[OOC] Verthaven: A Bloody Paradise [Completed]

[Maxx]

That sheet was so edgy that I cut myself on it by accident.

@Spoopy Scary

Hey let's not be dicks now. I'm sure Blackmist just forgot to read the rules.

[Spoopy Scary]

"Dick" is my trigger word.

Mr. Skeltels don't have dicks. >:(

[Maxx]

"Dick" is my trigger word.

Mr. Skeltels don't have dicks. >:(

@Spoopy Scary

But the word "bone" is right there in it!

@cider I'd suggest that you wait for the timeskip. It should be coming within the next 48 hours, so it won't be that long a wait.

[SepticGentleman]

This has probably already been expected and I'm sorry it's so unceremonious but, I'm out. Shit's not so great right now and I just can't write. You guys take care.

[Maxx]

This has probably already been expected and I'm sorry it's so unceremonious but, I'm out. Shit's not so great right now and I just can't write. You guys take care.

@SepticGentleman

If that's how you feel, then I respect your judgement. Farewell, my friend.

[Spoopy Scary]

Feel free to squat in the OOC and provide viewer commentary. The audience eats that shit up.

[cider]

@cider I'd suggest that you wait for the timeskip. It should be coming within the next 48 hours, so it won't be that long a wait.

@Maxx

Not a problem, I'll do that.

EDIT: If I may offer @Blackmist16 a piece of advice; try reading the opening OOC posts thoroughly and a couple of the accepted sheets before writing your own, to help get a sense of what kind of what style and quality of writing the RP is looking for. As of now, aside from what others have mentioned, you have a large number of grammatical errors that really shouldn't be present in the Advanced section. Do you check your post in Word (or similar word processor)? If not, I'd recommend it. Sure helps me. Perhaps most importantly; make sure a character's personality isn't self-contradicting (or contradicting the history of said character), and rather a natural evolution of the character's experiences and surroundings (as well as throwing in some deeply rooted, highly personal traits). It's perhaps a more challenging process, but much more rewarding as well.

[BurningDaisies]

Friday.

Sometime.

It may happen in an IC thread near you.

_{-- P.S. I hate my company so much right now}

[Maxx]

_{-- P.S. I hate my company so much right now}

@BurningDaisies

Is it a...bad company?

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH

[Spoopy Scary]

stop

[Mixtape Ghost N]

No.

[Maxx]

How's the new sig?

[UrbanEvolution]

How's the new sig?

@Maxx

Kill urself

[Maxx]

<Snipped quote by Maxx>

Kill urself

@UrbanEvolution

Fight me you nerd.

[Dragonbud]

I would also like to fight maxx

[Maxx]

I would also like to fight maxx

@Dragonbud

No. All you need is love DB.

[Spoopy Scary]

<Snipped quote by Dragonbud>

No. All you need is love DB.

@Maxx

[Mixtape Ghost N]

How's the new sig?

@Maxx

Awful.

It doesn't get the Allen J seal of approval.

[swich01]

I popped up a collab post. Might be subject to change but i think its good. The Shade baby likes to keep his PMs mysterious so i think its all cool. Probably. That mysterious loose cannon motherfucker.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

@Dragonbud Accepted.