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American Dream: Shattered Union

United We Stand, Divided We Fall





"My country tis of thee,
Lost land in anarchy,
Of thee I weep.

Land where our fathers died,
Land of our fallen pride.
From every sea side,
Oh save us please."





IC

No one really knows how it all started, but humanity finally destroyed itself. Every day new tales of horror and war while every night people prayed to see the daylight once more. The endless cycles of war, destruction, poverty had finally took its toil on people around the work as they protested and revolted against their governments. Soon, there was no nations left standing, nothing that what could have been called a proper nation anyways. Europe was reduced to fractured kingdoms, Russia had been lost to the snow, Africa was scared by a myriad of warlords while various dynasties and leaders rose in China all claiming to be the true inheritors of the land.

As for America, the once great nation had closed its doors for the first time in over 200 years. But like all other great nations, she too fell. The collapse sparked hundreds of new entities, fighting for power in the new vacuum left by the fallen government. No more was there a union of states and people, the American dream had died with its 47th and last president and with it left a wasteland.

However, man is not alone on this world anymore. With the infinite number of WMDs that had been dropped, the world has changed. New monsters called Grimm now roam the landscape, hellbent on exacting vengeance upon mankind for its greatest sin against nature. But then there are those changed by the mutations, those who exhibit inhuman or superhuman traits from everyone else. Known by many different names, polite and derogatory, the umbrella term for them is Evols. However, these Evols are almost universally looked at with horror or distain as they can turn into suddenly feral beasts or look too different for most to feel comfortable around them; some of the more superstitious folk say that they are the root of all evil and must be purged to reform America.

Now 50 years after the world ended and America collapsed, factions from coast to coast look into the sky and set out on the journey to claim their destiny, to reunited a shattered union.





OOC


Welcome to Shattered Union, an NRP set in a post apocalyptic America where the idea of government barely exists on what we'd call a state level today. The world has gone through a massively destructive war in an attempt to seemingly drive humanity to extinction; nukes, biochemicals, fire, everything man has created up to this point was used. America, like so many other former nations, had isolated itself and is now fractured, splintered and unrecognizable. Warlords, monarchs, presidents, and chiefs now rule from east to west, creating new factions, nations and tribes in their own image and interpretations of America.

One major point I would like to make is that this will most likely be a rather dark NRP; there are no demons but no one is a saint. Everyone in the wasteland follows some perverted, bastardized version of American ideals, some more zealously than others. Remember, there is no light which casts no shadow. However, that does not mean there cannot be lighthearted nations or events, you can have post apoc cowboys or revolutionary-era militaries but just keep them somewhat serious. The best way to describe this would be like Madoka Magika; looks harmless but can get dark real quick.







Inspirations from: Fallout, 40k, Mad Max, 1984, The Purge, Bloodborne, Valkyria Tales, X-Men, Vic2, EU4, Wolfenstien, etc.




RULES

  • Standard Guild rules
  • Keep arguing, bitching and dramatics to PM lest you want me to shove my fist into your ass
  • Special point about politics; try to keep irl politics out of this. With a setting like this, its going to get messy if people start yelling about politics
  • My word as GM is law, my decisions are final and rules may change without prior warning.. This also extends to the poor sods people I choose as co-GMs
  • Be balanced and creative! Seriously this is one of my pet peeves when someone half asses an NS and makes an OP faction or gives me carbon copied bland
  • Shit's going to be grimdark but it has limits. Yes there are going to be things considered somewhat taboo but make sure you keep a lid on it before it gets to out of control. I don't mind violence or cursing but if your faction has some more... discriminatory traits, DO NOT over do it. It will get messy for all people involved. (If you somehow get something sexual going guild rules force me to say keep it to PMs. Damn >_>)
  • There is no "true victory". Even if you conquer everyone else, you will fall to the same trap that the original US government did, you need external allies to help you and reform the US and its states. Remember, united we stand divided we fall. (tl;dr this will be more story-based and you cannot win by yourself).
  • Even if IC posts slow down, at least stick around in the OOC. I don't really mind if it gets off topic either.
  • Writing level will be at about high casual aka advanced but even if you have a single paragraph post, that's still good as long as its good.
  • Please use tinypic to post claims and maps, my computer disagrees with imgur and some other sites :\
  • Have fun! No, seriously do have fun. Why else do you RP if you don't have fun with it? :3





NATION SHEET

(Fill this out at your own leisure or as you need it. Just remember to fill something out in the NS if you're going to mention it IC like going on the warpath but lacking any military info on the NS. Also please put your NS app into the OOC, the Chars tab is for the approved ones.)




CLAIMS MAP


(If anyone can produce a better version of a map like this, I would be thankful)
(Do try to stay on the continental USA)
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Here's the OOC which I'm tagging all you in! :D
Please post NS and other stuff in here from now on.

Also, anyone want to be co-GM?
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Awesome.

Here's a map with the territory I wanted to claim marked.



I'm going to disappear to do some research so I can write up a proper federation of Indian nations. Y'know, with peoples of different backgrounds and beliefs being forced to work together and not being happy about it.
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Post sheets here first?
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Post sheets here first?


Yup ^^
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CS follows.

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@Byrd Man Seems good. Just upload your claims via tinypic if you could. I've stated that my computer dislike imgur, sorry :\
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Alright, that shit is changed, fam.
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Finally got my own NS up shamefru dispray on having the GM's be up third @_@.
I'd also like to ask people to go and see if I had fucked up somewhere and basically look it over, as unorthodox as it may sound for a GM to ask of that; for balancing purposes funnily enough
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Well...

Terrain: What is the climate of the place you now live in. With all the WMDs that were chucked around, its possible that the climate can be thrown off, but don't just turn Texas into a winter wonderland.
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Might need to fix that. Say a bit about the climate of Sylvania. Haven't gotten a chance to get a real look as I'm writing my own thing.
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Well...

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Might need to fix that. Say a bit about the climate of Sylvania. Haven't gotten a chance to get a real look as I'm writing my own thing.


Just fixed that. Can't believe I forgot about that pat >_>
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Here's the OOC which I'm tagging all you in! :D
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Also, anyone want to be co-GM?


I wouldn't mind being Co-GM.
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@Trigani
Looks good, can I ask what is the slave population though? Evols don't have enough numbers to rival the slave population of the actual CSA.
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@Trigani
Looks good, can I ask what is the slave population though? Evols don't have enough numbers to rival the slave population of the actual CSA.


I didn't mean they were the primary slave race, I should have worded that differently. I just used it to describe the negativity towards Evols. But! The slave population would probably be million-half?
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I didn't mean they were the primary slave race, I should have worded that differently. I just used it to describe the negativity towards Evols. But! The slave population would probably be million-half?


Alrighty I guess. Just be careful with your writing and you're all set ^^
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Alrighty I guess. Just be careful with your writing and you're all set ^^


I'll just edit it before I toss it in the Characters.
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Yeah, I'm not happy about this flag of mine at all. I tried to incorporate a few actual flag elements from the Navajo, Topi, and Zuni without, y'know, making a version of them that gets the wrong message across.

I was tempted to put in a rainbow instead of coloring in the central circle, but it looked even weirder to me.

Anyway, here's my submission. Let me know what needs changing. I left the "Other important characters" section for future editing.

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@Shorticus
Very well written NS. I'm impressed.
Getting a very dwarven vibe from it all, definitely unique.

My only concern is the population to food production ratio.
I assume that most people have their own little garden and that foodstuffs is rationed to some degree?
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@Shorticus
Very well written NS. I'm impressed.
Getting a very dwarven vibe from it all, definitely unique.

My only concern is the population to food production ratio.
I assume that most people have their own little garden and that foodstuffs is rationed to some degree?


Concerning food: yeah, there's definitely rationing, and there's definitely a little bit of a food problem. Nobody eats REALLY WELL, but people eat and survive. It's a problem they'll have to tackle.

As noted, there are some big farms and ranches and hunting grounds, all government owned. The idea is that people from the community actually join in and help get the food, and then they also have their own little private gardens and the like.

The dwarven feel is basically just me trying to show off how cool the Pueblo architecture is, especially that of the Ancient Pueblos. (If anyone tells you they're called the Anasazi, don't listen. That actually means "ancient enemy" or something like that.)

EDIT: Oh - am I free to post my NS in the character section? I can add a note under Resources about food being a little tight.

EDIT 2: I also wouldn't be averse to reducing the population number (and subsequently the military number). Any preference on this?
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