I'll be honest some of the posts felt waaay to long and honestly felt like I was reading a novel like I want to know what everyone's doing but honestly writing something extremely long is just as bad as very short posts....Thats all I'm saying I'm not being negative just saying walls of text make people stop reading things...
Personally, I don't mind. It gives me insight to the player's character. It is your introductory post after all. I'm sure it won't be such a problem later on.
@Happy Go Lucky Hah! Boondocks!