Aye. Ie am.
lright, was making sure since there was no OOC activity or discussion and such since I announced the IC was going to be done by sunday at the latest hopefully.
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We're just waiting. And besides, no one wants to be 'the guy who floods the OOC'
@Gin
Just a few comments before you're actually done with him so I don't crush you too bad here.
A) A shaman - in the sense it is in this world - is a spiritual healer with the ability to commune with the dead - normally just the nice ones and you can't really inherit 'shaman blood' from a parent. It's a skill, not a blood line.
B) The Kingsguard are chosen specifically for their fighting ability, and do not have children, so he wouldn't be anyone's 'successor' to anything. The Kingsgard are not allowed children either, so if you were ever found to be fucking any woman at all, they can easily exile you for going against the code of honor.
C) Your personality is a little short and 2D; you could flesh him out a little bit more.
D) His biography has no information on his past at all. That has to be changed, since bio's are a requirement and I don't accept 'does not remember' as an answer. He's 32; if he doesn't remember stuff he's brain dead. It should describe how he actually has any powers, since he's human and they traditionally don't have any powers at all.
E) What's a 'First Scout'? The Kingsguard doesn't scout much of anything at all honestly, so I don't really understand that part.
He doesn't sound much like a Kingsguard as you've descried him. On a side note; Jaime would actually just kill him if he tried to go against him
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I did figure I was not going cut it. I am not a skilled writer enough to maintain a high level character such as that which you want of me. Hmmmh, besides as of shamans there are many interpretations of them.
Anyway, I wouldn't be able to muster the strenght to rp this. Sorry, I was too optimistic and ignorant.
No no, I am not sored out. It is just that I am realistic about my ability ey. I won't be able to make good long posts and follow the lines of epic structured rps of this level and even if I involves and invested in this I would do poorly and falter sooner than later bringing down people with my level. :O
No worries really as I said I am being real with myself. :)
@Gin Hey, I won't be writing long posts either. In fact, I quite hope that this rp won't be of such a high level. xD I don't think you'll bring anyone down, really. ^^
Violet is a bit strict with the character creation, but is actually pretty indulgent with other aspects of the rp, including writing style and such. ^^