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This is my second profile on here, and I have been Play-By-Post RPing for about nine years now. I do my best to see every RP to the end or at least let my character come to his/her own dramatic conclusion when I feel like signing off. Just like novel writing in real life, I tend to find myself on long hiatuses. Since writing is a great way to work out your brain, I try stay engaged as much as possible.

My favorite genres include futuristic worlds, mysteries, and super powers. Any mixture of these three elements will peek my interest.

Most Recent Posts

@Lord Orgasmo@Suneli

Suneli, I would like to wait one more day before I reply again. I want Lord O to have a chance to catch up. Monica White, still needs to find the man that came to her in the hospital.

Ideally, I will be able to reply to both of you in one post tomorrow. I would split it into two parts. You're both very close earning your first magic spells and magic items.

I have all day off work tomorrow (Wednsday). So in any case, I'll be making a post by the end of the day. I just hope that I can do a two birds one stone post.
@Aqutanama So, in my latest post, I brought us to two days later, where your character enters an interrogation room with my character. The man sitting across from them is a high level general. I'm thinking that we can do this scene through Discord this weekend. I can do anytime Friday, or I can do Saturday as long as we start by or before 2pm EST time (11am your time).

Also, I'm thinking that Alexandria is not in the interrogation room. They only want to speak with our two main characters right now, as we both seem to be going through the same thing.

If you're itching to make a post between now and our Discord meet-up, you could catch us up to speed with what your characters have been going through these past two days that led them to this military base.
Gregory Hamilton
Host Body: Jedrick

A nearby explosion knocked Gregory and the man that was carrying him to the ground. They were out in the open, caught trying to cross an abandoned highway.

"Get up! Get up!" Yelled the second man that was bringing up their rear.

The man who was carrying Gregory scrambled to where Gregory had fallen and leaned down to pick him back up. But Gregory smacked his arms away and rose to his feet. "I can run. You lead, I'll follow."

"You're one tough son of a bitch Jed." The soldier replied from underneath his helmet. It only just then occurred to Gregory that he wasn't hearing either of the two men directly. Their voices were coming through speakers in his own helmet.

Now, with Gregory on his feet, they were able to cover ground much faster. In fact, it was surprising how fast they could run, Gregory himself included. He'd never ran this fast in his life. Nor had he ever seen anyone run this fast. They jumped over craters in the road and made it to the other side of the highway, to the relative safety of the abandoned city's buildings. But they weren't out of the danger zone yet. Occasional gun fire could still be heard. They were still being shot at.

After maybe ten more minutes of running and diving from one cover to the next, the sounds of war were starting to taper off. They had entered the well protected zone of their military base. When they reached the large metal gates, one of the other soldiers did the talking for all three of them. The voice behind the door seemed satisfied with whatever code phrase the man had said, and the doors slid open rapidly. All three of them entered with quick steps, and the door closed just as quickly as it opened.

Over the course of the next few hours, Gregory was taken to a medical building to be examined. When they ordered him to remove his equipment, he had to explain that he didn't know how. So, with the help of the doctor, they managed to manually remove the suit. A nearby mirror provided Gregory with the first sight of his new body.


Between the holes in the front and back of his armor, and the fact that he didn't recognize his own name, the doctor was puzzled. Some mysterious forces were definitely at play here. The man known as Jedrick was definitely shot through the chest and killed, and now, some person calling himself Gregory was in his place. Either this, or Jedrick had been brought back to life with a strange kind of amnesia and a fabricated alter ego. In any case, the doctors didn't know what to do...

Two days later, Gregory/Jedrick was still being kept at the base. The men that had led him to safety were obviously more than his comrades, they were his friends. Every chance they got, they tried to help Greg/Jed get his memories back, and to be honest, it was kind of working. The things they were saying did sound familiar, but at the same time, it wasn't as if he himself hadn't been there. He tried explaining to them who he (Gregory) was, but they weren't having it. They were still convinced that their friend Jedrick was still in there, and that this "Gregory" was a made up story.

After the lunch hour, on this day, Greg/Jed was taken to an empty room, similar to an interrogation room. He was led to a wooden chair on one side of a silver, metal desk. There was a man sitting across the table from him, with a cold, dispassionate look on his face. And to Greg/Jed's right there was another empty chair. The man across the table didn't say a word, as he stared into Greg's/Jed's eyes. The two stayed like this for an awkward minute or two before the door opened again.

A man with long hair and tattoos down his exposed arms was escorted through the door by two fully armored soldiers. The man's ankles and wrists were in cuffs. He was then asked to sit in the free chair, next to Greg/Jed.
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YES! I'm so sorry, I wanted to delete it but I'm having trouble figuring out how. I just finished editing it.


Yeah... You can't delete on this site, only edit. Good post thought. Let me think on it for a bit, and I'll have a post within the next 10 hours.
@Balthazar007

I am sorry I am going to pull out. I hve had some family issues and I just can't commit to this wonderful idea. I am sorry I didnt say anything sooner but I spaced on this. If things calm down enough and you will have me I will rejoin.


You're always welcome back Cercess, no worries. Take care of your business. :)
@Suneli

Did you post that IC post a little prematurely? You're going to edit in more right?
@Aqutanama

I'm going to sleep on my next post. I'll have something up by tomorrow. It will be a continuation of my character's situation. I'm thinking it will start with a dramatic run through the battle field, ending up at the military base. There, he will be examined by a medic (and other things that I haven't thought of yet).

My post will end with your character and mine meeting. I'm thinking that your character will be joining my character's military unit. That sound good?
Eden Tal


...

... She made a mental note to spend the first payment on fixing it up and getting WiFi installed as began walking, her suitcase crunching over fallen leaves behind her. She opened the door with a nostalgic smile, speaking quietly as she took in the familiar sight, ā€œIā€™m back, grandma.ā€


If the shrine were larger and not made of wood, Eden surely would have heard an echo. As it was however, she was greeted by nothing more than silence. And so, after an appropriate moment of silence, she continued her way into the shrine to get her things settled.

It was a dull and lonely first night, as Eden had nothing else to do than wipe dust off old furniture and sweep up. She was getting ready for bed when the distant sound of thunder began to rumble the small shack. Would the shrine hold up if it rained hard? She had to wonder.

But strangely enough, the rain never came. Even as the sound of thunder and flashes of lightning become more frequent and intense, not a single drop fell from the sky. Then, with one final crash and blinding flash, it all stopped. Naturally, Eden went out to the front door of the shrine to look, to make sure everything outside was okay. Luckily, all seemed well. Besides a few small tree limbs that had fallen in the wind, there wasn't much damage to be seen, not in the dark of night at least. Most importantly, there were no wildfires due to lightning strikes and no rain.

As Eden walked back into the shrine, a soft glow caught her eye, a glow that wasn't there before she stepped outside. It was her grandmother. She stood in the corner of the main sitting area. A pale-gold light emanated from her body, as she wore the same robes that Eden had last remembered her in. She wasn't see through like some sort of ghost; she was solid, unmistakably there.

"Welcome back, little one." 'Little one', that was something Eden hadn't heard in a while. It was what her grandmother had always called her, even after she'd outgrown the small woman.
Wow, that was long. It took about ten minutes to read. So in your mind, why are they taking him to a military base? Or were you just wanting to leave that up to my interpretation?
Gregory Hamilton
Host Body: Jedrick


Gregory didn't have access to lowest levels of the Q.U.I.P. facility. If he did, maybe things wouldn't have went wrong. A young genius, by anyone's standards, he should have been a part of the delicate research they were doing. Unfortunately for him and everyone in the surrounding two block radius, he wasn't. Politics had gotten in the way. He wasn't there when they were building the machine. If he was, it would have been built right... probably. And he sure wasn't there on this day, the day they decided to turn it on. If he was, he would have told them not to. It wasn't ready.

A blinding flash of light was the last thing he remembered.

When he came to, he was far from New York City. At least, he hoped he wasn't in New York City. Laying on his back, he watched the world around him. He could hear explosions and gunfire. Smoke rose over the tops of run down buildings, and dark clouds loomed overhead, blocking out a desperate sun. In his mouth, he could taste blood.

"He's alive!" a voice called out. A moment later, a man fell to his knees beside Gregory. The man was dressed in form fitting, top-grade military armor, a large gun swung over his back. He snapped his fingers in front of Gregory's face. "Jed! Jedrick! Can you hear me?"

"Jedrick?" Gregory mumbled, immediately coughing up blood. As his head jerked, he caught glimpses of his own body armor below. It was much like the other man's armor, but there was a large hole in the chest plate. Through this hole was bare skin and fresh blood.

"Oh shit!" A third voice said, just before another soldier took a knee to Gregory's left, opposite of the first. "How is he alive? He was hit by an armor piercer!"

"I don't know," said the first soldier. "but we need to get him back to base. You carry his gear, I'll carry him."

What happened next was a blur. He was thrown over the first soldier's shoulders, with almost no effort, fireman style. Then, they ran, the second soldier ran just behind laying cover fire as they raced from building to building. Gregory could hardly believe what was happening. This has to be a dream. he told to himself repeatedly.

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