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Alright, pinging everyone who has yet to write something over here. @Dextkiller@yoshua171@FantasyChic@Harbringer@Dead Cruiser@Feanor@Dawnscroll, all systems are GO!

@Guilty Spark: Mm, that's something I do want to hear about although I'm not particularly sure of how relevant it will be to the roleplay. :P

@Tuujaimaa, enlighten us? Even if it's likely not going to be important in the roleplay, what do you have figured about the Order of the Skyward Eye?
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I'll make a few small edits to Let then post him up as soon as I get the chance.
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@yoshua171: Alright! Yeah, Lyrsaeyn in his edited state will be acceptable. Ring edits are fine, sword can stay, etc.
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@ravenDivinity Oh he didn't actually do that it's the myths that blew it all out of proportion. In truth the nation is a city state kind of thing and was built on a volcano. Mark was able to cause it to erupt and as volcanoes can the layer of lava that erupted over time built a mountain.

Working on getting specific myths and stories right now though. I have a big over arching idea of him going and pledging to an old god of balance/nature who's basic role is to give everything it's rise and fall. Of course humans not liking the falling part stopped worshiping the god and that's why the world is so unstable in Mark's time. He starts with taking back wild lands, and after that he has more specific myths where he is defending certain sites and things as well as those of him in the wilds with those who now follow the old god again. I want this nice dichotomy where to those who aligned with him he is this folk hero who could heal a lame ox with a magic salve and that the nations remember this cold beastmaster that'd arrive under the full moon and behead the king.

It's been harder than expected to get from all my notes to solid writing. Especially when I see how great everyone else has theirs formatted. Mine is always just so plain and ugly...
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@jasonwolf: Ah okay! Just make the distinction between fact and fiction reasonably clear. It'll make your character sheet easier to grade. :P

And as for quality, I think you can do it! If it takes that extra mile to get it somewhere good, I believe you can take that step.
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@jasonwolf My formatting is basically just the formatting from the OP, if you look to the upper right of each post there's a "View Raw" button, I hit that before copy-pasting the sheet.
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@Guilty Spark hmm so that's what that means. I've been doing forum RP for about a decade, but I'm rather new to this site.

@ravenDivinity I think I have it fairly clear. Need be I can easily add less dramatic explainations of the truth.

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The legends are numerous. One of his first stories comes from the western coasts. A massive ironwood forest grew there the trees thousands of years old. When a kingdom began to chop them down to build an even larger navy Mark traveled there. Hundreds of men used steel axes to slowly chop away at the ancient woods. It had stood for ages to protect the land keeping it from falling into the sea. The fools didn’t even realize what they did, but for coin they didn’t care. Men began to vanish. When found again they were mauled and their axes gone. One morning all the axes were discovered piled up in the center of the lumber camp and a man standing before them in a long cloak.

“You have one chance to leave this land.” He warned, but none took head.

A flame fell from the sky and the pile exploded with fire. The man vanished into the smoke as the fire spread and consumed the men and their camp. The Ironwoods ever strong stood while everything else burned.

(The axes were soaked in oil and above Boreas held a torch. When the smoke was heavy Boreas swooped down and grabbed Mark carrying him off.)
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@jasonwolf: It's not necessary to tone down the dramatic aspects of myths. What I mean is that it would do good to introduce them as myths or disputable theories.
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@ravenDivinity Alright I think I just need the content then. The one I've used as example is the only one I have finished of the tales that might be told. I have the starting Myth of him basically restoring wilderness as a less detailed part as it's very long term slow and repetitive. He'd go to a fort in the wilderness force them out and set up a town for those who would follow the old god so on and so forth.

I'm trying to come up with a good scenario for him helping those in the wilds right now.
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Ok so I'm still working. I need to put down the abilities and have more for the myths I just need to see it here. Makes it much easier to work for me.

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I am here, will get to work when able
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Is this open for those you didn't mention? Either way, I got ahead of myself and started xD
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@LancerOfBlue: Yeeeeah, the mention bomb isn't supposed to be like "oh, there's a set number of spots and they belong to these people," it's more like "these people expressed interest and i'm letting them know about the thread being posted." So, yeah, it's still open to join. Maybe I should've made it a little more obvious.
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Oh okay, thank you! I'll get working to my character and chisel something nice, until then!
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A man shall begin work on his Character Sheet.
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Hey! Sorry, Here I am. Been busy most the day. Will be bringing my character over in a bit!
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Aaaaand here's Daen!



Edit: Also, @Torack your character must have a new.. Lee-se on life ;D
Was that reference too obscure? We'll find out!
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@Dextkiller He definitely does! It's a new opportunity for him to Lee-Sin to his favourite songs, innit.
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@ravenDivinity @Guilty Spark

Sure thing!

The Order of the Skyward Eye were essentially a group of monastic historians each of whom dedicated their lives to recording and chronicling important events that shaped Ansus' history. Being as ancient as they are, I had left it sort of open ended as to whether or not the order survived, but anyone else who wishes to have them have taken interest in delving into the history of their characters is more than welcome to do so!

I'd envisioned them as having this massive ivory tower with enough libraries to make a bookworm faint in happiness that largely kept them out of the way of mortal affairs, so it is conceivable that even after almost 50,000 years they could still be around if they had had the assistance of some strapping heroes to keep them safe!

I don't really have any more specific detail than that, but I'm happy to share the reigns around if anyone's interested in developing the concept.
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