@Jangel13 So, I've got a few comments to make here. Here we go.
Firstly, on your character's name: Shiba Akabane strikes me as a distinctly Asian name. We're playing in a very focused setting wherein the typical name has a very Celtic sound, especially Irish, potentially with Norse or Germanic influence. Given that, I'd recommend searching for a more Celtic name for your character. I made someone else change their name already, note, so you're not the first. A common theme helps tie the story together.
Secondly, your character's father wouldn't be killed for not being able to catch enough fish, nor would he be forced to swear an oath to catch <X> fish. Any clan that acted so arbitrarily wouldn't last long; the gods themselves would see it punished, and the gods are
very real and
very active in this setting.
I'd think of something a bit more realistic. Maybe your character's father drowned at sea / in a river while fishing on a stormy day because the clan sorely needed food. It could've been a bad year, and maybe he was pressured into risking himself to catch more fish, or maybe he got drunk and decided to Hell with all this weather, it's time to fish. Etc. He also could've been wrongfully accused of stealing or some other crime, and in an extreme case that could've gotten him killed.
Basically, you can have your character's father being bullied, but his father wouldn't have been killed for not catching enough fish... unless the people that were doing that were just scumbags. And if they were scumbags, they'd be executed for murder, especially for murdering someone whose family has been part of the clan since FOREVER.
Also note that a tribe and a clan are VERY different things. So, a clan is what we have: Clan Aonghus. But a tribe is a collection of clans that have unified, and when tribes unify they can create a kingdom. We are a clan, not a tribe.
Your clan and personal goals are perfectly fine. I'd move this part from Personal Goals to Clan Goals, however:
Shiba has few goals but he has high hopes for his tribe. Shiba plans to have his tribe to have permanent place to stay and live.
Don't forget to change your goals to reflect your change in history, by the way.
Your traits are fine. If possible, I'd consider taking a look at what others have. You'll find we already have a few characters who are good in a fight, but 3/8 characters being warriors is something that's fine.
Lastly, I'm going to wager you're relatively new to roleplay? If so,
that is fine. I'm okay with helping folks learn the ropes. But I'd pay attention to your punctuation - you could use more commas - and I'd definitely read how others in this thread write when we start making our IC posts.
Anyway, you're not accepted just yet, but I'm not flat-out denying you, either. I'd like you to go back and make some changes.
Also, @Everyone Else: I'll be starting the roleplay FO REAL briefly. I just finished the part about Sacred Time and am typing out your random event for the week.
This is Seòras he stands at 5'11 taller then most he also has jade green eyes that pierce into your soul his hair is unkempt giving him a lazy look to him.
