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All of my characters tend to be alcoholics for some reason. Also, I honestly didn't look at the other characters until now and I've just realized that everyone is some kind of combat oriented person and I'm basically a quirky drunk nerd with a very expensive chemistry set...


Hey it's all cool. I mean, really, Mari should be more about the religion than the fighting, but that's just how things end up. XD

Also, your avatar is making me want to watch Love Hina again.
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@lydyn If you think Saha is awesome now just wait until she's probing all of your various orifices in the name of science doing lots of fun tests! Because SCIENCE!!!
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I want to finish my CS so bad, but I'm able to use my computer yet and it's already surpassed my DS's character limit by a large margin.
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I want to finish my CS so bad, but I'm not able to use my computer yet and it's already surpassed my DS's character limit by a large margin.


Go to the library? O.o What is your situation anyways? You're using a handheld console to post?

@lydyn If you think Saha is awesome now just wait until she's probing all of your various orifices in the name of science doing lots of fun tests! Because SCIENCE!!!


.... oh my....
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@Pyromania99 Mitsune Konno is my role model :P
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@lydynYeah, my 2DS, and while the character limit isn't usually a problem, it kills me when it comes to CS making. And I can't go to the library because I can't drive and there isn't one in walking distance from here.
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@lydynYeah, my 2DS, and while the character limit isn't usually a problem, it kills me when it comes to CS making. And I can't go to the library because I can't drive and there isn't one in walking distance from here.


Okay, solution time - write the CS in parts. Send them to me in a PM and I'll construct it all together for you in one post. You should be able to copy/paste it into a post and then we can look at it? If there's really a need... I can post it for you, though it takes away your ability to edit it on the fly.
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@Pyromania99 Mitsune Konno is my role model :P


Well, I guess I know what I'm doing sometime now.
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Humor me with the reason for rejection

For the time and effort invested in its creation I think it's deserving to get something more substantial than a simple "it's rejected" don't you think?
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Is Lady Saha the only noble in the entire group of characters?
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Is Lady Saha the only noble in the entire group of characters?


No, there's a ranger noble too.

Humor me with the reason for rejection

For the time and effort invested in its creation I think it's deserving to get something more substantial than a simple "it's rejected" don't you think?


Well, besides that it feels like you are getting a little bit of an attitude (could just be how I read it), I'm not comfortable with right-out rulers being adventurers. Besides the idea of emperor (in my mind, this is someone who rules over several kingdoms) being a bit too much, I don't see any real reason why he'd leave a kingdom to go on an adventure. That's extremely irresponsible and he wouldn't stay emperor for long at all.

His personality also doesn't seem to fit into the group or the adventure as I'd like. Tough love and gruffness is okay or the level of suspicion that Tylan displays can work, but him being just an asshole just because he thinks he's better? Ehhh... and that gloryhound stuff doesn't really fit either. If this were a role-play where death was possible, he'd probably endanger himself or everyone. I'm also uncomfortable with the playboy type of attitude... images of someone who is just arrogant as hell, wants all the glory, and flirts... I don't know. I don't see how he'd really help the group no matter what his abilities are.

In conclusion, I'm being picky about a tenth character and he did not pop out for several reasons. I appreciate the time you took to write him out, but this happens sometimes. Believe me, I've never won a 'competition-type' of CS-applying so I'm doing my best to carefully read everyone.
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@lydyn I just noticed the groups & organizations part of the CS section, and I was wondering, do you want me to make a sheet for the desert raiders Mylisant normally teams with?
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@lydyn I just noticed the groups & organizations part of the CS section, and I was wondering, do you want me to make a sheet for the desert raiders Mylisant normally teams with?


That is totally up to you, though if they come into play (and hopefully this has been expected) I'd want you to RP as them / assist me in RPing as them.
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I have a question, do we have to make up a kingdom or can we just join one?
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I have a question, do we have to make up a kingdom or can we just join one?


You may join one... I'll look over your CS when it's done, but I hope you can make it pop!~ You'd be an 11th character I'd be accepting, which is over the limit I originally intended. ^.- But you've also been working on it for a long while, so I feel like giving her a chance is only fair (this is assuming Evan's character joins the fold).
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@MidoriAiden is the bastard of the royal family of Ziore, does that count?
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Here's the finished version of Damien, just to make it easier. I'll throw him into a Kingdom later.
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@Irisity - I was thinking. It may be for accurate to change her occupation from Desert Bandit to Desert Gypsy, haha. Since the 'bandits' are likely more con-artists and actually worship one decent deity. Though now catching it, she worships Silv? But she seems like such a good person... is it more out of respect for her camp than it is personal? I'd figure so based on her personality.
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That is totally up to you, though if they come into play (and hopefully this has been expected) I'd want you to RP as them / assist me in RPing as them.


Yeah, of course I'll help rp them! I shall go ahead and make a sheet and pm it to you and if you like it file it under the groups and organizations section and we'll see if it'll become useful in the future! :)
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@Irisity - I was thinking. It may be for accurate to change her occupation from Desert Bandit to Desert Gypsy, haha. Since the 'bandits' are likely more con-artists and actually worship one decent deity. Though now catching it, she worships Silv? But she seems like such a good person... is it more out of respect for her camp than it is personal? I'd figure so based on her personality.


She worships Silv for the bandits. If she ever broke away from them, she would easily forget the practices of praising Silv, but not Yumar. And I dunno, maybe it could be like a mix of gypsies and bandits? The capable adults go out and pilliage in the desert while the elder and children go out and con people in the city?
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