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Im sure i killed General Fenix off ages ago.
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@Kurai Assassin lol well shoot. Do you want me to use another name then?
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Still waiting for Remipa to hit on a few things before I proceed.
Also as you know I spent time with dear old dad, and yes my brother was there with his girl.
She's not bad I suppose. Although I don't know what she see in him. ;P
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Free hour of wifi yay

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Music inspired by @BlackPanther IMO:

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@The Grey Dust I'm glad you got to spend some time with family today.
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Heyy, can I still join? ( scrolls around, hey some known names from other RP, Nice)
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@Ojo chan 42 Yes you may. I need to see a character sheet in the OC tab for what you want to play. Both Grey and I have to approve, and then you're in.
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I am going to admit, a lot of those notes went missing over the last... I can't remember how long. But Deon's resources are not unlimited, it's been hinted at that he has used up about everything he has to get this done. Though I supposed with you controlling UK and all you get to have final say on how successful Deon's plan was. In basics he just wants to cause a lot of Distrust between vampires and humans. Even if costing his own life in the long run.

I am also going to say, sorry for not responding, weekends are generally more busy for me then most days, and I am really tired right now... so if I am missing information sorry. Also sorry for not bringing any of this up with you, that was a poor choice on my part.
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@Kurai Assassin lol well shoot. Do you want me to use another name then?


It's cool, I'll just go with it lol
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@Kurai Assassin, I was just thinking. Kate is a very small girl compared to Vlad. Are your characters devoid of fear or suicidal? You also might want to give Grey a chance to post. He's been looking for an opening.
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It is part of Kate's character that she has nothing left to lose. Her old life was taken from her as well as her lover. She has no fear because if she dies there is no one to care, no one would miss her but should she die it will help their cause or give them a Martyr to rise up against those who seek to break the Compact
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Just read the wait to post
Dang it
Apologies >.<

Hopefully I left an opening that is able to allow grey in there

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@Wraithblade6 @The Grey Dust I hope she will be alright, if I have to make any changes, PM me, so we don't have to spamm the entire treath.


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@The Grey Dust Btw I still need your opinion on my character idea ^^
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Interesting a civilian. I would possibly increase her age a bit. 20 is an rather young age for someone to be a world famous reporter. I mean I'd say maybe you could get that status in your mid to later twenties if you're lucky, more probably in your thirties (forties would probably do it but you'd lose your young girl charm normally). So I'd say push the age up a tad, unless you have some reasonable excuse as to why her "years" at a local newspaper connected her to a world-wide-web of writer. But I suppose the kids in Japan are trained to be super children, given the number of times Kids saved the world with beyblade, pokemon, yugioh, digimon, etc, etc, etc. No wonder why getting into a university is hard when you've all saved the world by age 16 four to eight times. All joking aside, just please watch your word usage, I think there's an odd typo in there I noticed but other than the age factor I think she's fine.

I normally am more of a stickler for the details but there's not much to be fussy about.

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@The Grey Dust Btw I still need your opinion on my character idea ^^


I'll do this tomorrow.
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Interesting a civilian. I would possibly increase her age a bit. 20 is an rather young age for someone to be a world famous reporter. I mean I'd say maybe you could get that status in your mid to later twenties if you're lucky, more probably in your thirties (forties would probably do it but you'd lose your young girl charm normally). So I'd say push the age up a tad, unless you have some reasonable excuse as to why her "years" at a local newspaper connected her to a world-wide-web of writer. But I suppose the kids in Japan are trained to be super children, given the number of times Kids saved the world with beyblade, pokemon, yugioh, digimon, etc, etc, etc. No wonder why getting into a university is hard when you've all saved the world by age 16 four to eight times. All joking aside, just please watch your word usage, I think there's an odd typo in there I noticed but other than the age factor I think she's fine.

I normally am more of a stickler for the details but there's not much to be fussy about.


I think you got me wrong here, she WANTS to become a world famous reporter, she is far from becoming one. And in my experiance, 5 years is more than enough to get many connections( I did the same with my job and such)

And it is very possible that I have a weird typo to my writing, english is not my native language. If there are words I misspelled or something like that PM me so I can improve. ( right now I use google translate for the words I don't know)
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@Ojo chan 42 I approve. I feel that her age is ok as long as she wants to be a world famous reporter. I will put your CS into the Chars tab. You may post.
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Meh. Seems like another generic hitman 28 to me. I suppose it's fine but at the end of the day its just another guy running around with a gun for hire. Or at least his lack of backstory tells me that.
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