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@Infichi: Accepted.


awesome i look forward to this
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I hope Van is acceptable
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This bio is for a major NPC. Do not take this as something that would be accepted. ^^;

  • Name: Tomoko. Her surname is not provided.
  • Hero Name: Disintegrator
  • Age: 30. However, she appears about nine or ten.
  • Gender: Female
  • Appearance: Tomoko has pale blue hair and red eyes. Her skin is extremely pale, and her clothing is a black dress.
  • Superhero Appearance: Exactly the same as usual.
  • Personality: Tomoko the Disintegrator has something of a reputation as an enormously terrifying figure. If you were to meet her, however, you would find she's a rather abrasive, irritable, immature girl. One would never assume that she is actually a grown woman, to say the least. She certainly doesn't physically look grown. She hates having her small stature and immature appearance used as an insult. Calling her a brat will lead to her likely psychically slamming the offender to the wall and loudly berating them. Tomoko enjoys being complimented for her abilities in defeating evil, but hates being talked down to in any manner. She also hates unsolicited assistance, even if she actually does need help. Tomoko is frequently bored and irritable due to the restrictions placed on her movements and deployment, hanging around at the underground facility serving as her home, or at SUPER headquarters, complaining and mocking the people there. Tomoko is dismissive towards her fellow heroes and holds little outward respect for them, though she does not hesitate to help them if she has been deployed and they are in danger. Indeed, despite of her attitude, Tomoko is dedicated to defending innocent people and her fellow heroes. As abrasive as she is, she does care. About people. Unfortunately, one of the things keeping Tomoko's deployment rate so low is that she has a tendency to cause large amounts of property damage due to her blatant disregard for cars, sidewalks, buildings, satellites... though she does insist it was a defunct satellite. Tomoko is highly boastful of her abilities as well, hating being ignored. Tomoko likes sweets and hates footwear.
  • Equipment: Nothing but the dress she wears.
  • Abilities: Tomoko is an enormously powerful Esper. Specifically, she is the strongest telekinetic in the entire world, her gigantic amount of psychic power allowing her to perform incredible feats. Tomoko can effortlessly float and telekinetically shield herself, as well as easily lift massive objects without any exertion. In fact, she can lift large numbers of huge objects without much effort, or move people about using her telekinesis. Her telekinetic abilites cause a hazy blue aura to appear, stronger the more power she is using. Tomoko can use telekinesis to fly extremely quickly, stop attacks, manipulate items, and generally be nightmarish in a fight. Exertion can get to her, however, and extreme strength can resist her telekinetic abilities. Other psychic abilities can also be used against her, though she will effortlessly outpower any enemy telekinetics. Tomoko's power is so great that pulling a satellite from orbit is an effortless action for her. She can even manipulate particles with enough focus and effort, turning photons around to reflect lasers. This also allows her to manipulate molecules when given time to focus. This is what gave her the name "Disintegrator" as she has separated the molecules of a monster in order to utterly dissolve them. She has only been able to do this once, but it left quite an impression. Tomoko's power is so great there are a vast amount of limitations on her movements and deployment as a hero.
  • Skills: Tomoko has little in the way of life skills in general. SUPER operatives handle her care.
  • Brief Backstory: The past of the hero known as Disintegrator is left a private matter at her request, though it is rumored that she was taken from her family at a young age by another organization, and only later found by SUPER. As of now, she is one of the world's eight EX-Rank heroes, and one of three in Japan. Her enormous power and potential for destruction resulted in severe restrictions being placed on her activities, demanded by certain governments in the world. She may only be deployed when necessary, and is rarely cleared to leave her home for extended periods of time. Tomoko lives in a facility underground, connected to SUPER headquarters. She has violated the restrictions on superhero actions once, during a period of extreme boredom, defeating a robot army by telekinetically disassembling them. She has made multiple violations of general movement restrictions before.
  • Hero Rank: EX-Rank Blue
  • Theme Song: TBA(Seriously I'm having trouble even starting to find something)


@Leaves: Hmm, I'll get GS's thoughts, and if she approves he'll be in... though what you filled in for skills should be under abilities. Skills are for things you learn and know how to do, abilities are powers and stuff like that.

@Weird Tales: Still need to talk things over with GS.
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She looks familiar...
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Oh gee how did you figure out my inspiration where could you possibly have gotten that conclusion from. D:

Also, um, going out, so GS will be the only GM here for a bit. ^^;
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so i take it i post my dude in the character section now? :3
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Yep, that's how you do it.
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And here's my evil character.

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That's... more of a monster, sorry. ^^; Monsters aren't playable.
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That's... more of a monster, sorry. ^^; Monsters aren't playable.


Can I still play him as a character though? If anything I can change some stuff... he's intelligent afterall, and capable of speech like a human so.
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I imagine it could be a costume the real human always wears.
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You'd have to make him more human, basically.
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@VitaVitaAR Awwww really? Could I change him to be some sort of shape shifter? Have this be what he can turn into?
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That works out much better actually.

I'd also remind you another big distinction is supercriminals need to be able to interact with other characters, which is one major reason monsters aren't acceptable. With VERY few exceptions they're pretty murder-minded. ^^;
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That works out much better actually.

I'd also remind you another big distinction is supercriminals need to be able to interact with other characters, which is one major reason monsters aren't acceptable. With VERY few exceptions they're pretty murder-minded. ^^;


Well my original plan was to actually have him ally with other criminals too. Think of him as Ridley from Metroid. He may look like a murderous animal, but he's actually very smart and strategic and can be ordered around.
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In-universe he'd probably qualify as a monster, though.

Monsters are only given supercriminal rankings and treated as such under a very narrow set of circumstances. Even the extreme few non-violent monsters are still ranked as monsters.
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In-universe he'd probably qualify as a monster, though.

Monsters are only given supercriminal rankings and treated as such under a very narrow set of circumstances. Even the extreme few non-violent monsters are still ranked as monsters.


Ah ok. I'll edit to include a human base and change the story slightly.
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Alrighty then.
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And I added in some additional stuff regarding his humanity.
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Okay, going to get GS's opinion on this one too, ultimately. She'll be on later.

... Will point out you spelled IQ as HQ though. ^^;
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