no?


Maybe I blew it out of proportion, I can still move a bit, it just hurts a lot.

Don't worry about me. I had this before. Last week I was on the computer finishing of assignments. Just it caught up to me.
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Alright what do you need help with/what do you need to be done?
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Alright what do you need help with/what do you need to be done?


Just the things that need to be correct: the backstory, his ability and jutsu reference:

His history just needs to be seperated, that's all.

Like you said about his ability: it needs a time limit.

And just links to the jutsu.

I give you permission to change anything to you see fit:)

Thanks a lot man, means a lot to me:)
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I'll do it tomorrow considering it's 1:13 here and I don't feel particularily like sifting through another CS today.
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I'll do it tomorrow considering it's 1:13 here and I don't feel particularily like sifting through another CS today.


All good man, please that your time:)
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So I finally got my character done. I'll post him either later tonight or tomorrow. I gotta grammar and spell check the whole thing.

He's a Uchiha in a different clan. That cool?
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@Renny I suppose that can work but I am not fond of mixing two bloodlines. If the said clan is strong in its own right, like having lava. And your character will have lava and sharingan and its future upgrades like Amaterasu; just imagine how hax an Uchiha with lava or whatever said other kekkei genkai and mangekyou, I won't accept that.

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@Masaki Haruna You should know me better. This clan doesn't have a Kekkai Genaki. Only really difference is how he grew up and his last name. Besides that, he's Uchiha through and through. Oh and of course his appearance, but thats a whole other story.
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@Renny
I know you and i love you :D

That being said, I approve of that. I suppose my Uchiha and yours are cousins?
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@Masaki Haruna They could be but, at the moment, she wouldn't know. He might, but he consider all of the Uchiha very distant family members.
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#Fiddles Fingers*

Well then... I call dibs on the next open spot! Call me if you need me xD (until then :P)
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@Renny I suppose that can work but I am not fond of mixing two bloodlines. If the said clan is strong in its own right, like having lava. And your character will have lava and sharingan and its future upgrades like Amaterasu; just imagine how hax an Uchiha with lava or whatever said other kekkei genkai and mangekyou, I won't accept that.


Thats if you even get both KG. Genetics are fickle.
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@Kal-El True that. I learned that in Biology. lol.

Anyway, I have my character done. I might have a few grammar mistakes in it.

@Partisan I'll love to hear some tricks to editing your writing. I couldn't spot any mistakes in your character sheets.

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@Renny love the Emiya Shirou pic and accepted. Put it on the tab :D
@Kal, IKR!

Gotta wait for the rest~
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