[OOC] The Corrigan School for Advanced Learning and Development (A DC School RP)

[Blue Demon]

@Weird TalesIt's a shame I can't find any old school comic panels when aqualad runs outta water. :D

Other than this

or this, Full of Super!Dickery

[Weird Tales]

@Weird TalesIt's a shame I can't find any old school comic panels when aqualad runs outta water. :D

Other than this

or this, Full of Super!Dickery

@Blue Demon

I don't care what anyone else says, Silver Age DC was hilarious and so much fun lol

[King Kindred]

@Weird TalesIt's a shame I can't find any old school comic panels when aqualad runs outta water. :D

Other than this

or this, Full of Super!Dickery

@Blue Demon

But... the water...

[Blue Demon]

We need a scene like this now.

[Weird Tales]

We need a scene like this now.

@Blue Demon

Maybe, but I whale would be cool too.

[Wade Wilson]

We need a scene like this now.

@Blue Demon

Well the character I'm making is practically the lab-born Kid Flash with a touch of god-knows-what, so yeah. (That's gonna be the finished process, editing my sheet now. It's just a beta anyway). Either way, your dream might become a reality.

[Avanhelsing]

@ArtifactCreator
It's a shockingly fitting gif if you think about it.

[Natsu]

Welp, first post is out. Constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated, if you care to give it.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

Awful lot of people in the Mess Hall.

And here I was trying to be subversive and show off my character's power in the first post. lol

[ChildHoodRuined]

Where am I? Oh, I'm here for.

A book is suddenly already dropped on my desk.
And THIS is how you start classes?

[Blue Demon]

Awful lot of people in the Mess Hall.

And here I was trying to be subversive and show off my character's power in the first post. lol

@Mr Allen J

Kyle slipped in and slipped out. ;) He's just too cool for these fools.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

Kyle slipped in and slipped out.

@Blue Demon

ooooh, the fun we could have if I take this out of context.

[Blue Demon]

<Snipped quote by Blue Demon>

ooooh, the fun we could have if I take this out of context.

@Mr Allen J

Lots of things I say are risque out of context. ;)

[Mixtape Ghost N]

Does anyone want to do anything with Tanya? To be honest, sticking her into the mess hall right now might be a little contrived, so I think she'll do her own thing.

@Blue Demon Maybe something with Kyle?

[Avanhelsing]

Jack: Shapeshifters have all the fun...

[Blue Demon]

Does anyone want to do anything with Tanya? To be honest, sticking her into the mess hall right now might be a little contrived, so I think she'll do her own thing.

@Blue Demon Maybe something with Kyle?

@Mr Allen J

Well, Kyle is currently hustling from the Mess Hall to the Quad. If you want to have her go there. I did have plans for Kyle to run/bump/be bumped into there. So Tanya could be apart of that kerfuffle.

And apparently my phone doesn't have spell check... :|

EDIT: And spellchecked. Since I picked my butt off the sofa and into my bedroom :)

[Weird Tales]

finished my CS

[Lord Wraith]

@Weird Tales Overall I like the character, but there's two things that bother me, the surfboard and the trident. The trident especially bothers me as the Sample Post indicates that Jason's abilities are a blessing from the Hawaiian gods, but the Trident is a Greek weapon. My suggestion to you would be to look up Hawaiian/Polynesian/Samoan weapons and choosing something that would be more thematically appropriate. The surfboard on the other hand just seems redundant with Jason's strength and swimming speed. As there's no mention of his stamina, I suppose it could be argued that he needs the board to reserve it, but over the course of the RP he'd have very few chances to truly use the surfboard. Remember this RP is set around the adventures of the group at a school, it's not a Teen Titans RP where they're going to be sent off on missions.

Aside from those two gripes, you'll need to double check the rules as you're missing a small something from your notes before I can accept the character.

[Avanhelsing]

I would post but I am still waiting for the un holy pimp slap from S'tann...

[Weird Tales]

@Weird Tales Overall I like the character, but there's two things that bother me, the surfboard and the trident. The trident especially bothers me as the Sample Post indicates that Jason's abilities are a blessing from the Hawaiian gods, but the Trident is a Greek weapon. My suggestion to you would be to look up Hawaiian/Polynesian/Samoan weapons and choosing something that would be more thematically appropriate. The surfboard on the other hand just seems redundant with Jason's strength and swimming speed. As there's no mention of his stamina, I suppose it could be argued that he needs the board to reserve it, but over the course of the RP he'd have very few chances to truly use the surfboard. Remember this RP is set around the adventures of the group at a school, it's not a Teen Titans RP where they're going to be sent off on missions.

Aside from those two gripes, you'll need to double check the rules as you're missing a small something from your notes before I can accept the character.

@Lord Wraith

I edited the sheet and changed his weapon to a spear. Just to make things clear, his surfboard can travel on land in a way similar to a hoverboard so it will work outside of water and I gave him the surfboard since it travel further without using up his stamina. Also I added what was missing into sheet.