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Alright, two sections down and five more to go. Should have the whole thing done by tomorrow. Have a good night, all.
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It's done. Dear God, it's massive but it's done. The backstory might be a bit squiffy but I had alot of ground to cover since Kazara/Torchlight has been involved with several divisions. Let me know your thoughts and I'm looking forward to getting this RP going.
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hey sorry guys, I've had exams left right and centre so i haven't really had a chance to do a CS. ill have it posted up in a few hours hopefully
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@Palindromatic Just wanted to let you know that only the Curious Mr. Crowley and Kazara were involved with the divisions. White Hat, also known as Stefan Anderson, was too worried about public opinion and fame so he never officially joined. I apologize for the confusion, but I think it suits Stefan's character better. He did, however, join the Sixth Division as an honorary member to help fight the aliens.
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Just a bit of question, magic is allowed? or do you prefer it be from more of a sci-fi perspective... working on a character at the moment
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Sorry everyone about me being quiet for the past two days. I tend to have those busy days and then the next few days where I catch up with everything all at once. So expect this post to be a long one.



I went ahead and added Vivek to all the character lists without actually telling you that you and Mr. Sudhir are definitely accepted. I like that you took more of a psychogenerative-scientist approach than strictly an action hero route with him. I also love his power and what you did with it. It seems interesting, how Vivek needs that prior knowledge to actually utilize it, and how it limits him so he's not initially all-powerful. And I like that it's not a simple "look what I can do!" deal, that there's actually some in-depth reasoning to how his Matter Manipulation works.

Good job, Yoshi. I'm growing increasingly jealous of everyone's characters, and Vivek doesn't help at all. As a piece of advice: I think you should drop his Matter Manipulation ability. It's garbage. The fact that my character will now have that same ability is irrelevant. I'm just trying to help you.

@Lexicon... I read through ex-Kazara's CS. I felt like I had trouble expressing what I was looking for and wanted the tone of this RP and characters to be, but it's like you understood fully what I mean. My goodness, I am in love with Samantha! Everything, from the idea of The Marked Ones to how she dabbled in fame and gluttony and grew too accustomed to it, it's all just perfect! How she was a coward and fled the battle, how her uncontrollable fame got the better of her, that you decided to have Samantha let herself go. I'm borderline fangirling over Samantha at the moment and am probably coming off as really weird, but, seriously. I love your CS. Samantha/Kelsey is perfect for this RP.

So, naturally, you're not accepted into the RP. Sorry. Better luck next time.

@Grimoire, depending on what this "magic" is and how you explain it, it's allowed. I don't want to limit the characters to only being a strain of mutated humans; there's possibilities in the world. But if you are going with a magic approach, because the idea of magic can border on campy at times, make sure you explain it well.

Otherwise, be as creative and expressive as you want! I look forward to what you're going to come up with.
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@Palindromatic Heya, um, wouldja mind if I asked you to change Alex's title in the Current Members hider to The Tower instead? :o
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@Palindromatic Take your time. It's a lengthy sheet, and I do apologize for that. Let me know what you think :)
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@Palindromatic Really? Darn...lol. Thanks, Palindromatic. I'm glad you like my girl and hopefully she won't be TOO much of a burden to the Seventh Divison. :) Hopefully lol. I'll put her in the other thread after I get off work.

EDIT: Also, when you have a moment, you can add her to the Fourth, Fifth and Sixth Division rosters. The Curious Mr. Crowley should also be part of these divisions.
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For those involved in the 3rd and/or 5th divisions... perhaps it would be wise to get a PM going with me and discuss character relationships?

Just a thought :)
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Alright, I'm going to have my character - Merle Moreau - and her CS up in a jiffy, then I'll have the first IC post up tonight which will shed light on AW1. Sorry for the wait, everyone! It's been almost a week. Hopefully I haven't killed any interest by taking so long.

We're also closed now for more applications. We may open again later on - or if a really surprisingly good CS comes along, there'll be exceptions - but, for IC sake, this group is the nine that survived AW1. Every other character will either be a former member or an entirely new one.

@Palindromatic Really? Darn...lol. Thanks, Palindromatic. I'm glad you like my girl and hopefully she won't be TOO much of a burden to the Seventh Divison. :) Hopefully lol. I'll put her in the other thread after I get off work.

EDIT: Also, when you have a moment, you can add her to the Fourth, Fifth and Sixth Division rosters. The Curious Mr. Crowley should also be part of these divisions.


The more of a burden, the better! I don't imagine everyone will quickly become friends and smoothly transition back into saving the world. The dynamic will hopefully be shaky, untrustworthy, and forced. So Samantha adds a nice touch to this rocky regrouping.

For those involved in the 3rd and/or 5th divisions... perhaps it would be wise to get a PM going with me and discuss character relationships?

Just a thought :)


Good point! Most of the characters know and must have gotten close over the years, so I encourage everyone to discuss relationships with other characters. I'm going to go ahead and do that myself, seeing as my character knew (mostly) everyone.
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I've posted my CS up finally, sorry for the delay. Lets do it
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Alright, my character's CS is up, and now there's no more excuse for me to not finish that IC post. Stay seated and keep your hands inside at all times, folks! This ride is about to start and it'll be a bumpy one!
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Nice character, Palindromatic. Btw, I'm going out of town for a bit next week so the likelihood of me posting is slim to none, sadly. I'll have my intro pos.t up by the week of the 10th. I can play catch-up if need be. Just wanted to give you a head's up
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@Palindromatic – Aaah, it's Tilda Swinton! Be still my heart!

Also, I can't wait for the IC. I'm sure it's going to be rad.


Tilda Swinton. Is there no better candidate for playing a superhero?

Seriously, though. I'd love to see a superhero squad composed of: her, Meryl Streep, Sally Field, Maggie Smith, and Bette Midler. Could you imagine? It would be glorious.

The IC post is coming along nicely. I had a setback when I realized what I was trying to write was, essentially, pure fecal matter. So I had to redo it. But so far it's good. It'll be up soon!

@Lexicon. that's alright if you'll be absent for a bit. It'll all be introductory posts anyway, so you won't miss too much. Thanks for letting me know, though!
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Seriously, though. I'd love to see a superhero squad composed of: her, Meryl Streep, Sally Field, Maggie Smith, and Bette Midler. Could you imagine? It would be glorious.


You forgot Betty White. I would love to see her upholding justice.
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<Snipped quote by Palindromatic>

You forgot Betty White. I would love to see her upholding justice.


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Folks. It is up. I am eight minutes past my deadline, but it has finally been posted. The IC post.

Be warned, it's extremely long. And that's the condensed version, too. I'm still unsatisfied with the ending, so I may tweak it, but for the most part, it is up and I can sleep now.

Enjoy! And get to writing!
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I'm not sure what to write. XD
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