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Relationships, huh?
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I'm a bit iffy about his disability appearing healthy. It seems kind of like taking the emotions and sad background of it without the "ugliness" of the disability. Also, I don't think that Troy's father would safely be able to transform in his study. He would have to be in a completely different house, or a chained, locked basement.


As for the disability, I was having the opposite problem with it in the sense that I had a hard time justifying such a crippling disability when magic exists that can restore bones (Painfully) but rather quickly or human transfiguration capable of doing much greater things. The best I could come up with to hand wave it was that they could at least mask the severity of the deformity with magic, if not cure it entirely.

That being said, I actually like the idea of it being both very apparent and very unseemly much more. I don't mind going back to that idea in the least.

As for the second part, I agree that was a bit ham-fisted in retrospect give me a moment to give a bit more nuanced explanation for how Troy found out.
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@Apokalipse Okay, gave both parts a rewrite.

The leg is highly disfigured, explanations for why magic wouldn't suffice are provided.

The whole scene with his father was redone to be a child overhearing a conversation they weren't supposed too, which not only is more plausible but also more interesting considering Troy wouldn't know nearly as well what is wrong with his father.
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@Apokalipse Okay, gave both parts a rewrite.

The leg is highly disfigured, explanations for why magic wouldn't suffice are provided.

The whole scene with his father was redone to be a child overhearing a conversation they weren't supposed too, which not only is more plausible but also more interesting considering Troy wouldn't know nearly as well what is wrong with his father.


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@Apokalipse Cool beans! How did you feel about the Quidditch position?

I will look more at doing a relationship tab in a bit. I don't really know how far along into the year/how much time our characters would have to meet each other but going off of @Undine's It seems like we have plenty of both.

Considering @Joshua Tamashii's character and mine are in the same grade that seems like a pretty good starting point! Considering the challenges both of them face it would make sense to have them be pretty good friends, to me.
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@Apokalipse Cool beans! How did you feel about the Quidditch position?

I will look more at doing a relationship tab in a bit. I don't really know how far along into the year/how much time our characters would have to meet each other but going off of @Undine's It seems like we have plenty of both.

Considering @Joshua Tamashii's character and mine are in the same grade that seems like a pretty good starting point! Considering the challenges both of them face it would make sense to have them be pretty good friends, to me.


Wait, you're a first year! YAY, AMELIA CAN HAVE A FRIEND HER AGE!

You just have to work around the muteness factor.
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>passes out after finishing long ass post for another RP



>recovers balance

Okay, I'm good.


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Relationships, huh?


Or are we all equal as members of the Proletarian body?
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@Ghost Butt You raise a good point there, I suppose they could be friends in class/study buddies :)
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I dun made one 'o dem 'relationship' tingys!

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Alright :) This is the start to Emily's relationship tab. I will add more over time; this is what I can think off for her and other people so far. I've never done one before, so it might take a while to complete.

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Is it sad that Edgar would see Carlo like Harry saw Malfoy...I sense a great rivalry for the pair
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Is it sad that Edgar would see Carlo like Harry saw Malfoy...I sense a great rivalry for the pair


Every great Harry Potter RP needs a Harry-Draco-esque rivalry. <3
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SEriously, why am I awake? I have had no sleep in 23 hours. Why am I not cuddling with my favorite pillow? I AM NOT IN MY RIGHT MIND WHEN SLEEP-DEPRIVED!

But, I guess--



I shall deal. I don't know how, but

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@Phillirino, I added Troy to my relationship sheet :)



Oh, and I added GIFS to my relationships :D yayyy

Everyone who's made them so far should link it into their character tabs :) because I'm weird and I like looking through them alot ^^"


Cool beans! I like it, I thought there would be a friendship/rivalry there that would be fun to explore. I want to get the a-okay for the quidditch stuff before I really delve into it. If it's not okay (not a biggy considering his youth) I would see Troy as a big fan of yours, despite the house difference.

Will post my own relationship tab in a few.
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Cool beans! I like it, I thought there would be a friendship/rivalry there that would be fun to explore. I want to get the a-okay for the quidditch stuff before I really delve into it. If it's not okay (not a biggy considering his youth) I would see Troy as a big fan of yours, despite the house difference.

Will post my own relationship tab in a few.


I'm okay with the quidditch position. Just be sure not to make him too good at flying.
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I'm okay with the quidditch position. Just be sure not to make him too good at flying.


The idea is the opposite, Show he still has a lot of growing to do as a player and as a person. He has talent, just not a lot of knowledge or actual practice playing the game so he could be tricked very easily with feints and the like. The way I was looking at his skill set in the Quidditch pitch was kind of like this.

Pros:
-Fast, due to his light weight and natural talent he is often the fastest player on the pitch

Cons:
-Less than stellar balance, due to having to have his right leg strapped to the broom he has less finesse and a glaring weakness to being targeted by the other team's bashers.

-Inexperience, he hasn't been around the block like these other players have. If the enemy seeker speeds off as a trick he will fall for it hook line and sinker.

-Bad awareness, this ties into his weakness against Bludgers, he just hasn't had to keep track of so many people and things flying through the air before. This will also be his biggest problem to overcome as a seeker since he obviously has to find the golden snitch.

I was thinking the only reason he got on the team is that the old seeker graduated and left the team without anyone that really fit the bill. Though it is a long shot to put Troy in that position they are more counting on next year or even the year after to come back into form. Of course this isn't going to make the young impressionable boy any happier when he gets handled by the other two seekers.
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The idea is the opposite, Show he still has a lot of growing to do as a player and as a person. He has talent, just not a lot of knowledge or actual practice playing the game so he could be tricked very easily with feints and the like. The way I was looking at his skill set in the Quidditch pitch was kind of like this.

Pros:
-Fast, due to his light weight and natural talent he is often the fastest player on the pitch

Cons:
-Less than stellar balance, due to having to have his right leg strapped to the broom he has less finesse and a glaring weakness to being targeted by the other team's bashers.

-Inexperience, he hasn't been around the block like these other players have. If the enemy seeker speeds off as a trick he will fall for it hook line and sinker.

-Bad awareness, this ties into his weakness against Bludgers, he just hasn't had to keep track of so many people and things flying through the air before. This will also be his biggest problem to overcome as a seeker since he obviously has to find the golden snitch.

I was thinking the only reason he got on the team is that the old seeker graduated and left the team without anyone that really fit the bill. Though it is a long shot to put Troy in that position they are more counting on next year or even the year after to come back into form. Of course this isn't going to make the young impressionable boy any happier when he gets handled by the other two seekers.


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