[OOC] BIONICLE

[Windicator]

@Argetlam350 Not that I was early in saying this but it's intended to not have overlapping elements and we also use the elements outside of the 6 usually featured ones.

I'm just throwing this around here because I don't know if you did know nor how well you read and or interpreted the OOC post.

If you need to read about the other elements I'd recommend Biosector01

[Argetlam350]

Got it, well working on something hopefully done by tomorrow.

[tobiax]

Alright, glad to hear.

[tobiax]

Thanks for making a post @DFTBA. I appreciate it.

[tobiax]

@Argetlam350 You still up for this?

[Argetlam350]

Yeah sorry just got busy but yeah nearly finished will be up tonight.

EDIT:

Almost done, sorry got the main structure done but tough deciding on where I wanted to have him come from, and his currently powerless mask.

[tobiax]

That's alright. You should probably just get the CS done first and not worry about the IC for now.

[Argetlam350]

Name: Tyro

Element: Plasma (I see Marshmallow has claimed it but at the same time seeing how there last post was a month well, just assuming they might of dropped at the moment but if they come back I can change it or if you wish me to do so)

Mask: Kanohi Miru, Mask of Levitation (Currently Powerless)
- Similar design of Toa Lewa's mask when he was a Toa Mata except color wise it is white and it is more rounded then having the sharp curves.

Gender: Male
Appearance: He stands about average height with his other Su-Matoran, with the top half of his body mostly being white with a few black stripes across his chest and on his arms, while the bottom half is orange along with his hands. Eyes are yellow in color.

Occupation: Inventor\Scrap Collector

Description: A Su-Matoran in Su-Congro of average height, who goes through his days scavenging around, looking for valuable scrap or items he believes he can used for varying projects of his or that sedate his curious nature. Primarily his living comes from the scrap he collects to melt down and ship back out to the other cities with him keeping few of the melted down materials but he has high hopes he can invent something someday that might be of use to other matoran. Of course trying to invent new things can lead one into trouble when a prototype doesn't go as well as one hopes. He tries to remain optimistic however and keeps trying despite his failures. Though he is comfortable in Su-Congro he wouldn't mind one day to leave it's borders and see other parts of Kongero Nui and meet the other kind of matoran.
Tools:
-Set of claw like tools to help dig through scrap.
-Prototype blaster but its currently broken after a failed attempt at using it on a scrap pile to test it but he thinks it can be his first helpful device. A smelter on the go so to speak if he can get it to work.

Relationships: n/a he doesn't really know much of anyone outside of Su-Congro having rarely traveled outside of its boundries.

Journal: n/a

(If you have anything you want to write down, like character thoughts/reflections, put them here.)
Bag:
-Various pieces of scrap
-A few widgets

[tobiax]

While there are some good ideas, and nothing's a technical issue except his digging claws would be his tools, and I do like the use of a Kanohi Miru, the personality seems, well... it seems like either there's not enough detail, or you're trying to have one of everything and basically do anything? I don't know. Also nothing, like, stood out, persay? Like I couldn't pick out an idea and say anything about it, not that there aren't ideas, just not one that stands out?

[Windicator]

Bag:
-Set of claw like tools to help dig through scrap piles.
-Various pieces of scrap that some might see as junk but he sees potential for something useful.
-A few widgets.

@Argetlam350

-Various pieces of scrap that some might see as junk but he sees potential for something useful.

@Argetlam350

he sees potential for something useful.

@Argetlam350

MacGyver or Deus ex machina?

Surely that's a character but (not that I have any room to say) it seems just a little bland and short of personality.

There could also be the possibility of to tie your and my characters together (mine being a Smith and your the supplier(at least as one idea)).
If we plan to tie them together, I can both get you in the loop in the story in my next post (and that'd not even be all out of the blue though) We can take this to the PM if it needs further discussion (as to not clog up the ooc)

[tobiax]

I share the same initial issues, but don't see him needing to be a tie-in. Also because most slag/resources is being re-routed to Ta-Congro recently. Rutau's supplier of ore/metal would either be from Fa-Congro, Onu-Congro, or Ba-Congro.

[Windicator]

I share the same initial issues, but don't see him needing to be a tie-in. Also because most slag/resources is being re-routed to Ta-Congro recently. Rutau's supplier of ore/metal would either be from Fa-Congro, Onu-Congro, or Ba-Congro.

@tobiax

ok, just came offered a possible tie in. your call about what happens in the world though.

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[tobiax]

I noticed. Not problematic.

[Argetlam350]

The scrap is simply scrap I honestly don't see it serving purpose in the long run of things but you asked what was in the bag so I obliged with saying scrap because of scavenging. He might find it useful but with the whole toa thing factoring in I don't see him keeping it once we reach that point.

I can add more to the personality I'll admit, like I've stated before it's just been hectic with work. Retail this time of year gets crazy.

[Windicator]

The scrap is simply scrap I honestly don't see it serving purpose in the long run of things but you asked what was in the bag so I obliged with saying scrap because of scavenging. He might find it useful but with the whole toa thing factoring in I don't see him keeping it once we reach that point.

I can add more to the personality I'll admit, like I've stated before it's just been hectic with work. Retail this time of year gets crazy.

@Argetlam350

For that matter, being a upcoming toa of iron, I can presume that the salvage is or at least has majorly metal of sort and if still carried while we become toa I could think how that would play into discovering Rauta's power over metal.

[Argetlam350]

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For that matter, being a upcoming toa of iron, I can presume that the salvage is or at least has majorly metal of sort and if still carried while we become toa I could think how that would play into discovering Rauta's power over metal.

@Windicator

True that could be interesting when we reach that point.

EDIT:

I've done some rework on the CS.

[tobiax]

It's a bit better. @Argetlam350
So, how's everyone done.

[Windicator]

It's a bit better. @Argetlam350
So, how's everyone done.

@tobiax

If been fine and keep doing so if a little busy for today and tomorrow. Aside from that I'll get to get some time off after weekend.

[tobiax]

Made a post! Not a lot, but it's something.

[tobiax]

How's everyone doing?