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I'm sure they would if they were able to find the time. A visual would at least help place where everyone is, at least that's how I think. Oda does it when One Piece starts to get too chaotic and it helps me.



Sometimes you don't realize how ugly something is until you're about to show it to other people, but there's my crude example of a crude map. The blue boxes are the ships, the big thing is the base, and the lightning bolt is to indicate Mustang is engaging the knight. I'm sure there are better programs for something like this but you get the general idea.

Functionally I guess it's no different than a summery of what's happening.
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I dunno about everyone else but I'm ready for a change of scenery. Who wants to duke it up in the mushroom kingdom for example? xD


I'd like to interact with the other PCs soon, but not too many.
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I'm sure the battle shall end soon.
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The idea with the map is the one I was thinking of. I've GMed large-scale war RPs before, and the map ALWAYS was a good idea. Especially as I DID read all the IC, and I STILL didn't get a clear picture of what is going on...there don't seem to be any NPCs left though.
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@Cruallassar, so, what are your thoughts on the Mon Alliance?
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The idea with the map is the one I was thinking of. I've GMed large-scale war RPs before, and the map ALWAYS was a good idea. Especially as I DID read all the IC, and I STILL didn't get a clear picture of what is going on...there don't seem to be any NPCs left though.


Yeah, good point.

Who wants to make a map?
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@Gentlemanvaultboy made one, but I can't see it right now. Network is too slow right now
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@Gentlemanvaultboy made one, but I can't see it right now. Network is too slow right now


its not finished at all.
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Aha. Maybe I can make one in a little bit
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Guess it's ... A bad day to be a NPC

They're going faster than seals during Shark Week
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I think I will post soon
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@Nightknight, got my OOC post about the Mon Alliance helping your second char out?
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@Letter Bee My second character hasn't been approved yet, and sure, you can help out Doomborg once he gets approved, but if you want him to be dedicated to your cause, it will take a bit of coaxing.
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@Nightknight, ah, and thanks. Arceus and Persona!Izanami would probably be happy to help improve Pluto, as they are 'Gods' themselves.
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Where is the second character?
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@Absolis Page 43, Post 13 on the OOC
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I am looking at it. Apologies for the wait.
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@Absolis To be honest, I wanted to make a few edits, such as saying that since the ice was magical in nature it would be stronger than regular ice, or that he can get more creative with his cyromancy to do stuff like create ice spike mines or something of that nature (Think that episode of full metal alchemist where Envy kept getting impaled with ice), assuming of course, this stuff isn't already implied.
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Ok, everything looks good with your CS except

Fungal Spreader: Doomborg can release posionous spores that targets the nervous system, causing short term paralysis if exposed, or death if prolonged. Doomborg has learned to control the level of toxicity, can relase or hold it back at will, can increase fungus growth and render the toxin non-lethal but still retain its stunning effect. He can accelerate the growth of his fungi to the point where they reach maturaty in a matter of seconds and then can release more spores. This fungi can survive even the vacuum of space, but withers in places with high tempretures like hot deserts. He can also use the fungi to regenerate any injuries inflicted to him.


Every thing else about it is OK, but that in particular has some pretty interesting implications. From how you have it sounding, it seems like your person could effectively be nigh invulnerable within a matter of seconds.

Now if that's not what you intended, that's fine. But the implication is there, so perhaps you could balance it out a bit?

Perhaps making it only regenerate surface wounds?
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The cyromancy is fine. Everything else is fine except what I mentioned.
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