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@ProPro Let me know when you're better so that I can maybe jump in and make a villian "general" with some good ol' War and Peace history. ;D

Also hi to everyone. I know absolutely nothing of Power Rangers beyond the original Mighty Morphin' variant and even then I haven't watched it in about 10-ish+ years. I was considering making a PR but figured it'd be pretty rubbish of me to swoop in out of no where when I can see how much work you've all been putting in. Therefore I am considering, and I really have to stress the considering @ProPro, making one of the bad guys because what use is there in having PRs without all of their foes, eh? ;D

Anyway... even if I decide not to make anything or even just don't like what I come up with, I'll probably be floating around reading all your stuff, keeping up with the story and judging you all silently from the background. :D
And I don't mean nastily judging, more a case of enjoyment judging. As well as whispering in @ProPro's ear now and again. But yeah, nice to meet you all and I hope you all have fun with this. :D
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@Charnobylisk That's a very unexpected, but pleasant surprise. I'd be glad to have you. :)

For everyone else, I'm still not healthy yet, but I am feeling much better, so I'll be rereading some of these CS's and giving my judgment/advice periodically throughout the day.
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@Charnobylisk nice to meet you too :)

@ProPro I volunteer for tribute. Let Michael be the first that you ravage lol.
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@RennyWell, you were the first one to have their full CS, sample and all, so you going first is pretty fair.
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@Renny I like Michael, you clearly put a good deal of thought into him. Just two things. 1) His age and the timeline don't quite match up. He's 20 and Galatec has been aroun 10 years, but it looks like you're implying they were around when he was 6. It's not entirely clear, so I recommend reworking that segment of history. 2) In regards to your RP example, remember to keep things PG or PG-13.


Once that bit of messy timeline is all fixed up, I'd say we've officially got our Red Ranger. I will wait until tomorrow morning before officially declaring him approved juuuuust in case someone else hasn't posted a CS yet, but barring that you've got the job.
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@ProProMe next!

Putting these in one place for the sake of convinience




Sorry for any grammatical errors!
PS: If ya notice, my fight scene's location is in homage to a certain movie I recently stated still enjoying...
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@Renny I like Michael, you clearly put a good deal of thought into him. Just two things. 1) His age and the timeline don't quite match up. He's 20 and Galatec has been aroun 10 years, but it looks like you're implying they were around when he was 6. It's not entirely clear, so I recommend reworking that segment of history. 2) In regards to your RP example, remember to keep things PG or PG-13.


Once that bit of messy timeline is all fixed up, I'd say we've officially got our Red Ranger. I will wait until tomorrow morning before officially declaring him approved juuuuust in case someone else hasn't posted a CS yet, but barring that you've got the job.


Lol I'll clear these small problems up in a jiffy

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Uhh.. I feel like this is going to go bad, but here is my sample.





Went ahead and put them together to make it easier.
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I like how we think similarly but don't copy each other.

“Four targets left, their intelligence is low but I knew that already, Remember, even in my ranger suit, I'm not a tank, I'll need to make use of their weak mindedness and avoid a head on confrontation.”

They closed in quickly.

“Dodge, don't block!” He dashed backwards to avoid an incoming punch from the next Githkin to close the distance, firing twice into its chest before splitting into two.


*Remember what mentor said. I'm faster than they are and should dodge not block.* With that advice in mind Ollie bob and weaved around the Githkin working like a boxer against a tougher opponent.


We both use the holographic projection for the same base purpose but we go about it differently in our execution. I can clearly see the talent of a boxer in your writing. I enjoyed seeing your character's fighting style and comparing our different executions of the same ability.


He dashed backwards to avoid an incoming punch from the next Githkin to close the distance, firing twice into its chest before splitting into two.

“Now, misdirection!”


Both greens dashed forward to strike, one going airborne to come down on the alien soldier with a superman punch. The soldier held up its hands to block but felt nothing when the airborne ranger dispersed into light and it was instead faced with a round of laser fire-


*Crap. There are too many of them. Gotta distract 'em.* Suddenly four other green rangers appeared to distract the Githkin. The Githkin didn't know which one to attack so they swung wildly at all of them making it even easier for Ollie to avoid the hits.


Very good, there were one or two grammatical errors but this is the casual section so I don't think it'll be a huge problem down the line.

I can't wait to see who gets the projector and who gets the shield!
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@Kouki You know who Jonah really reminds me of with his life motto?


Overall I like him, but I cannot give any verdicts unless I have a complete CS. The ranger section will have to be filled out. If you're ok with being either blue or green, that's fine, but I'll need the ranger section done once for each color you're applying for. That said, fantastic job thus far.

Edit: I just noticed that I missed this a while back.
@ProPro So, how do Githkins die? I mean, do they explode into lights like other cannon fodder and then conveniently fall off screen?


They melt. Like, they turn into protein goo and wash away.
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@ProProDone




So yeah, they're the exact same just with different powers.
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@Stern Algorithm Clementine is looking really good. Let's make sure that we get her blaster and RP sample done real soon.
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@Kouki Thanks. I was really worried when reading your example because of how the fight in my head was similar to yours. Also where were the errors. I want to fix them now that I know they exist.
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They melt. Like, they turn into protein goo and wash away.


......So, let me get this right...

These minions are stronger than average, beat us up in normal mode, are still tough in ranger mode and turn to ooz when destroyed....

I think some one might like the Power Rangers movie more than I do.

@alexfangtalon

Did they actually suspect him to be one of the rangers.
This should end in a question mark, not a period.

*Oh crap. What happened*.
Again, question mark, not period.

"Hey, are you alright."
Once more, the ole question mark should go here....because it's a question..

How can humanity live like this."
That question mark still not makin an appearance...

They didn't hurt you did they."

AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
*flips table*

Ya know what, go through your story and please check your punctuation.....just...check your punctuation..

Other than that, you have-

"Crap," Ollie knelled down beside the man while making sure no Githkin were watching,
“knelt” not “knelled “

And there are a few others, maybe you wanna skim over it yourself. It's small things but it's enough small things that they add up.
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@Wade Wilson @Kouki Both of you volunteered to draw a visual representation of the morphers, but I haven't heard back from either of you on that front. How are things coming?
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Nothing I've done looks good. I'm better at people (points to his avatar) than miscellaneous items. I think you should rely on @Wade Wilson for this one.
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wow a lot of people are posting their CS
very interesting
hmm yes

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Might be helpful to actually talk to people instead of just posting a character sheet... Ugh, yeah, I want blue, blue is a cool color. I like magic cards.
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@TorikRedguard Hi Tommy!

So guys, this is my friend I said was going to go for the blue ranger as well. We now officially have competition! May the best man.... win!
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