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Current Harambant, who once went by Harambe, now only recalled in light of what followed.
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Less dedication. Weakness. Downtime could be limited. Inability to control her troops. Unacceptable weakness. Case in point: she did not properly punish the soldier who knocked into her.

415633-983223-17-Zhatka would be sharing a regiment with such weakness. Part of the command squad. He would not be fighting alongside his fellows in the foreseeable future.

How infuriating.

'...yes, Sir.' Hesitation. Weakness. The officer gave an order. 415633-983223-17-Zhatka saluted again, then began walking away as dismissed, only to stop as he realised he was being observed. He turned his head to stare back at the soldier, his mask shifting above his collar. Small. Weak. Inappropriate facial expression. Poorly fitted armour. Should not have been inducted into her regiment. Should not have been inducted into this regiment.

'Practice your drills, soldier,' he insisted, before she made her effort to leave. Given the other soldier wanted the officer's attention, and as 415633-983223-17-Zhatka had been dismissed already, he proceeded to take his own leave, returning to his quarters promptly. 415633-983223-17-Zhatka would have issues practicing with such noise in the area. In which case, he would make do with a somewhat simpler drill. He drew his bayonet, and began.
Yeah, I'm interested. Not sure what I'd go with yet, but I'll consider what my options are.
@CleanBreeze Nah, that'll probably work. Zhatka will strongly dislike everybody who isn't as disciplined as him anyway, so it's probably easy to see him as a rival figure.
@Lady Selune@Eisenhorn

Near the end of the ration pack, 415633-983223-17-Zhatka found it increasingly difficult to continue eating, as the soldiers in the area made an increasing ruckus. Unprofessional. He'd wanted to eat silently. Even seated in a distant hab unit, the celebrations drilled into his ears like chainswords. They had been offered an official celebration already. They did not need to celebrate further. They did not need to celebrate at all.

He persisted, and eventually consumed the full ration pack, dessert pill included. The waste was discarded, the mask was replaced. He had intended to practice bayonet drills. He could not do so under such circumstances. 415633-983223-17-Zhatka proceeded out toward the front of the headquarters, where the noise was clearly originating. He strongly detested it. He had it in mind to try and put a stop to it, in fact. Though, given how weak the Guardsmen of other regiments were, it was possible they wouldn't. Inability to follow orders. Insubordinate.

If only that were so. The officers were likely as weak as the front line. No such weakness would be allowed in the Death Korps. No others of the 382nd Siege Regiment of Krieg were present. This was a blessing. Not tempted by such weakness. And yet, it showed their own inability to demand the proper routine of others. Surely they found it bothersome too?

The question did not need asking. Only results needed to be obtained. Shortly, he encountered a Commissar, speaking with another soldier. Physically strong. Poor posture. Surely being berated for the latter. Salvaging of carapace armour peformed. Unacceptable. Theft of materiel. Loose caparace armour ought to be returned to higher authorities. Why had he not been shot? He began to approach, then recognised that he had been misled by the female soldier's uniform - this was a member of the Mordian Iron Guard. But, he further recognised as he moved around them, an officer in turn. High-ranking. Perfect. She, too, must be on her way to put a stop to matters. Adopting a proper ready stance, he waited until he was given permission to speak, then stated his case with a firm salute, citing his identification rapidly to ensure time was not wasted on pleasantries:

'Sir, Grenadier 415633-983223-17-Zhatka 382nd Siege Regiment of Krieg, Sir. The celebratory proceedings outside are excessive. They are unnecessary. They are interfering with proper combat drills. Requesting they be brought to an end, Sir.'

That should be convincing. Though she would not need convincing to start with, if she were as disciplined as he hoped.
335729-44456-103-Egida died in the fighting on Vernum Primus. Her bayonet and body alike were cleaved in twain by the choppa in the Ork's hand. 415633-983223-17-Zhatka could not respond. His fight remained before him - another alien, another enemy of the Imperium, who he stabbed and stabbed and stabbed. The Ork that killed 335729-44456-103-Egida was itself slain just before 415633-983223-17-Zhatka killed his own. How fitting.

And the fight continued.




415633-983223-17-Zhatka stood to full attention. His regiment was depleted - few soldiers remained, of the Grenadiers only himself and one other. He did not mourn them. Those soldiers had died fittingly: sacrificing their lives for the Imperium, to help cleanse the stain of Krieg's failure just a little more, before their equipment was collected for redistribution later. They were brave - as brave as all Guardsmen ought to be.

To be forced to stand in line and accept trinkets marking his bravery, attached to his carapace armour where they would fit, was therefore galling. This was entirely a waste of time. Inefficient, unnecessary, save that other Imperial Guardsmen were lesser in their bravery, and saw such acts as somehow exceptional. They should not be. If they weren't, the Imperium would never have trouble defeating its foes. Triple Skull, to indicate large losses within a regiment. This wasn't needed. Other medals, indicating other achievements. Unnecessary. He would discard it all later.

At least they were not chastised by being made to live on this world, like other, lesser regiments. That would be a deathly insult. The General-Militant seemed the type to insult them that way, pathetically, spinelessly conciliatory as he was, but he had the sense not to. Instead, they would be redirected to the headquarters for the Departmento Munitorum - to fight again, and hopefully to die in a way that was suitable. 415633-983223-17-Zhatka doubted this battle would lead to a promotion to Watchmaster. He rather doubted he'd want it to.




As soon as it was plausible to assume they weren't being monitored, 415633-983223-17-Zhatka removed the medals planted on his chest with great haste, placing them in the lowest recesses of his equipment pack with the intent of forgetting they existed. At least none had been pinned through his breastcoat; that would have rendered it functionally unusable. It was designed to seal out chemical weapons. It could not do so with holes puncturing its surface. At best, it would have required a renewed course of treatment as a result - difficult, when no suitable facilities to perform such treatments presented themselves. Under normal circumstances, it would be irrelevant.

These were not normal circumstances.

415633-983223-17-Zhatka's thoughts returned to 335729-44456-103-Egida as he acquired a ration pack to consume. Other Guardsmen did not come to him. This was fine. He'd likely have shared his ration pack with her if she were still alive. She would have shared hers in kind. She always enjoyed the chocolate dessert pills. He, however, found the plastic somewhat stuck to his- his train of thought cut off as he realised where it was leading. No. That was the wrong way of thinking. She died heroically. That was enough.

He ate his ration pack silently, pondering the beneficience of the God-Emperor, that He gave Krieg the opportunity to alleviate their sins by dying in his name at all. Truly, any being less divine would have insisted upon their destruction outright. 415633-983223-17-Zhatka could only hope the next battle he was sent to would offer more opportunities for atonement.
@BCTheEntity It does look good so far! One note, though, Mutations aren't really seen as weird or disgusting in MHA (at least, as far as we know), so unless Mark was surrounded only by really mean people, I doubt he'd be put down for his Quirk so much.


Duly noted. My logic there was two-fold: first, kids are cruel, and I feel most would almost certainly avoid the "weirdo fly boy" on the playground unless they were Mutants in a similar-ish vein. Second, whether or not they're actively seen as disturbing, it's my understanding that Mutant-type Quirks are not generally held in as high an esteem as Emitters or Transformers, in kind of the same way as a lot of cultural and racial demographics IRL - that is to say, they're legally protected, but are not socially accepted by all and sundry, which could in turn have been taken as part of the reason Mark's score was kept at a level that'd leave him in the Bottom Ten, i.e. Mutaphobic judge.
Alright, just have the Personality and History to fill in for Mark at this stage. These will have to come tomorrow, but I have high hopes that he'll be taken as a pretty good character thus far.
@ERode Is that right? It was my understanding that quirks largely tended to manifest at some time after birth, including mutant-types.

I'm also realising that a fly person is going to be... diiiifficult to find an image for. Any assistance would be appreciated, folks.
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