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I will go through everyone's suggested spirits, so you don't have to get it right or perfect on the first try. Just go crazy, and then I'll balance things for you.


Basically go crazy until Prisk says no
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@Prisk my character is done. The character sheet on page 2 has been updated. If I forgot any corrections you asked me to make, please let me know!

I went ahead and wrote out some lore about the Fanatics. If you want me to remove them from the CS, let me know too! I don't want to step on any toes are anything.

EDIT: If Morgan has a burn mark, should I mention it in the CS or shall I leave that for IC?
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Here is my character. *wipes brow* phew, took a bit.

But @Prisk I am willing to talk about magic. I had an idea for one more spell to add, but if you feel this is too much, then I am happy regardless with how she turned out.
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Also bonus points to anyone who gets the reference in my sheet.
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@FantasyChic Oh my god. Our characters are kind of polar opposites personality wise. This is going to be so much fun haha!
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@Anima Yeah I noticed that. It's almost like dark and light. Should prove for some hilarious situations
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Updated Jack's Warfare section, as well as fixed a minor part of his backstory so that five year olds wouldn't be running around hospitals shoving magic hands in people's faces.
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@FantasyChic That and some tension! Kind of like a Lightning-Caius dynamic haha!

@Vox I'm imagining that right now. I'm very amused.
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@Anima It would have brightened somebody's day at least
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EDIT: because magic and bright magical effects and yeah
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All finished with Subira. Added to her Ideology and fixed up her Warfare section -- still unsure if I want to add to her magical abilities though, probably not. I've also finished the information for Auzoa, and took the map and marked the specified areas: Isari, Segora, Auzoa, Western Isles, and Eastern Isles. To save time I didn't name the Isles, I didn't really see the importance too but I can give them names if you'd like. Let me know what you think @Prisk. I'm open to any changes, or criticism.

EDIT: Realized I didn't add the image of the map, so here we go.
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Intriguing backstory! Dramatic and mysterious. It looks very deliberate for some nice sub-plot action. The headmaster of the Oakridge, Cid Dysely, will be a global non-player character that everyone can control. He is a veteran of the breakout war with the Mordrem. Perhaps he would know a thing or two about your character’s family issues. Just a suggestion, if you want it!

Could you put minus (-) signs on the exotic effects? Curse, Poison, and Terror, so that we know that it is the enemy suffering them.

Other than that, everything looks good. Please add Ezra to the character tab. You can add your secondary character as well, so you can work from there.

@Anima
That prayer was cool. It is a strong character concept, so I think it will work out great for everyone. The theme was nice, too.

Okay, so, the second gif—could you put it a centered? I think it would make the sheet more stylish.

Also, could you reformat the spirits in the same fashion as seen in the character tab? Like, [elemental damage type] [exotic effect] and so on. ‘Impieta’, for example, would have the Pain, Imperil, and Poison exotic effects. ‘Nefara’ should probably make Morganna immune to the Fire element. We could call such an exotic effect ‘Blaze’.

Other than that, things look good. Where on the map would you like for Petragrad to be?

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Love the first gif! That expressing is just, gah, so many things at once. I think you did well here. I have always liked the ‘sunshine’ concept for characters in roleplays. It seems rather rare at times.

Anyway, you can expand on the Ideology section whenever you feel like it, as it is rather thin at this time. But I recommend that you do this as we go, so don’t force it right now.

The spirits are fine as they are, and you can add another one if you want. However, could you put the color of the elements to the standard of the character sheet? This one: d8996d. And put minus (-) signs on the negative exotic effects: Imperil, Poison, Blind, and Curse.

Other than that, all good! Add it to the character tab. I’m not sure if I picked up on that reference, though. But I am totally stupid, so that is no surprise.

@Vox
Okay, cool. You can replace Resilience with Lancet, as they do the same thing.

@Redrum
Wow, all that is impressive. I will get back to you about Auzoa in a private message instead of here, whenever I get to it on my to-do list.

You can add Subira to the character tab. And thanks for the map stuff!

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@Prisk I assumed you'd ping the casual int check when you started up the OC >:3

Anywhoo, I'm here now, I'll take a quick look at what's been discussed then submit my CS.

EDIT: Full disclosure it's gonna be Thael again :p
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Oh, damn. I totally forgot about that. I'm sorry! I was sort of wondering where you were, but good thing you found your way here. Looking forward to seeing Thael again.
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@Prisk Cool. I'm going to keep on building upon the Fanatics. I'll definitely send things your way before I implement any of it. Or if I should. I don't know what you have planned for them, so I don't want to overstep or anything.

Centered!

I went back and revamped everything. Sorry!

I don't know how to exactly pinpoint Petragrad, but I envisioned the city-state to be above northern most tip of the mountain ridges on Anatolia's eastern side. Just outside the dark zone boundary. It's that crescent moon-like landmark near the sea within the Dark Zone.
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Okay, I have updated the map with new locations. Let me know if and how I should move them.

@Anima
Fanatics are just a faction at this point with no particular influence on the main plot. You know, 'mobs' to kill at your leisure.

Okay, awesome. There is no rush, so take your time with the formatting and such.
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@Prisk oh I meant backstory and lore haha! That's all.

Everything is revamped and good to go for my character, if you could give it another look?
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@Anima
The dots for date of birth and height are the default color. Since you changed everything else to a custom color, these should be changed as well. The same goes for the aspekts, you could change them to the new color.

Put a minus (-) sign on the negative exotic effects and a plus (+) sign on the positive one. It basically tells me who that it is applied to: you (+) or the enemy (-).

Other than that, all good! Add to the character tab. Really cute model in the gifs, by the way. I like her a lot!
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@Prisk Changes have been made! I'll let you do one more check through just to make sure I didn't leave anything out or if you want something changed.

And thanks! Ksenia Solo is bae <3!
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No one gets my reference huh? Ah well, I assumed the collective nerd-verse we had here might have, but it's fine. I'll fix the sheet and add her to Characters.
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Don't need parentheses around the -/+ signs. Good to go.

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What was the reference?! Now I'm dying to know.
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